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LadyVolume — Colour Me
Published: 2004-04-24 06:34:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 36
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Description I can still remember when you stole the pink from blushing roses and put it back into my cheeks.

When you stole the purple from confident irises and so carefully placed it within my step.

I remember when you stole the blue from tranquil skies and released it back into my eyes.

When you stole the red pigment from your brazen blood and unleashed it within my soul.

I remember when you stole the orange from vibrant sunsets and permitted it to escape into my speech.

When you stole the green from pure sweet grass and locked it within my heart's chambers.

And yes, I can still remember when you stole the yellow from gay finches and  unearthed it within my fingertips.

I need you, love.
   These markers are fading.
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Comments: 20

MojoRiata [2004-08-22 14:53:08 +0000 UTC]

LadyVolume! What can I say? Your work is truly amazing! Talent was was not speaking solftly standing outside window. Do keep it up, I am going to add you to my watch and can't wait for something more.

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LadyVolume In reply to MojoRiata [2004-08-22 17:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I really love this one myself. It's so pure, and yet speaks of something tainted. I've always liked to look back on things I've written. I meant to submit a whole pile today, but I forgot to bring them yet again. My computer's internet isn't working so well again and it won't let me submit, so I'm using a friend's. If I don't write one in the next couple hours, you'll probably hear something from me on Friday or so. Something terrible always happens when I try to submit. I also draw and photomanipulate, but I haven't been able to because just as I was finishing this really nice one my computer crashed and when it started back up Photoshop was the only program that had been affected. I can't find my CD anywhere. So there've been some problems.

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MojoRiata In reply to LadyVolume [2004-08-22 19:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait until then. Ideally, I'll get some poetry downloaded tomorrow, but as far as anything else, it will have to wait untill I can get a hold of someone's scanner. Hopefully not long. It's always something with computers, isn't it?

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LadyVolume In reply to MojoRiata [2004-08-22 19:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Good luck with everything.

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Rockgirl22885 [2004-04-27 03:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Man now that is freaking orginal i love that!!! I wish i could think of something like that to tell my guy!

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LadyVolume In reply to Rockgirl22885 [2004-04-29 15:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! n.n I'm actually in 'I hate men' mode right now, but I'm slowly being drawn out of it.

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blushingsilly07 [2004-04-24 22:35:19 +0000 UTC]

i love this! this was a really awsome concept. the imagery was so beautiful and i love the way you compared the colors of love with nature. It was almost like the love was so naturally vibrant. Very creative!

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LadyVolume In reply to blushingsilly07 [2004-04-25 04:16:17 +0000 UTC]

It was really fun to write. It really just started out as an almost tune in my head; Some kind of notion about something. It nearly wrote itself. I love it when that happens. Thank you for all your lovely opinions. You're another poet I admire. You have some very visual work. I hope to one day aspire to your abilities. I'm really just an artist who sometimes has trouble expressing certain ideas with pictures.

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blushingsilly07 In reply to LadyVolume [2004-04-25 16:51:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i am so touched to hear you say that. But i think that your work is so lovely. You painted a very vivid picture with this piece. Your style is very unique to you - you are very talented!

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LadyVolume In reply to blushingsilly07 [2004-04-25 21:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you greatly. I appreciate your compliments. Know that I think the same of you.

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blushingsilly07 In reply to LadyVolume [2004-04-26 13:50:37 +0000 UTC]

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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-04-24 18:18:05 +0000 UTC]


...wow ...
I love this. How'd you come up with an idea such as that? I love how you use natural aspects to represent parts of yourself. Very nice.
And you wonder why I think you're amazing *shakes head*
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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LadyVolume In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-04-24 18:24:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm an artist at heart and I guess this combined the best of both worlds. I'm glad you love it so much. I really admire and respect your writing. I'm hoping to finish a few more incomplete poems I've found. I just wish I could go back to that mind set I wrote them in. Thanks a million for your awesome comments.

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Soul-Of-Fire In reply to LadyVolume [2004-04-24 18:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Aaaawwwwhhh! I've never been told that my writing was admired and respected. Now I'm about to cry Thanks
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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LadyVolume In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-04-24 19:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh, your welcome. I really love your writing. It's so natural. I hope my writer's block is gone, but I don't feel like it is. Maybe after today things will look up.

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Phenomenal-Crusade [2004-04-24 14:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Astonishing, sistah. <3 You really do have a way with words.

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LadyVolume In reply to Phenomenal-Crusade [2004-04-24 18:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Luff ya, sistah! I miss commenting on all your stuff. Why haven't you been on Furc? ): I was on all night last night. Is your site ready yet? Thank you for your wonderful praise. I don't deserve it no matter what you say.

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Phenomenal-Crusade In reply to LadyVolume [2004-04-25 03:38:46 +0000 UTC]

Luff yew too, sistah! I have a sitey you can comment on. ;~; I haven't been on furc! And Elle was sick. Just like me. ;~; MY SITE HAS BEEN READY! I UPDATED IT TWICE! You are so welcome and YES YOU DESERVE ITTTTTTTT!!!

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obsessedfangirl [2004-04-24 08:39:46 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and i am speechless.
*claps*

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LadyVolume In reply to obsessedfangirl [2004-04-24 17:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm not as proud of this one because when I wrote it I never finished it. So I tried to convey the same emotion, and I'm a bit paranoid as to whether or not the emotion changes. I hate it when I find unfinished poems while flipping through my notebooks. :/

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