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Okiraka-Senpai [2010-10-21 19:44:36 +0000 UTC]
haha I like this : P
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mentallyxunstable [2010-10-20 18:20:24 +0000 UTC]
I like how you integrated the rhyme into the story without it seeming tacked on. And the interactions were very believable. Very noice, Mels! ;D
Writing seems like a good way to get things off your chest. <3
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Layla-Pedrosa In reply to mentallyxunstable [2010-10-20 18:26:34 +0000 UTC]
I swear every time you comment I run around my room for five minutes squealing and giggling like a little girl out've sheer gleeeeeee xD
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