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Fungleberry [2008-03-19 05:51:41 +0000 UTC]
maybe if you told me a little more about what you are attempting to illustrate. i get the immediate impression that it has something to do with the fleeting nature of love. i say that because of the symbolism represented with the holy hearts and the flying active birds. the background and rays could be extraneous, if they don't have something to do with the illustration or serve some purpose. they don't seem to. tell me more about it and i'll be glad to continue to critique!
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Fungleberry In reply to LDGSherar [2008-03-19 06:40:11 +0000 UTC]
ahhh alright that adds a lot. i would say then that you could make the rays into radio waves. give them the impression of sound rather than light. that could also add to old fashioned look. great piece man, its not easy to make work that talks about yourself so personally.
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dynamiteme [2008-02-15 11:26:38 +0000 UTC]
i love dthe heart and the textyre but i think that the rays looks realy strange
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