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Lailoken — The sky is crying
Published: 2003-11-22 15:32:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 44
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Description                        "The Sky is Crying"

The night was cold and lonely,
As I sat and watched the waves;
And as a sudden chill swept through me,
I thought of the last few days.

It seemed like such a dream come true,
To live here, with surf and sand;
All beautiful women and palm trees,
Me, a boy, thinking I was a man.

Where did it start to go wrong,
This dreamy Eden of mine?
Was it when we spent money so freely,
On whatever got us high?

Hotels, drugs, and alcohol;
Stylish clothes and pretty girls;
All our sins which sucked us dry,
Left us deathly pale as pearls.

Like three young princes in paradise,
We rose with the setting sun;
Even when the cash was a memory,
We still found ways to have fun.

Then suddenly, I tired of the game;
I had nothing more to say;
I stayed on the beach one night
As they went on their way.

They weren't supposed to be gone for long,
But as time kept going by,
I realized that they'd forgotten me,
Their promise to return, a lie....

So I struck up a conversation,
With some people in the park;
They shared with me some cigarettes,
But left soon after dark.

So I walked across  the pier
To a closed sidewalk cafe;
With chairs in which to rest
As the rain ends the day.

And here I sit, alone,
Wearing my jacket like second skin;
Just wondering what happened
To the perfect world I had been in.

But the howling wind mocks me
Like righteous laughter in my ears;
And the sky, like me, is crying,
A stream of constant tears.

So muttering prayers and curses,
I drift into darkness deep;
Lost in my own helplessness,
'Til the morning breaks my sleep...

Scott Taylor - 11/4/98
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Comments: 7

mentallyblind [2003-12-11 23:42:55 +0000 UTC]

this is well written and i happen to like it. go me... or you... which ever. i like the words you used and how you used them. made me feel. and it flowed great too!

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DreamingTheEnd [2003-12-07 01:38:36 +0000 UTC]

I like the detal, its very good but more like a story than a poem with so much of it. Still, very well written, deserves another fav. good job.

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Lailoken In reply to DreamingTheEnd [2003-12-07 03:08:08 +0000 UTC]

What can I say, I tend to write long poems... Thank you for the comment, and I hope you like my future submissions, too!

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UsaniPanda [2003-11-29 20:38:33 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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Lailoken In reply to UsaniPanda [2003-12-01 04:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...I've been away for a bit, and had some bad things happen in the past few days, so I'll probaly be adding more soon! Thanks again....

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UsaniPanda In reply to Lailoken [2003-12-03 12:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. I understand, with everything thats been going on for me lately, I haven't been adding much myself. Take your time, the artsy world can wait for something good.

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frosty502 [2003-11-24 20:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Thats really good. I sit in aweness.

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