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LadyPep — The Transformation

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Published: 2017-11-06 15:21:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2285; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 2
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Haddock was enjoying a quiet evening in the sea-green sitting room that had recently been aired out when there was a knock at the double doors.  He sighed and lowered his book.

“Yes?”

The door opened a crack, and Evans poked his feathery-haired grey head in.

              “A Miss Marlowe to see you, Sir,” he announced.

Haddock was on his feet in an instant.

    “What?”

“The Lady says she needs to speak with you.  Most urgent news regarding—I say!  Don’t shove!  The Master didn’t permit you to enter—”

    Miss Marlowe pushed her way into the room, her face flushed from the cool outdoors and anger.  She was holding a light jacket in her arms, and her dress was muddied at the hem.  Evans was getting ready to extricate the lady from the room when Haddock held up his hand.

    “It’s all right, Evans.  Miss Marlowe and I just needed to go over a few things for clarification.  I’ll call you when you’re needed.”

    Evans was giving Miss Marlowe the politest stink eye he could permit.

“Yes, Sir,” he said, and glided out of the room, shutting the doors behind him.  Miss Marlowe cast her eyes at the door so ensure that they were truly alone, then directed her steely gaze back towards Haddock.

              “I—"

“You did receive a letter saying that your services weren’t required for today, didn’t you?” Haddock asked.  Miss Marlowe fished the letter out of a pocket in her dress and waved it in the air.

              “You mean this?  I didn’t come here to see Mrs. Haddock—I came here to see you to talk about this idiotic duel—”

    “We already talked about it,” Haddock cut in. “I still stand with what I said last.  I’m going through with it.  Now please, Miss Marlowe, go home and try to face reality.”

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Mr. Haddock walked past Isolde to open the doors.  Isolde bristled, ready to light into the insolent man.  She took a calming breath and replaced her scowl with a smile.  Stick to your design.

              “I don’t know if you realized it, Mr. Haddock—being cooped up in your stuffy manor all day—but it’s nearly dark out and I wouldn’t feel safe walking home with You Know Who out and about.”

Mr. Haddock’s back stiffened.  He swung around to face her.

              “I’ll have Weston take you back in a carriage then,” he said.  Isolde sighed and shook her head.

“I’m afraid that won’t do any good.  There’s been a horrible storm brewing all day.  A tree already fell down in the main road and has yet to be cleared.  No carriages can make it through without taking a very long bypass.”

    Mr. Haddock gave her a look that suggested she went and chopped down the tree herself.

“I…suppose you could stay here for the night.”

              Isolde beamed at the grumpy man and grabbed his hands.

“Oh, you’re too gracious, Mr. Haddock!”

    “It’s nothing,” Mr. Haddock said, pulling his hands back and crossing his arms.

“Now we’ll have time to talk about this silly duel of yours and the many reasons why you shouldn’t go through with it,” Isolde said, jabbing her finger at him.  Mr. Haddock rolled his eyes.

              “Please.  You’re just wasting your breath, Miss Marlowe.  I already told you—I’ve made up my mind.”

    “You men and your pride!”

“As I recall, he insulted you too!  Or did you forget that?”

              “I remember it perfectly,” Isolde replied evenly. “I have to put up with busybodies muddying my name, sermons on chastity and the sins of loose women from a reverend who says I deserve this treatment, and my own mother crying about how she failed to raise a respectable daughter.  Meanwhile, you simply hole yourself up in this prison of yours and wait out the storm because no one would dare say anything vile to your face!  You’re the rich recluse who descends from his castle with generous gifts of money at the holidays to pacify the people and make sure they respect your name!  If you go through with this, it will only make people think that everything Sir Drexel has been saying is true!”

              Isolde’s heart was racing.  She was breathing heavily.  Mr. Haddock was staring at her.

              “I didn’t realize—didn’t think—"

One of the doors opened and Evans’s head made another appearance.

              “Is everything all right, Master Haddock?  I heard raised voices.”

Mr. Haddock was still staring at Isolde.  Let that sink in.  Evans looked from one to the other.

    “Sir…?”

Mr. Haddock blinked and rubbed the bridge of his nose.

              “Ah, it’s all right.  Everything’s fine, Evans.  Have Mrs. Evans prepare a room for Miss Marlowe.  She’ll be spending the night.”

Evans looked genuinely confused.

    “Sir?”

“Evans.”

    “Yes, Sir.”

“And take Miss Marlowe to the dining room.  I’m sure she’s hungry after her travels,” Mr. Haddock said, turning his back on them as he walked over to the mantelpiece where he had left his book.  Evans drew up to Isolde and gestured to the door.

