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Published: 2012-08-12 15:41:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1381; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 87
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Description Self, one that I didn't took in the middel of the night like the last ones

P.s: I would be super happy if someone would take the time to write a tiny critique
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Comments: 13

PerforatedPhoto [2012-08-15 20:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


For followers of Jolinaa, both her skill in photography and her beauty are known and this image is a perfect example of both.

The angle of the capture and the tight crop help to grab the attention of the viewer and direct the eyes to the artist's features and the crisp details to be found there. (Cute freckles and hypnotizing eyes are my personal fave)

The artist obviously has a good understanding of the equipment she uses, offering good focus and depth of field for impact, perfect lighting, giving clean skin tones throughout, then using slightly muted tones, which in my opinion give the image a soft, gentle, feminine feel.

Lastly, I would just like to commend the composition and the inclusion of the little curls of hair coming down across the face. Not only does this add to the beauty factor of the image, it gives the viewer a little more detail to take in and makes for a more interesting capture.

Instantly a favourite for me. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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NataliaDrepina [2013-05-03 11:55:55 +0000 UTC]

What graceful facial features!

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Werhall [2013-05-02 18:29:12 +0000 UTC]

... die blauen Augen,
das bezaubernde Gesicht,
die süßen Sommersprossen
und die roten Haarsträhnen ...

Eine schlichte, doch gerade deshalb absolut umwerfende Aufnahme die ihres gleichen sucht.

Ich finde das Foto ist einfach umwerfend ...

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LauraCallsen In reply to Werhall [2013-05-02 19:00:23 +0000 UTC]

was für ein schöner Kommentar Freue mich sehr, dass es dir so gut gefällt, vielen lieben Dank für diese netten Worte

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OldBay [2012-11-16 01:13:57 +0000 UTC]

It seems very "candid" and the field of depth makes it. Very nice photo.

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jbblyon [2012-09-23 09:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Miss, you have chosen a lovely model ! I can not do anything, I love freckles ! The choice of lens is perfect and does not distort too, just enough to give a little relief. The diaphragm is perfect, the gradual blurring that falls on your shoulders (exquisites) sketch like an atmosphère of mystery... And thes lips, barely parted... aaaaaahhhhhh !!! Continue miss, you are beautiful and you have talent ! (Sorry, but I don't speak english !)

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LauraCallsen In reply to jbblyon [2012-09-23 12:29:57 +0000 UTC]

et je ne parle pa francais <- what I'm remembering from shool, it's a pity ^^" Thank you very much for your nice comment Merci ^^

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PerforatedPhoto [2012-08-15 20:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, love the use of focus and your choice of composition here.

Have written a critique for you, as this was an instant eye catcher for me.

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Negative-Pallor [2012-08-13 23:15:54 +0000 UTC]

im not so good at giving critiques, just my opinion. as i take the pic in as a whole my only conclusion is that you are very lovely, your freckles are so cute.

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LauraCallsen In reply to Negative-Pallor [2012-08-14 21:51:27 +0000 UTC]

aww it already makes me happy, that you thought about writig a critique Thanks for your lovely comment

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Negative-Pallor In reply to LauraCallsen [2012-08-17 00:09:21 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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jbblyon [2012-08-12 18:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Mademoiselle, vous avez choisi un adorable modèle (lol)... je n'y peux rien, j'adore les taches de rousseur (freckles) ! Le choix de la focale est parfait et ne déforme pas trop, juste ce qu'il faut pour donner un peu de relief ! Le diaphragme est parfait, le flou progressif qui tombe sur vos épaules (exquises) esquisse comme une atmosphère de mystère... Et ces lèvres, à peine entrouvertes... aaaaaaahhhh !!! Continuez mademoiselle, vous êtes belle et vous avez du talent !

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LauraCallsen In reply to jbblyon [2012-08-12 18:19:46 +0000 UTC]

ahh ~ I wish I could understand your comment mais je ne parle pas francais T_T je suis tres desolé

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