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lazarus-666 ā€” Cancer
Published: 2006-08-09 04:28:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 281; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description Cancer

Dwelling in my heart you sleep,
In a slumber o so deep,
Cannot wake you though I try,
As I shake you, scream and cry
As you lie inside of me,
You unfold my destiny


Slowly wake at your own pace,
Growing in that darkest place,
Questioning just what you are,
You cannot hear; I fell too far.
Imbedded now you start to grow,
And so undoing all I know.

As you grow you start to spread,
Creating pictures in my head,
Of what you are and how you came,
Lying there you are to blame.
Deceitful names and false beliefs,
Shatter hearts like autumn leaves.

And as you grow infecting more,
I see you as a wretched whore,
Deceitful hateful worthless slut,
Worse than dog you are a mutt,
I try to mask with insults how
Without your love Iā€™m nothing now.

And as you grow I clutch my chest,
For you eat away beneath my breast,
And pain engulfs, as pain will do,
As I slip away from you.
Cannot wake me though you try,
For by your hand, we both did die.

You are the cancer within me,
You are my darkest fantasy.
I love you.
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Comments: 11

heart-defectant-art [2007-02-03 04:00:25 +0000 UTC]

ahh yes, beautiful it tis, its so deep to the soul and it flows so well, great work, very very impressed

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lazarus-666 In reply to heart-defectant-art [2007-02-05 03:02:22 +0000 UTC]

aww, well thank you

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Silvashadow [2006-10-05 18:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Very nice lazarus, very well spoken and it rhymes so well. ^_^

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lazarus-666 In reply to Silvashadow [2006-10-07 00:18:26 +0000 UTC]

awww, thanks. you make me happy. i didnt think it was that great, but i`m glad you enjoyed *giant smiles!!*

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ShimmyDancer [2006-08-10 07:55:32 +0000 UTC]

i like the rhyme, it realled flowed. you've written in such a way that it could be both about the illness or a metaphor. i can see hot it can be about about lies. i reckon it could be about a secret or guilt too. heartbreak even. a well written poem

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lazarus-666 In reply to ShimmyDancer [2006-08-11 03:03:16 +0000 UTC]

well thank you. if you go into encreadable detail on one of your theories you may wint the super surprise as well! come on, i need some entertainment

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xoantidote [2006-08-09 15:23:52 +0000 UTC]

OMG.

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lazarus-666 In reply to xoantidote [2006-08-10 03:56:12 +0000 UTC]

well thank you. you make me smile all over. i love that feeling

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xoantidote In reply to lazarus-666 [2006-08-10 14:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! You make me smile all over too

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joelent [2006-08-09 06:33:58 +0000 UTC]

oh my, it has been so long since i've read your works.
and yet you've done it again; colour me impressed.
it's so deep, and it flows really well.

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lazarus-666 In reply to joelent [2006-08-10 03:55:40 +0000 UTC]

aww. you make me so happy. you should win the contest just for that . in fact i`m gunna also give you the surprise at the end of it . and one more coment like that and i may just need to love you forever

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