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Lament-to-Eclipse — Rosenrot
Published: 2007-04-26 01:08:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 355; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description Once there was a girl. She was lovely as the sun on a spring morn and her eyes melted many a young boy's heart.

But she was no angel.

She kept only black ice behind her breast. There was no heart there.
One day she met a young man. He quickly fell into her snare and was consumed by her loveliness.
As they walked through the valley near her home she spotted a rose high on the cliff. She desired that rose with all her being. She leaned over and whispered in her lover's ear that she would like to have it and she would kiss him if he climbed up and got it. He agreed and immediatly started to crawl up the cliff face. She stood below and watched her beautiful rose sway in the wind and she wanted it. He scaled the cliff but cared not for the view.

He only saw his love's rose.

He falters and she yells up at him to continue.

She wants it and thats fine. What she wants she gets.

He reaches the ledge and bends over to pluck the rose. The stone cracks beneath his shoe but he cares not.

He only saw his love's rose.

The edge fell away and he reeled back, catching himself on the ledge. His fingers are slipping and he hears her cries.

She says "Grab the rose. Don't worry if you fall. I want the rose."

He looks down and sees the demon that wears an angel's mask. He cries out. He doesn't want to get the rose. He wants to leave the cliff of torment and agony. His fingers slip and he falls away. His cries echo across the hills and are silenced by stone.

The little girl meets another boy and ensnares him. She tells him she desires a rose...
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Comments: 18

Rain-petal [2008-07-30 19:32:21 +0000 UTC]

I have read this before...didn't I tell you it was good?!

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cowcowmoo [2008-05-18 01:18:11 +0000 UTC]

*claps* ovely, dark and morbid, like the stories my grandma used to tell!

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to cowcowmoo [2008-05-18 03:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Something... wrong about that isn't there?

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cowcowmoo In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2008-05-19 23:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Mabye, look how I turned out! Lol

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to cowcowmoo [2008-05-20 21:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Exactly...

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ketrealthefallen [2007-09-26 23:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Why did you always tense up at the mention of her name? Farah. Why so quick to change the subject when she is brought up? What truely made it that bad for you about her? what?

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thoraxtheimpalor [2007-09-12 02:36:55 +0000 UTC]

another good one.... need more now b man.....

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LarsontheJester [2007-06-18 06:31:58 +0000 UTC]

By the way what tense is this supposed to be in? I see present and past, a tad confusing... What was your intent psycho boy?

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to LarsontheJester [2007-06-26 21:09:09 +0000 UTC]

I do not know what tense it is supposed to be in... Hmmm... *Note: 1st decide on time placement*

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LarsontheJester [2007-04-28 22:11:52 +0000 UTC]

wow that is cool. Notice you ignore the interesting conotation of el Farrah, demon queen of the succubi. but then again you never liked her did you kid? Too sparkly for her taste i spose. Me, I'm just shiny, and that does me fine say thankya. Behold, a creampuff.

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to LarsontheJester [2007-04-29 23:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Bright and Shiny. HA HA HA!

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ketrealthefallen [2007-04-28 03:14:24 +0000 UTC]

I really liked it hun it was a great depiction of the song, I in no way shape or form see this as a childs tale though. But it did remind me of someone we both know extremely well...me wonders who that might be

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to ketrealthefallen [2007-04-28 03:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun. you are the first... and only... post on this... Anyway glad you liked it.

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ketrealthefallen In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2007-04-28 04:09:11 +0000 UTC]

yes I did very much so so did you understnad what I meant by the other part of that post? who could that be?

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to ketrealthefallen [2007-04-29 23:07:50 +0000 UTC]

As the rat said. Yes farah would have done this.

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ketrealthefallen In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2007-05-02 00:13:45 +0000 UTC]

yes tis true thats the problem though that she isn't dead as we'd like her to be...

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to ketrealthefallen [2007-05-02 21:29:03 +0000 UTC]

But she is not as strong as she once was. Not a problem now.

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ketrealthefallen In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2007-05-02 23:21:11 +0000 UTC]

only because I have the control over her now...but that doesn't always mean anything...

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