    “This way, Miss Marlowe.”

“I want to finish this conversation, Mr. Haddock.  Now,” Isolde said, remaining immovable.

Mr. Haddock looked to the grandfather clock calmly ticking away in the corner of the room.

              “Tomorrow.  It’s getting late and I need to rest.”

“It’s only four thirty!” Isolde exclaimed, throwing her arms wide.

              “It’s late for me.”

“If you think you can avoid the inevitable by sending me to bed and running off in the morning—”

              “Miss Marlowe,” Evans broke in, “you need to eat dinner.”

He placed a hand on her arm, but she shrugged it off.

“Why are you avoiding this?” Isolde demanded.  Mr. Haddock was resting his head in his hand, looking as if he was suffering from a migraine.

              “Evans,” Mr. Haddock grunted.  The saturnine butler suddenly became animated.

“Come along, Miss Marlowe.”

              Isolde tried to prevent Evans from dragging her away by shuffling to the side, but he instead got behind her and began shoving her towards the door.

“Just what do you think you’re doing?!”

              “The Master needs to be left alone—”

Evans barely made it to the door with Isolde planting her heels into the wood floor when Mr. Haddock gave a cry and dropped to his knees.  Isolde moved to rush to his side but Evans held her back, causing her to stumble.  She looked at him in wild consternation.

              “What are you doing?!  I’m trying to help him!”

“It’s best if you stay here,” Evans said grimly, acquiescing to Isolde’s wish to stay in the room.  Mr. Haddock gave another cry.  Isolde watched in horror while Evans held her in check by the arm as Mr. Haddock clutched his sides, his forehead pressed to the floorboards, shaking uncontrollably.  And transformed right before her eyes.  Hair sprouted on exposed skin, clothing seams split, a tail grew out from the spine, his face lengthened into a canid snout: an ordinary brown wolf stood in front of the fireplace moments later.  He looked up at her with eyes that held far more intelligence than a commonplace wolf should have.  She cocked her head.

              “Mr. Haddock…?”

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I threw in an Easter Egg in panel 1 (it's Haddock's deddy).  I couldn't figure out how to settle on just one picture for this scene, so I defaulted to a comic page.  I feel like my spontaneous comic page sketches turn out to be more imaginative than when I spend lots of time working on a format.   Evans is important.  VERY important.  He's like the Alfred Pennyworth of this story.  Next week: you finally get to see what Haddock looks in wolfy form!

I also made a blogspot site for this story, so you can go and find the story so far over there!

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Comments: 26

InkyRose [2017-12-05 13:37:19 +0000 UTC]

A very dramatic extract!
I loved Isolde contriving to do a 'Jane Bennet' and stay the night!And every nobleman/hero/werewolf in aristocratic forms needs a butler like Evans!
I like how you've used the panels for this scene to enhance the drama of Haddock's transformation.
My only CC is that it's too sudden and over too quickly, I'd have him feeling agitated from the beginning of the scene, even pacing as she argues with him, it would make his readiness to let her stay the night all the more understandable.
Maybe she sneakily locks the door behind her so that he can't leave the room?
Great piece nonetheless

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LadyPep In reply to InkyRose [2017-12-09 21:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  This part was in my head from the very beginning--it was just figuring out a logical reason for Isolde having to spend the night that took a while to figure out.   Everyone needs an Evans. lol

I sketched out this as a wordless comic so I could have some visuals when writing the scene and liked it enough to use for the extract (I couldn't settle on one panel for the sum feeling of the moment!).

Hmm, I'll go back and make a few edits when I can snag the time!  Thanks for the input!  It's really helpful seeing that I'm considering turning this story into a little novella if I can finish it.

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AlexVanArsdale [2017-12-01 22:54:05 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea of an Alfred type butler for a werewolf character. This story just keeps getting cooler!
I wonder what is going through Isolde's mind right now.

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LadyPep In reply to AlexVanArsdale [2017-12-04 17:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Evans is like a cross between Alfred and Jeeves from the P.G. Wodehouse stories (at least when it comes to his phlegmatic personality).

Thank you!  She's probably thinking she should have expected this but this is still something unreal for her!

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DezsoArt [2017-11-16 17:45:26 +0000 UTC]

I love your point of Evans being the Alfred to Mr. Haddock, that's brilliant.

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LadyPep In reply to DezsoArt [2017-11-20 18:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  It hit me that the comparison was pretty accurate while writing Evans's character.

