yure22 [2011-06-08 16:58:23 +0000 UTC]
loved it , except the Yaoi parts with yosuke
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LavenderXSkyXPalace In reply to yure22 [2011-06-09 10:27:25 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment umm do you have any suggestions for where this story should go it's definatly not finished yet but i need help as to where it should go
any thoughts?
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yure22 In reply to LavenderXSkyXPalace [2011-06-09 17:14:37 +0000 UTC]
if i had a choice , then it would probably be that during one of the rainy nights Naoto decides to go to the House of Dojima and verify if the person appearing in the midnight channel has any kind of relation towards the first crime , but she faints because of the cold outside and it`s found near Souji`s house , after this the storm gets too strong and they`re unable to go out but when removing Naoto wet clothes he notices something `odd` and after that Izanagi cleaverly says ``Bingo!!Dumbass , Naoto`s a girl `` and then i think you`ll know what to `add` ;D
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