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Published: 2008-03-11 02:54:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 740; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 21
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Loligoths...for homework....messy...will update later....oh, and two of the outfits aren't mine.
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Nice! I like the third girl's hair, and the first girl's outfit. The fourth girl looks like Gwen from Ben 10.
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Hey Lan,
The right hand (our left) of the second girl (starting from left) seems to be too small due to the sketchiness. Her mouth is weird. I think it is too close to the edge of her face. Also, it doesn't align properly with the nose. I suggest moving it slightly to the left like this. I hope you don't mind the edit.
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Why is the necklace of the girl to the far left hovering when she is not moving? Is she "magically" controlling it?
Nice work with the dresses. I'm looking forward to seeing this all cleaned up!
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Oh sexy gothic lolita sketch >8D this is so awesome! *fav'd*
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