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heart-defectant-art [2007-02-03 04:00:25 +0000 UTC]
ahh yes, beautiful it tis, its so deep to the soul and it flows so well, great work, very very impressed
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Silvashadow [2006-10-05 18:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Very nice lazarus, very well spoken and it rhymes so well. ^_^
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lazarus-666 In reply to Silvashadow [2006-10-07 00:18:26 +0000 UTC]
awww, thanks. you make me happy. i didnt think it was that great, but i`m glad you enjoyed *giant smiles!!*
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ShimmyDancer [2006-08-10 07:55:32 +0000 UTC]
i like the rhyme, it realled flowed. you've written in such a way that it could be both about the illness or a metaphor. i can see hot it can be about about lies. i reckon it could be about a secret or guilt too. heartbreak even. a well written poem
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joelent [2006-08-09 06:33:58 +0000 UTC]
oh my, it has been so long since i've read your works.
and yet you've done it again; colour me impressed.
it's so deep, and it flows really well.
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