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Published: 2006-03-20 15:40:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1871; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 109
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Description I'm thinking of printing this one on a t-shirt, but without the background. I think the thick lines will look good if printed.
I just wanted to draw the two brothers not fighting.
There's something that bothers me about Sesshoumaru, but I can't think of what. If you can see what's wrong, could you pin point it, please?
I'm somewhat satisfied with Inuyasha, though. But I don't like his eyes...
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Comments: 11

Urd-chan [2006-04-12 20:24:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice. Yeah, it's great when they aren't fighting - at least each other. They've had a number of opportunities to fight more-or-less together in the series, at least.

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Kima-Reyne [2006-04-11 01:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Sesshoumaru's chin is sticking out to far and you aligned his mouth nose and right eye up with it Move the chin, nose and mouth to the left a bit and it'll look much better. Not that it doesn't look great anyway

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Pikakus [2006-04-11 00:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!! ^____^

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sango-demonslayer99 [2006-04-10 01:42:09 +0000 UTC]

i love the hair on fluffy! (sorry I can hardly pay attention to Inu, seeing as I'm preocupied with fluffy-sama) nice job! and background! (notices it's fluffy's kimono's design thingy) and coloring

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BlackAngel-Diana [2006-03-25 17:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Wooow!! The coloring is amazing!!!!!! I love Inu Yasha's clothes!!!!! ^.^ * come little puppy!! give me those clothes!!!!*

perhaps the problem with Sesshoumaru is on his nose and mouth, it's almost a 3/4 view and the nose and mouth are almost in the middle of the face... first, maybe you could take the nose a little up and a little more to the right... or just to make it a little straight on the upper part... =S

About InuYasha's eyes, well maybe, on his left eye (the one that it's closer to sesshoumaru) you could erase some of the bottom black line... if you try to make it end where the eye ball ends, maybe you'll get a better sight on his eyes... that wide black line makes him look like his eye is more near to the nose than it's suppossed to be...

I really like very much the background as ZebraRaine says!!!! It's very well done!!! Nice choose!!!!! ^^

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LazyJenny In reply to BlackAngel-Diana [2006-03-26 10:25:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That was very helpful! I'll try and look these things over later today. And I'll update when I'm done.

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needs-a-bullet [2006-03-21 05:03:37 +0000 UTC]

that would make a spiffy t-shirt, Id buy one ^_^
yeah, I think the line on the bottom of Inuyasha's eyes are a bit think, but other than that, I would be happy with his outcome too. I dunno if i can help you with any issues on Sessho...... I think maybe his face is too rounded? i dunno.

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ZebraRaine [2006-03-20 21:44:05 +0000 UTC]

First, awesome background. Using the print pattern from Sesshoumaru's kimono was a great idea.

Second, I can't really see anything "big" wrong with Sesshoumaru, but I do think that maybe the left side (his left, our right) of his face might be a tad crooked (or I could be out of my mind, hehe).

They both look really awesome! I like brotherly pictures like this one. They make me smile.

InuYasha's eyes look alright. I think maybe the lines might be a little bit thick, and that might be why you don't like them. Hmm...

The thick outline will be PERFECT on a t-shirt. ^_^

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LazyJenny In reply to ZebraRaine [2006-03-20 21:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I knew I could count on you. You seem to be online on DevArt as much as I am, so I wasn't so surprised with the quick reply.
I will look into the details you mentioned and try to correct them before I print them. I have decided to print the picture on the back of a white t-shirt, and I will have the Inuyasha logo on the front.

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ZebraRaine In reply to LazyJenny [2006-03-20 22:04:05 +0000 UTC]

I get online almost as soon as I get off of work, and stay on about 3-4 hours a day. Hahaha. I don't really have anything else to do but help out people with critiques and stuff. So no problem! Are you going to post a picture of the T-shirt itself when it's done? That would be really neat!

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LazyJenny In reply to ZebraRaine [2006-03-20 22:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I probably will. I'll see if I can get this done tomorrow. I hope I won't screw it up, though...

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