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Vagabondelf [2019-06-20 21:06:27 +0000 UTC]

That's quite nice. If you're considering tweaking it a little, there's two things I'd do. First, shift your frame left or right so she's not so centred. Second - she looks odd with her heel planted and her toes off the ground. I'm afraid my eye went straight to that foot.  I'd suggest bending her foot and toes a little so she's on the ball of the foot - and make certain the foot is actually on the ground.

Overall, though, I think this looks good.  Her hands are well posed, and the different shades of red give texture to the background without being overwhelming or clashing.  

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