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starryeyedkitten [2007-02-21 08:55:33 +0000 UTC]
The artwork is not bad [although the breasts are disproportionately large, unless you're purposely going for a bimbo, fall-on-my-face-because-my-breasts-are-so-large look], but I don't know if you're kidding or trying to be silly with the description. I had no idea it was possible for people to take such a Sue-like character so honestly.
There are a lot of discrepancies in the character background. First of all, if she is Slytherin's daughter, and married to a Weasley, how is her last name Malfoy, and why would she build the Malfoy Manor if her last name, or at least some part of her heritage, was closely tied with the Malfoys?
Did she just make up the name 'Malfoy' and decide to take it on even though her last name by blood was Slytherin and her last name by marriage was Weasley?
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LadyMayrid In reply to starryeyedkitten [2007-03-02 05:09:15 +0000 UTC]
You raise some good questions. Let me see if i can answer some of them. First off the reason why her breats are so large is the fact that she's wearing a medevil type dress with a boned bodice that presses the chest flat therefor making the breats of any female push upwards seemingly larger then life.
As far as her background is concerned. She and her cousin Godera (Gryffindore's daughter) were not allowed to attend hogwarts like their brothers. Lucius trained herself and when she 18 her father found out. Slytherin was trying to protect her but like most children she didn't quite see it that way so she ran away. She chose the name malfoy because for a short time she was taken in by a completly muggle family named Mallfoye, a french family that found her wandering alone and took her in. She renamed herself in their honnor. She grew and prospered with her new name; i.e. she built the mannor and so forth. But when the war of the soul turned for the worst ans her father was cast out of Hogwarts she came back.
Once back in court she fell in love with Draco Weasley and later married him. She was murdered when she was 31, her youngest son William witnessed the murder. With his wife dead Draco Weasley was lost. His youngest son took over the weasley family while his eldest took his mother's place. If you want more detailes you can read the story on ff.net I'll let you know when it gets updated.
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tipping-teapots In reply to LadyMayrid [2007-07-31 22:00:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, but I have to agree with ~starryeyedkitten. She is very Mary-Sueish. One, for her cousin to be Godric's daughter, Godric and Salazar would have to be brothers and therefore have the same last name (unless their mother had children by two men). Even if she did change her name, she could not be the first Malfoy because the name was passed on. Women do not usually pass their last names on to their sons, but give their husband's names. In this case, Weasley. No matter how much they liked or disliked their father, it is unlikely that any of the children would take up their mother's name.
Anyway, I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful.
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LadyMayrid In reply to tipping-teapots [2007-08-04 01:22:50 +0000 UTC]
In my story four generations before Godric and Salazar came about Slytherin and Gryffindore families were very close friends. Then the Gryffindore's breed a daughter and no son while Slytherin had two. Based on thier friendship, Gryffindore asked on Slytherin to give them a son to raise. Naturaly Slytherin refused. the next two generations fought back and fourth (the argument being that their friendship was broken) until the Gryffinores breed a son and a daughter and the Slytherins did likewise. Lady Gryffindore married Lord Slytherin and Lady Slytherin married Lord Gryffindore. With the families fused, the fued creased. of the marraiges two sons were first born, Godric and Salazar. Salazar had a sister, she married Godric. I realize this is complicated but trust me when i saw this makes more since then half the other stuff written about G&S. It makes more since if you read the story.
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tipping-teapots In reply to LadyMayrid [2007-07-31 22:00:00 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, but I have to agree with ~starryeyedkitten. She is very Mary-Sueish. One, for her cousin to be Godric's daughter, Godric and Salazar would have to be brothers and therefore have the same last name (unless their mother had children by two men). Even if she did change her name, she could not be the first Malfoy because the name was passed on. Women do not usually pass their last names on to their sons, but give their husband's names. In this case, Weasley. No matter how much they liked or disliked their father, it is unlikely that any of the children would take up their mother's name.
Anyway, I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful.
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LadyMayrid In reply to tipping-teapots [2007-08-04 01:57:42 +0000 UTC]
As for her last name not being Weasley. I based the family dinamics on actual laws the governed marraiges in pre-medeivel europe (the estimanted time of the founders being about 950). The law states that when a man of lesser birth (weasley) marries a woman of higher birth (malfoy) the husband can either take the name of his bride or keep his sir name in order to perserve the family name. In cases such as this the first son born of a match must take the father's name while the second son must take the mother's, any children after that are free to choose although all daughter's must take thir father's name. General knowledge is that a wealthy family (slytherin) often names children after areas of land they own, i.e. Lusius Alexandra Slytherin of Malfoy. Law states that when a woman of such a high house married, and if she married down, that she can either keep her families name if she is the only shild or, if she is not, assume the name for the property on which she shall live. in this case malfoy. Bare in mind that i'm a history major and i have actually given all of this rather alot of thought. i might also add that in order to understand a plot line it helps if you actully read the story. Everything is better when put in context.
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katbell [2006-08-12 00:08:06 +0000 UTC]
love her hair! marvelous!!!
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