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Published: 2013-01-23 07:10:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 71934; Favourites: 1913; Downloads: 989
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: She'll be alright, Dinky... I hope.Related content
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first off, let me get this out of my system: AKLSJDFHAKJSDFHKJALSDFHAKLALKHSDF-- *dies from derpy cuteness*
*cough cough* alright then, onto the critique
The Good: The artwork/art style is absolutely amazing. Details were clear as a sunny, non-cloudy day, the dialogue is absolutely HILARIOUS! I especially like what you did for the Poison Joke, having it radiate a neon blue, very nice touch.
The Bad: Whereas Derpy's dialogue is hilarious, it is however, hard to read due to the font used. Other than that, i could see nothing else wrong with this comic.
Can't wait to see more art from you! i'm sure it will be amazing! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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The first thing I notice is the flowers on the first panel and of course, Derpy being derpy, she decides to ignore, (or maybe she cannot see) the flowers of pink and white right next to her. I laughed so much when I first saw her look, with her eyes straight, and I just knew something was definaetly wrong, but knowing what Poison Joke does, I knew the artist showed a funny and inventive idea.
I love the soft shading of this piece, not varying far from the MLP style but still something lovely to look at and not candy coloured blaring at me. The way Derpy is presented, even if she was to maintain a tongue of silver, I believe she is still her derpy self, which is wonderful. I also think, that poison joke, if it has truely affected her mind, perhaps Derpy will design the muffin perfection.
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I laughed too much at this!
Really good job to say the least!
I really like your style, it fits the comic perfectly. I also ADORE the scene change from derpy derpy to fancy as hell derpy while using elements from the show.
The backgrounds were done very nicely, not something you see now a days. There were some things that didnt make sense (to me). Im a WEE picky, but I did notice that the side effects of the plant occured instantly, while in the movie it occured over night, but thats just me.
Oh and before I finish, I liked the idea of this!
Sorry for any grammatical and spelling errors, im on my phone and it wony show the bottom part of this input box e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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This comic is cute and hilarious. The way that Derpy is drawn (especially during the first few panels with her normal crossed eyes) I find to be diabetes inducing. I also like the attention to detail in the comic like how Derpy's tongue has blue dots on it because it is her voice the the poison joke is impacting. It's also funny to me how Derpy's change is shown not just through the dialogue, but through the font her dialogue is presented in. The change to cursive really helps to imagine the kind of royal, sophisticated voice that she ends up having. The "tally-ho" at the end also gives the viewer an idea of the type of accent she starts to talk in. What also helps is the fact that as she is talking in her "joke" voice, she is not smiling or frowning so it helps imagine the voice that much more because it shows what emotions she conveys through her dialogue. And I can honestly say that I can't find anything that I dislike about this comic in terms of it's art or premise.
5 stars all around. /]*[\
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The art style was rounded, not as harsh or contain clear cut lines (this is good). The humor was very well presented, as Derpy is typically your average pony who is not of that social standing where one typically talks like that, and the fact that we can see it contrast through her previous type of speech (both in text and content) adds a smile to my face. The fact that she talked like Rarity was equally mirthful. Overall, good show. My one comment is the fact the sometimes the text was hard to read in Derpy's lines, as it sometimes blended in to the back round, but now I'm nitpicking.
-hug- Good job mate.
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:iconRoyalAirForceplz:Following you, ma'am. Tally ho!
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For those who can't read cursive, this is what Derpy says.
Panel 1:Β Very well, my dear friend Carrot, if it is of your wish, then I shall oblige. I realize that the pristine health is paramount to alleviating any and all worries of those who care for me deeply, and I would be foolish to betray such trust that my friends and family would have with me.
Panel 2: Now then, shall we browse the immediate area for a location to hold our mid-day meal that would be more to your satisfaction? I do believe there was, at least, the nearby merchant providing a service of selling baked goods. As you very well know, I do enjoy greatly the baked delicacy known as muffins. It being my second choice this day. I suggest we move along so we may feast!
Panel 3: Make haste, my friend! The oven waits for no mare! Tally-ho!
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Oh dear. Now let's just hope that Doctor Whooves doesn't become a muffin-lover...
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I'm gonna go get some of zecora's antidote and slip it is her muffin when she's not looking.
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...so, poison joke makes Durpy talk more... normal??
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no it make her talk... SMART
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Derpy is a Derper no more. I must wonder if Carrot Top will want to turn her back now.
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oh my gah, that herb turned derpy into mojo jojo
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uhhhhh mojo jojo is way more on the dumb ass meter then doctor whooves Β and thats who derpy sounds like from the poison joke mojo jojo talks in the 3rd person every 3rd sentenceΒ
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Oh my god, how did I not see that
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Great comic! Love it. Β You are to be congratulated.
One thing... does anyone else think of Patrick Stewart after Derpy/Ditzy is 'Poison Joked'?
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: TIS I! SUMMER THE ALICORN! AKA, THE LOST ALICORN PRINCESS (copyrighted pony)! But Carrot..... Shes to far gone. SOMEONE GET THE FRYING PAN! OR THE BUBBLE BATH XD
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i wonder how long it took for me to understand what has just happened
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If it weren't for the poison joke making Derpy act like that, I'd say that she's s changeling
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I don't know why I heard Derpy speaking in John Cleese's voice.
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OH.MY.GOD the poison joke turned Derpy into a Brit!!
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Way past awesome! This comic blew my mind away! Flash Fire: What's the big deal I have her her talk like that. Dragonking17: You have? When? Flash Fire: Lost of time people just don't notice since they do not spend a lot of time with her. She is one of my best friends in Ponieville after all and she likes me even though I am a dragon who is a jolly trickster that can turn into a pegasus.
Β Β
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I would happily see this in cannon.
I love the idea greatly, simply put this is a prime example of mental play worked onto the premise that all is opposite to what it actually is.
Knowing Derpy as I do I instantly loved this comic styled strip with immense pleasure, bravo!
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Ahh, my dear Ditsy- Wait, Poison Joke, Oi! DITSYYYYYYYYYYYY
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Derpy, I'm not used to your proper grammar, please speak normally
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-_-
Gah, oh the pain... The irony of the situation is somewhat... Amusing... But somewhat... Annoying....
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Curse You, I have mixed feelings but at least you made me Laugh.
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Quick! Somepony get Zecora ASAP! We've got to Re-Derp the De-Derped Derpy.
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Alternate Title: How to Become Quintessentially British in One Step.
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