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The notes build up deep within you

burning at your core

snaking through your veins until your skin hums red-hot with fire.


They say the sun is hottest

when you are just barely out of reach.

It is there you shall ignite.



But if I managed

to slip past your blistering corona

past the halo of light that surrounds you -

and stroke your scorching surface

would I find the right

to burn with you?


And maybe

I could learn to play  you

like the instrument you are.

Helios, god of the sun,

your surface shudders with sound,

melodious vibrations

unfit for such ears as mine.

Yet still I wonder what you would sound like

if my hands would not sear to touch you

when I reached for your strings, your keys? 


But love, you've never needed me, in order to sing.


You're a blazing sun and 

I'm a winter rain. 

But still your body fits mine 

like a missing puzzle piece, 

even if the picture you make 

is of string theory,

every strand infinitesimal, but together,

a cosmic symphony.

and my image is of love-letters, 

edges curled like petals,

weeping dew.


My rain could never quench you

but still I long to let your touch 

evaporate my tears to nothing.


Gravity is not the earth pulling us down toward it,

but space, pushing us away.


Yet I too am made of dead stars;

the dust of ancient suns

lifts from my skin and glitters

in the light that shines about you.

And in that dust could you find proof

that my skin and yours could be one?


Look close and you will see:

my double-helix 

encoded cryptic verses, whispering:

once, my essence dwelt in distant stars.


And I could be the thrumming heartbeat ,

to keep black holes from your light.



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Comments: 22

UntamedUnwanted [2013-08-09 16:55:34 +0000 UTC]

This gorgeous work was featured here: untamedunwanted.deviantart.com…

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TheJoanaPADJ [2013-05-24 16:57:12 +0000 UTC]

I just featured this lovely work here: [link]

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to TheJoanaPADJ [2013-05-25 02:54:54 +0000 UTC]

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Sammur-amat [2013-04-07 15:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to Sammur-amat [2013-05-27 22:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sammur-amat In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2013-05-30 11:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome!

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Meggie272 [2013-03-28 14:07:05 +0000 UTC]

This is just really, really beautiful. I love the line: once my essence dwelt in distant stars. My god, that's powerful.

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Heather-Chrysalis [2013-03-27 16:54:46 +0000 UTC]

I really loved your poem and your comments too! The poem was very tenderly told and I felt a fragile feeling in it too. I love how you weave feeling into your imagery.

I heard about that we are all comprised of Stardust...but I didn't know that the Earth was born from the debris of dead stars...

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PennedinWhite [2013-03-24 13:48:48 +0000 UTC]

This beautiful in both its complexity and simplicity. It is mesmerizing like the star and expansive universe itself. Wonderful!

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to PennedinWhite [2013-04-26 01:39:43 +0000 UTC]

You're so kind. Thank you.

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PennedinWhite In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2013-04-26 01:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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Exnihilo-nihil [2013-03-23 07:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Hi! your great piece is featured here [link]

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to Exnihilo-nihil [2013-04-26 01:20:16 +0000 UTC]

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dreamsinstatic [2013-03-23 00:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features .

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to dreamsinstatic [2013-03-24 01:08:38 +0000 UTC]

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Bansini [2013-03-20 06:59:17 +0000 UTC]

This is just so perfect! I love how you have merged all of those facts into the poem. Its just so beautiful!

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to Bansini [2013-03-24 01:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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1nkl1ng [2013-03-20 05:18:39 +0000 UTC]

"once my essence dwelt in distant stars."

<3 Wow. Just wow.

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to 1nkl1ng [2013-03-20 06:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Exnihilo-nihil [2013-03-20 00:57:27 +0000 UTC]

magnifique

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to Exnihilo-nihil [2013-03-20 01:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you!

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Exnihilo-nihil In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2013-03-20 01:09:52 +0000 UTC]

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