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DezsoArt In reply to LadyPep [2017-11-20 18:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Now I want Mr. Haddock to become this justice crusader of the night, like Batman except he's a werewolf. ...maybe? lol

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LadyPep In reply to DezsoArt [2017-11-30 18:30:27 +0000 UTC]

lol *Haddock runs around in dark attire and talks in a gravelly voice while fighting for justice*

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Sleyf [2017-11-14 07:52:27 +0000 UTC]

I finally got around to commenting on this after an age. I wonder why Evans is so loyal to the family
Also it is quite a precarious situation considering what Isolde is saying, I mean if he does go through with the duel it may be taken as all the gossips assume, but then again, he could turn it on Mr Drexel and say he's telling fibs and he's just defending the honour of a woman everyone has judged without even knowing the truth - shame shame shame.
Relax Evans, there's no need to push - god!
Great page for drama, with the intense underlighting and high emotion on everyone's faces.

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LadyPep In reply to Sleyf [2017-11-20 18:24:14 +0000 UTC]

No worries...it's taken me two weeks to get to responding to comments and replies...

Maybe they paid him off??  Actually the staff have lived and worked at the Haddock Estate through the generations, and a few members might be loosely related to them.

Decision, decisions!  Haddock just wants an excuse to shoot Drexel's lousy mug in the face.

Thank you!  I don't get to play around with dramatic lighting often since my comic has been pretty mellow so far--it was fun to play up the "horror flashlight look" of shadows on people's faces.

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Sleyf In reply to LadyPep [2017-12-17 08:20:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, late response from me!

Loyal staff is so hard to come by! i wonder how Drexel treats his *shudder*

Lol, when it comes to lighting faces, I'm a chicken and try to avoid dramatic horror lighting, particularly if it's from underneath or above

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LadyPep In reply to Sleyf [2017-12-19 00:27:23 +0000 UTC]

The lateness is infectious! lol

I find this particularly helpful for some basic reference on lighting the face at different angles.

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Sleyf In reply to LadyPep [2017-12-19 07:39:28 +0000 UTC]

I think I pinned something similar on Pinterest (but I seldom go back and look at pins after pinning!)

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saylem [2017-11-10 19:59:21 +0000 UTC]

dun dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNN!!! 

I love the format AND the color! This is so dramatic! 

I can't wait to see Haddock as a sweet puppy! er- I mean, werewolf monster! LOL

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LadyPep In reply to saylem [2017-11-13 15:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I had a lot of fun with the crazy shadows for this!

You're not that far off on the first guess xP

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AlexVanArsdale [2017-11-09 16:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh! This is an awesome page! The composition is super. Quite a scary werewolf transformation.

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LadyPep In reply to AlexVanArsdale [2017-11-09 18:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I think my Storyboard Nerd seeped through in this page.

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stramberrymilkyway [2017-11-07 21:48:21 +0000 UTC]

This is only getting better and better!

I loved the line about Haddock looking at her as if she cut the tree down herself. XDD That made me laugh.

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LadyPep In reply to stramberrymilkyway [2017-11-08 03:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

Heehee!  That's one of my favorite parts too.

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Khrysaetos [2017-11-06 23:00:37 +0000 UTC]

 I'M LOVIN IT 

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LadyPep In reply to Khrysaetos [2017-11-07 22:27:44 +0000 UTC]

 

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DarlingWrites [2017-11-06 18:42:47 +0000 UTC]

SWEET~~~

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LadyPep In reply to DarlingWrites [2017-11-06 21:59:55 +0000 UTC]

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Rebel-Rider [2017-11-06 16:23:19 +0000 UTC]

I'll admit to not reading this until I saw the werewolf here, then just reading this part and not the whole thing. I'm wondering what kind of werewolf he is since there are multiple kinds, namely, the kind that has complete control of their wolf self, and the kind that turns into a killing machine. I write werewolves myself, so this should be interesting.

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LadyPep In reply to Rebel-Rider [2017-11-08 03:43:15 +0000 UTC]

lol If you do decide to catch up, it shouldn't be that long of a read (unlike what Maelstrom's turning out to be!).

The lore that I made up is that there are people who let the Wolf Side take over completely, and those who have learned to balance it out with their Human Side so that they're not bloodthirsty monsters upon transformation (Sir Drexel and Haddock being the two examples for both).

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Rebel-Rider In reply to LadyPep [2017-11-08 04:13:45 +0000 UTC]

I should sometime. 

Neat. Messing with both sides. Mine are a separate species from humans, but if they bite someone, that person turns into a more traditional werewolf, and they sometimes have trouble with the wolf instinct. (But normally, they can control it, so someone who turns won't kill his family that he loves, but if he's going through a messy divorce, he might lose it and kill his wife.)

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