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LBRCloud — Another World

Published: 2016-03-08 00:37:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 522; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description About two days ago, I drew this thing, and wrote a little poem to go along with it. Enjoy!

DISCLAIMER: THIS ISN'T ABOUT ME, NOR ANYBODY ELSE I PERSONALLY KNOW.

In the whispers, a voice I can hear,
Calling out to me, "There's nothing to fear,
I can take you to a place where you'll never go wrong;
Welcome to my world, in which you'll always belong!
There's magic, and beauty, and everything's new;
You'll never believe what this world can do!
The best of the best, and so, so much more
I know that you view your life as a bore
So come along with me; you'll see what I mean,
The world you now live in is so dark, you see.
Follow me; there's adventure, this world is so gray.
The price is your soul, and it's one you must pay."
I hesitated at first, but the offer was desired
And the further I went, the more fun was acquired!
Though it started out fine, the further I went,
the further away from the sun, I would get
The laughter, the screaming, the pain and the crying
I think to myself, "Oh, surely I'm dying!"
I feel myself slipping, I can't see the light;
There's nothing I can do to win in this fight!
Now I'm rotting alone in this world I've made up,
for all I hear now is the voice that won't stop.
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Comments: 12

Techoh [2016-03-08 03:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Very involved meaning behind it, I must say. (seems to remind me all too much of the Conception fan-fiction, personally. xDDDD Likely it is because the writing is fairly general, I guess.)

Keep up the good work! ^^ 

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LBRCloud In reply to Techoh [2016-03-08 05:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yeah?

And, thanks! ^^

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Techoh In reply to LBRCloud [2016-03-12 07:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Just the overlying idea, I suppose. XD

Also, no probs! ^o^

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Shift-1347 [2016-03-08 03:02:40 +0000 UTC]

This poem could be one of my personal favourites right now, I have to learn this by heart to recite it one day. ^^

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LBRCloud In reply to Shift-1347 [2016-03-08 05:05:39 +0000 UTC]

O____O Wow. Thank you very much!!!

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Pristine1281 [2016-03-08 02:08:19 +0000 UTC]

Awwww wow.

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warriorcatsgeek [2016-03-08 01:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Damn Brittbae, chu is an amazing writer <3

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LBRCloud In reply to warriorcatsgeek [2016-03-08 01:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks Kim! ;w;

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jeremeymcdude [2016-03-08 00:39:40 +0000 UTC]

it was so fun then the darkness set in. damn that was deep.

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LBRCloud In reply to jeremeymcdude [2016-03-08 00:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeahh... haha, thank you! ^.^

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VanillaShineArt [2016-03-08 00:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!!!

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LBRCloud In reply to VanillaShineArt [2016-03-08 00:41:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Vanilla! ^-^

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