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lemmingtimes — Scrapped Apologies.
Published: 2010-04-07 20:12:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 443; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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one.we're seven days into this month, but I can't bring myself to turn over the calendar because I just don't want to be here.
two.
let's hope she's gone and her car will crash and lay broken in a ditch someplace. Let's hope she won't make it back through the door in the morning, because she's all screams and no thoughts, she's all eyes and too much fury, and I just can't cope with her scraps of 'it wasn't my fault' apologies any longer.
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I love the format and the thoughts in this. As for rephrasing.. In the third line it seems to me like "here" would sound better as "there." Maybe that's just me though, eh? Wonderful piece!
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Thank you so much!
So you think I should change it to 'there'? (:
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Mhmm. I mean, it's still the whole concept of not wanting to be HERE, but you're saying it as if it was THERE. Almost like you're in denial. Rather than being so obvious. Don't change it if you don't want to though. (:
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Ahhh I see, okay I'll change it (: Thanks (:
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I like the contrast of one and two. how the speaker starts off sad and regretful, but ends angry and frustrated.
It's just... interesting. Great brevity, great power. :3
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you're very welocome.
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I LOVE YOU :3
I'm sorry, I'll submit more soon!
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I LOVE YOU, TOO.
ohhh yay. ^ ^ i'm excited now~
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Yay ^.^
Hehe 
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awwww. x3
i'm pretty sure i'll smile forever.
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Ahh then I will definitely post something
But first I need to write something nice
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