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LanokirX — Bachiatari Raptor

Published: 2013-04-29 11:30:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 912; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 3
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Description And after some fabulous commissions ,back to my crap! *dies*

So, finally got a chance to draw the captain of Division 5!

Have had this design in my mind for a long time, however, took ages to draw lol. But well, a sketch on him. And first time ever I drew a dinousaur like this. xD

Bachiatari Raptor (a taken name, Bachiatari meaning Cursed) is probably the oddest looking (and most ferocious) shinigami in the Gotei. However, Raptor haven’t always looked like this, and as his name says, is he cursed.

About 600 years ago, when he just newly appointed captain in the Division, did he recklessly disobey orders, as he engaged the Cero Espada under a completely different mission; it wasn’t even a fight as Lanchios just played around with the young captain. Raptor back then, were narcissism personified, his appearance were spoken off over the entire Gotei, the most beautiful of beings and he treated himself as godlike compared to others. And of course, did he have amazing talents, just fueling his narcissism.

That was why he didn’t die in the meeting with Lanchios; the Cero Espada could easy kill the shinigami, but what was more fun to destroy them, for the things they loved? And so, Lanchios vowed a curse upon the shinigami. It would switch his beautiful appearance against the hideous monster of his zanpakuto spirit.

As Raptor returned, was he crushed, devastated over his hideous appearance. And furious. Every photo and picture that existed with him did he destroy, mirrors was forbidden in the barracks and around him and the pond nearby was drained on the water so it couldn’t reflect his hideous face. He even changed his name, to not stain it with the face he had today and under the first nights did he scar his face and body, as he tried to rip off the cursed and ugly skin of his face.

600 years have passed, and even if Raptor still feel vanity over his appearance, have he come to term with himself. To his fear and joy, have he forgotten how he once looked, even his old name is just a hazy memory, it was something on N… probably. He isn’t sure. However, it have changed him for the good, made him far more humble as well actually made him a good captain, though he still can have his outbreaks of depression and angry attacks.

His zanpakutou is named Kyouryuu, which literally translates to ‘Dinosaur’, and well, understandable if his zanpakuto spirit was a velociraptor.

Well, a little bit about Raptor for now. xD

Raptor © Me
Bleach © Kubo Tite
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Comments: 40

HollowFactor [2013-10-10 20:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Reptor XD ever heard of killer instict

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LanokirX In reply to HollowFactor [2013-10-11 03:21:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, he have x)

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HollowFactor In reply to LanokirX [2013-10-11 10:08:53 +0000 UTC]

epic

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IchiNi2546 [2013-05-19 02:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Interesting character ouo He looks rather...fancy? XDD

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LanokirX In reply to IchiNi2546 [2013-05-19 08:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, if not, different. xD

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IchiNi2546 In reply to LanokirX [2013-05-19 23:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Lol yus XD

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MyangHime [2013-04-30 02:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Mother of Velociraptors

He is awesome!

Better Kaki watch out with such Captain xD

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LanokirX In reply to MyangHime [2013-04-30 05:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yes, and poor Kaki was hoping for a sexy woman as captain, and instead ends up under a lizard. xD

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MyangHime In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-30 19:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Too bad Kaki....Too bad..

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Rinriko [2013-04-29 21:26:17 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of Raptor Jesus
Neat design !

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LanokirX In reply to Rinriko [2013-04-30 05:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thought so too all the time. xD "Its madda fakka Raptor Jesus Shinigami!" xD

but thank you!

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RyuFrei [2013-04-29 16:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Omfg, He is just prefect...PREFECT

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LanokirX In reply to RyuFrei [2013-04-29 19:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha aww, happy to hear that xD

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RyuFrei In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]

X3 heheh

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Krocken [2013-04-29 15:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Epic

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LanokirX In reply to Krocken [2013-04-29 19:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, thanks! : >

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knightblood [2013-04-29 15:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Knight- Yea sorry if I'm a little distant but I've seen the Jurassic Park trilogy a lot and yea I've seen what they can do. So nothing personal just cautious.

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LanokirX In reply to knightblood [2013-04-29 19:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Raptor: I understand that, but you shouldn't compare me to a primitive reptile, kind of hurts...

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knightblood In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 20:21:31 +0000 UTC]

Knight- But if they were still around, they would of been the dominant species. They were as smart as humans. But they're closer related to birds.

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LanokirX In reply to knightblood [2013-04-30 12:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Raptor: Not really, reason why humans have become the dominant species is duo their ability to evolve, change and adapt, something dinosaurs rarely had.

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knightblood In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-30 19:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Knight- Well some did.

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Crozee [2013-04-29 14:54:58 +0000 UTC]

AMG XD
Who needs a wolf when you have a mother-fucking VELOCIRAPTOR?! XD

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LanokirX In reply to Crozee [2013-04-29 19:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Haha, agree on that! xD

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CannedMadMan66 [2013-04-29 14:16:17 +0000 UTC]

OH HELL YEAH!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!

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LanokirX In reply to CannedMadMan66 [2013-04-29 19:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha, Im happy to hear that! xD

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b133d4u [2013-04-29 12:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Two things:epicness and komamura and byakuya had a child!XD

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LanokirX In reply to b133d4u [2013-04-29 12:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Haha, their lovechild sure xD

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b133d4u In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 12:28:52 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDDD

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ChikaraRyoku [2013-04-29 11:54:09 +0000 UTC]

lizard captain, nice work ^^

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LanokirX In reply to ChikaraRyoku [2013-04-29 12:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you, thought it would be different xD

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ChikaraRyoku In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 12:44:58 +0000 UTC]

it looks nice enough
lately i've been seeing more and more animal soul reapers

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LanokirX In reply to ChikaraRyoku [2013-04-29 13:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you x3
Really? Havent seen any, except Nexus Doberman captain : o

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ChikaraRyoku In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 13:33:23 +0000 UTC]

i've also seen a lion somewhere
and also a small cat

i've been thinking of making one also, but i have no idea what kind of soul reaper/animal to make it

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LanokirX In reply to ChikaraRyoku [2013-04-29 20:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see : o Otherwise the only thing I have is Yuki, nekomimi. And had idea for an gorilla guy lol.

Ah, cool. Been thinking off an Orcawhale lol

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ChikaraRyoku In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 20:20:50 +0000 UTC]

interesting

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Crimson-Agony [2013-04-29 11:34:13 +0000 UTC]

DINOSAUR!

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LanokirX In reply to Crimson-Agony [2013-04-29 12:12:54 +0000 UTC]

HE GONNA EAT YA!

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Crimson-Agony In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 15:34:03 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUU! I NEED TO BE ALIVES! QAQ

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LanokirX In reply to Crimson-Agony [2013-04-29 20:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww, can be safe, he prefer fruits and vegetables before meat so xD

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Crimson-Agony In reply to LanokirX [2013-04-29 20:10:34 +0000 UTC]

A-Alright .w.

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