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Leelit — Spirit
Published: 2008-04-04 06:52:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description It's a cheer who woos,
The crowd full of ney,
The silence of a boo,
Trampled, hopes and dreams,
Never seemed slayed.

So who has spirit,
Is it you,
I certainly have spirit,
What about you.

A competitive life,
Is what everything seems,
No hope for losing,
No dreams for winning.

We allhave spirit,
But does it tear us apart,
Spirit is something that never departs,
You need spirit, it's what keeps us strong,
Spirit is fun and great, all day long.

Now am I confusing,
Its the way it seems,
Spirit is confusing to all that it feeds.

So who has spirit,
Do I have it to,
We need to have spirit,
Do you agree to.
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Comments: 3

SweetMahartaSongbird [2008-10-11 06:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry reminds me of the poetry from this book called 'Sky Legs' by Irini Saavides. You should read it, i think you'd enjoy it.

Really deep poetry though.

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ShadowRose-burdened [2008-04-05 09:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Ok.......you kinda lost me on that.

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Leelit In reply to ShadowRose-burdened [2008-04-05 10:16:55 +0000 UTC]

bahaha i lost myself on it...that why i said am i confusing you during it, cos I even got confused, i think i didn't try well with this, i had no inspiration

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