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Gelefant [2019-12-27 01:06:52 +0000 UTC]

She's gorgeous!

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BeckyKidus [2019-12-26 20:54:06 +0000 UTC]

A short critique from

I love the colors you've used - they match very well together, and really create and autumn vibe! The hair is also beautifully done, and the shading is great - especially in the flowers and leaves. The girl herself is also beautiful, and I love her expression!

To the things you could improve. This is primarily the photo. I presume you have chosen to show the scanned version on patreon only, as this is the only artwork I see in your gallery where I can see the background - which, of course, is a very valid reason. I would still look a bit at the staging. I would find a more solid colored background, preferably white or light grey, and remove the objects in the foreground, as the solid black takes a lot of attention. This does not mean you never should have any objects in front of the artwork - some flowers or something like that would fit very well. (I'm sure there are lots of tutorials about this as well, in case you want more information.)

I also notice that her neck seems rather thin, especially against her shoulders.

But all in all this is another beautiful artwork, and I love the color scheme! The leaves and the flowers are also stunning. Keep up the good work!

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Rose-Hunter [2019-12-13 20:38:12 +0000 UTC]

that is so very pretty

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