Comments: 33
Chan-tan123 [2016-02-16 01:35:53 +0000 UTC]
You need to read this and you can't stop untill the end. If you think this is one of the boring chain-mail letters, then you are wrong.
I'm going to tell you a story. The story is about a girl called Sara. Sara found a message one morning lying on her bed. She had no idea how it got there but how it did, we will not find out. The message said just one word, and that word was "Run". Sara thought it was her little brother pulling a prank on her, but she thought wrong.
So sara burnt the note before she went to bed. When she woke up she found the same note lying on the bottom of her bed. Again, before she went to bed she burnt the note. The next morning, she found not a note, but a letter. The letter read:
Sara, i am watching you, if you don't run i will kill you. Don't believe me? Well you are unwise. I will give you till Sunday at mid-night to get as far away from this house as you can.
Mary.
Sara did not think this was real, so she carried on with normal life. On sunday at mid-night, she heard a bang from under her bed. She got up and turned her light on. She looked in her mirror on the wall and saw bloody Mary. She smashed the mirror with her hair brush and looked under the bed. Nothing. Then the light flickered and went out. She thought that the light bulb had just died. She was wrong.
"I told you to run Sara, but you did not. I told you i would kill, you, and your life ends here."
Sara turned around and saw a Girl wrapped in chains with blood dripping down her face. The girl, she guessed, was Mary. She believed now. Mary had a knife in her hand, a real knife, and stabbed Sara in the stomache nice and slowley, so Sara felt it. Sara screamed and slowly bled to death.
So you are thinking, "What does this have to do with me?" Well if you do not send this on Mary will come to your room on the nearest possible Sunday at mid-night and kill you. This is no joke. Don't be unwise like Sara. Be wise, send it on.
0 people- You will be killed by Mary on the nearest possibe Sunday at mid-night and kill you
5 people- You will be severely injured.
10 people- You will see bloody Mary in your Mirror
15 people- You will be left un-harmed
20 people- You will find alot of money on the floor.
50 people- She will never come to your house . . .
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Lotty-sama [2007-12-20 18:02:18 +0000 UTC]
Man, I keep reading this round over and over... It never gets boring!
Dood is just an awesome character. It's too bad you didn't win, but I've loved every entry you've made! Congratulations for coming so far in the Endzone tournament!
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KFuyumi [2007-12-15 19:49:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow... This match is the best ever <3
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Rai-len [2007-12-14 13:30:15 +0000 UTC]
this was rele a very hard choice...both u and unknownperson did very well this round....i jus wish i couldve joined...i first learnd about endzone wen u all wer in the second round....
good work...
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Darkstampede [2007-12-14 11:50:58 +0000 UTC]
Wow great job man! Wish I coulda seen delgados mug wiped around with that brush lol. Nice pacing and wonderful story. Good luck!
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Sketchfighter316 [2007-12-14 03:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Damn, you're entry is...wow! Well, it must of been said how great your entry is. I loved every page of your entry.
You're a dangerous artist to go up against, man. You made such a kickass story and style, I can see why they said you'd be the only one who could defeat Climber.
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Mrcrapinson [2007-12-13 23:56:51 +0000 UTC]
By the time your character beat Mr. Seles, he became my favorite. I might not be completely into his design and story-line overall, but it takes a shitload of creativity to come up with the things you've made him do.
I do believe I like the narrative in this entry a lot more, but I like the execution of~Unknown-person 's entry better, so I don't know which one I like the most.
I admire both of you for making it this far, I would've given up after the third round :U
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knockout08 [2007-12-13 20:10:22 +0000 UTC]
You'd better fix that typo in the first panel.
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knockout08 In reply to lan-kun [2007-12-13 20:38:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you also left out the bit about protocol, and Dr. Crooked saying that closure is already upon them, make sure you have that.
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ATeenageWitchling [2007-12-13 14:07:38 +0000 UTC]
Man, both are just plain EPIC TT-TT
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Leucrotta [2007-12-13 06:58:24 +0000 UTC]
Aksjldjsl.
D: This is awesome.
And I love the red backlighting. Splendiferous.
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CaptRosko [2007-12-13 05:42:32 +0000 UTC]
btw, thanks for letting Seles have a continuing role in your story. It's a great honor, sir.
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gvgeri [2007-12-13 05:18:41 +0000 UTC]
It's just me, or Dood drawnings just got way better?
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gvgeri In reply to knockout08 [2007-12-13 21:42:47 +0000 UTC]
Seles Corp. Improving your abilyties since...
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gvgeri In reply to knockout08 [2007-12-13 21:41:28 +0000 UTC]
Seles Corp. Improving your abilyties since...
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Candy-hobo [2007-12-13 05:07:12 +0000 UTC]
gahh i can't believe this is the last roundxD
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VicariousRed [2007-12-13 05:02:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh maaaaan!!! So exciting. SO EXCITING!!!!
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Waddle-Penguin [2007-12-13 05:00:07 +0000 UTC]
TAT LAAAAAAAAAAN~
This is it, I hope you do well, and I hope unknown does, too! I dunno what else to say!
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WildDaydreamer [2007-12-13 04:59:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice fighting scene. Man I wonder how this is gonna go.
I'm rooting for you, Doodle!
You know what? Suspense reaaaally hurts. lol
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knockout08 [2007-12-13 04:58:50 +0000 UTC]
too awesome!
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Selecthumor [2007-12-13 04:58:32 +0000 UTC]
what's gonna happen next?
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phoenix8364 [2007-12-13 04:57:48 +0000 UTC]
yours also rocks
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ClosetExtrovert [2007-12-13 04:57:47 +0000 UTC]
Gaaaaah... I can't believe it's coming down to this moment! Climber... Dood... Best of luck to you both!
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