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Published: 2012-11-24 17:56:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 885; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 13
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My second Fanfic of Final Fantasy VII - Cloti (Cloud Strife & Tifa Lockheart)All characters belong to Square enix.
Edit I have had help of who has done any grammar / spellingmistakes, so it's all corrected now
Thanks a lot It makes a bit more sense if you read my first Cloti fanfic
First steps towards a future: [link]
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It's lovely! It seems too short though, like there should be more story. You are writing more chapters? It feels like you need too because they need to have a conclusion!! hahaha unless for some reason I haven't been able to download the whole thing...
but it's romantic and warm. I really love your portrayal of these characters. I can't wait to read more.
also, I love the picture you used!! I've seen that picture around but not on dA. Is it on dA? (so I can fav)
great work. I think you're finding your groove
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Haha yes you are right, there are more chapters
I have used the image from either google or DA, I didn't have time to make something like that
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I can't read it!!! 
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It must be because its a PDFfile and somehow DA doesn't always let it show the right way, sometimes it helps if you download the newest Adobe PDFreader, and otherwise you just have to download the file. But I think you figured it out by now
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The first 3 paragraphs I imidiatly knew where it was going xD
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Hahaha oh yeah there isn't any mystery in that 
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Oh gaia!! This is getting really interesting!! *O* I really like the fact the Tifa is the only one who can change his mood in an instant ;D
Nicely done!
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Hehe oh thanks a lot! 
But still thanks a lot!
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really? english isn't your first language either? D: OMG I feel so close to you right now!! x3 tee hee!
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Hahaha yeah its the truth!
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I love this fanfic! Will you write a part 2?
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Oh thanks a lot!
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Thats cool! I'll be waiting.
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I take it back. fenrir was also a bike 
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Well don't worry, its always good to know people do their research thoroughly
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yeah i havn't played VII in quite some time so it was a little foggy.
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Haha no worries, I haven't played it either, but the movie Advent Children does give a lot of information. And otherwise I'll check the internet for any clues
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Interesting take on this. (going to read the first one now) however, isn't fenrir a timber wolf in FFVII? very cool that you connected it to a motorized vehicle. Also, I noticed a few spelling/grammar errors. (i'm a bit of a grammar freak) if you would like i can proofread it for ya
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Oh thanks a lot! And thanks for letting me know about the grammar mistakes, I'd love to have someone check on it so feel free to do so
Thanks for helping out, I'm still a bit new to the whole fanfic thing 
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either way works fine by me.
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Okidoki well I'll go and email you the story now, I used Adobe Indesign to write the story since I'm a graphic designer and I don't like working with Microsoft Word
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i didn't get anything in my email inbox
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Then I'll look forward to see your reply
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i only saw a few small ones
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Well that's good to know, that makes me feel a little confident about it, and now the story feels more complete
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