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leafstep — 003. Breezepelt: Redemption?

Published: 2019-07-08 05:44:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 496; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Breezepelt
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Did he deserve redemption?


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Okay, let's talk about this asshat, okay? Fucker attacked a BLIND Medicine cat, PREGNANT warrior (who was in MOURNING and DEPRESSED btw) joined the Legion of fucking Hell, fights AGAINST his clan and family, and gets forgiven for it?? Tf? Bruh, HELL NO.
This fucker is evil. His fucking sob story 'Oh my dad didn't care about me' is literal bullshit, okay?
Where's Firestar's dad huh? You don't see him whining and crying, committing mass murder (or attempted mass murder) and saying it's because he's dad was never there.
What about fucking Lionblaze you fuck? Your half brother? The one who was deemed a mistake by his father?? And also, btw, a stronger bitch than you are? He's not committing mass murder?? AND HE CANT DIE FROM IT
So explain to me , how that bitchy sob story is supposed to excuse his actions? He had a loving mother who was there for him, and he still wants to be an angst emo fuck.

Breezepelt CANT have a redemption arc. He's too fucking angsty. His character was literally made to be evil, you can't try to redeem him. He doesn't deserve one. It's like the Erin's kept thinking of all this evil shit that needed to be added to the story, and threw it into Breezepelt, because they don't want a lot of important characters. He is an absolute mess of wrong doing, and cannot be forgiven.

Pretty sure if he dies, he's gonna go to the Dark Forest anyway, why try to save him?

Personally, I would have banished the shit out of that fucker. The second he attacked a BLIND medicine cat and a PREGNANT female, that dick is outta here. Sorry, but Queens and Medicine cats should be protected by all clans. They only help the clan by making new warriors, and healing others. It was a Bitch Move to attack them, AND HE COULDNT EVEN FINISH THE JOB.

There is no redemption for Breezepelt. He's not go no to Starclan, and there's no hope for him.
He deserves worse than what he got.

(Hate him if you can't tell lol)
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AFuniversCat [2020-05-19 00:21:37 +0000 UTC]

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AcornArtStudio [2019-07-08 11:25:30 +0000 UTC]

P r e a c h

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leafstep In reply to AcornArtStudio [2019-07-08 14:09:42 +0000 UTC]

YEET this brat to the Dark Forest! XD

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theWolfdragon21 [2019-07-08 06:28:51 +0000 UTC]

you got a lot that is right 

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Swiftstar01 [2019-07-08 06:12:10 +0000 UTC]

In power of three, he could’ve been redeemed. However, once he became a warrior, he became a huge asshole. He definitely doesn’t deserve forgiveness. I kinda wish that the would killed him off, Crowfeather giving his love to him just before he dies. Now, both angsters are full of not just regret but also confusion, fear, and sadness. I think that would be a stronger dynamic than letting the fucker live and have to atone for his sins.  

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leafstep In reply to Swiftstar01 [2019-07-08 08:43:41 +0000 UTC]

He could have!! There's a limit on how much can be forgiven, sometimes it's a lot of little things, or one big thing. It doesn't matter, there's a limit to it all

Ans yeah, Banish him, execute him, idk, he's just a whiners who blames everyone but himself, ugh.

tbh I'd love to see a clan execution lol. Too bad this is a kids series XD

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Swiftstar01 In reply to leafstep [2019-07-08 09:00:15 +0000 UTC]

Totally! He could’ve still be grumpy but not out of spite and anger. Just as his general personality. Sigh, we can only dream and keep the head cannon alive.

I hate these types of people/characters. Normal people can do it once in a while (cause its normal to not want blame) but he does push all of the blame on his daddy issues constantly: ”I have daddy issues so I’m hurting more than you!” No your not snowflake.

Lol a clan execution! That would be epic! Yeah, too bad. that would be interesting to see how that would worked.

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leafstep In reply to Swiftstar01 [2019-07-08 14:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Truth! Like, Emotionally distant, that comes off as rude and grouchy. Due to the fact that he never connected with his dad, and he feels just disconnected from healthy relationships. Better way to write him!

Yeah, I don't blame the Erins totally, I mean,it must be hard to get priorities straight when there's 3 other writers trying to convey different emotions of a single character :/

And yeah! It's normal to he in denial about blame, but for all the love in starclan, realize YOU are the problem for once in your life, I mean fhshsbbss jeez!

I would LOVE a clan execution. To see how it would play out, and to show cats that bruh, we have The Code for a reason?? Don't mess up??
I mean I GUESS you could count Stonefur''s death as a Clan execution, but it's just more like Murder since he didn't do anything wrong.

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Swiftstar01 In reply to leafstep [2019-07-08 20:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Yas! Keep Headcannon Breezepelt alive!

Yeah, it can be difficult to communicate with a large group of people who have different views on characters.

Exactly! 

It would be interesting in a different story. I don't think the Erins  would do it but BloodClan could've done it and....I'm getting some ideas  
You can count his death as one (too sad T.T) since it was a execution but a tyrannical one. 

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leafstep In reply to Swiftstar01 [2019-07-09 05:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah, healthier Breezepelt!

I think they just need to take a Hiatus, and literally sit down and discuss what the heck is going on in the books, and with certain characters. But what do I know, I'm not an author XD

Bloodclan TOTALLY did! They attempted with Violet, but we've never actually seen  like, a reason why, with a successful Execution. 
I think you mentioned it before, but a Super Edition on a Bloodclan Cat would be badass. A like, Scourge takes a liking to a small kit, abandoned or ran away from two legs. He sees himself in the kit, and lets the kit stay, and the kit grows up to be a powerful cat that dies in the battle against Lionclan or something lol.
They did Stonefur dirty too, he was a good cat.

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Swiftstar01 In reply to leafstep [2019-07-09 07:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

Double yes! Create a warriors bible!

I so forgot that! That poor baby T.
That would be a cool idea! (I don’t remember suggesting it either lol) maybe with Bone? It would be pretty cool!

Poor Stonefur. He was such a good boy! He is the definition of honor! There was a poll for a super edition and Blackstar was one of them. It would be amazing to get a life story on him, including his life ceremony. I will bawl my eyes out when Stonefur gives him a life of forgiveness T.T

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leafstep In reply to Swiftstar01 [2019-07-09 21:33:37 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see it, it was such a short lived clan, Im curious to know more about day to day life and such.

heck yeah, best most loyal boy, done so dirty.
i think Blackstar won, which I'm so into as well. Cause I'm curious to know how the heckie Sol got him to abandon faith? Blackstar literally got 9 lives, how in the world are you gonna abandon that??
And omg, Stonefur, breaking hearts even after death man

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Swiftstar01 In reply to leafstep [2019-07-09 21:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Same! It has potential.

Cool! I would totally read it! He is a very interesting character that we nees to learn more about

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