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ladynight — SOS
Published: 2006-04-08 01:27:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Hear me!Screams echo…
A voice in anguish.
Please, please come.
Someone, anyone?
Hear my tortured pleas.
Come and save me.
The pain keeps coming…
My voice deafens,
My own ears.
Savage in desire,
For an end.
Hear me cry out!
As the pain,
Forces me to my knees.
Please save me!
Pain is all there is.
It steals the world from me…
Blinded to everything.
Save the red haze all around.
Hear me someone.
The screams that echo…
In my mind.
Save this tortured soul.
As I sit here quietly.
Recognize that there is a problem!
See that I am trapped…
Within the cell of my mind.
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Comments: 1
I like this, but I'd be tempted to make a small change.
Excluding the exclamation marks would possibly add further gravitas to the lines that precede them.
Otherwise, I really like this piece.
-Ben
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