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Published: 2012-11-11 19:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1369; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 13
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Description Sweet little Annerise ♥

Teach her about the world. Drifting through every dawn. How grass grows green. Until the earth is enshrouded by dusk. How the sky becomes impearled by the stars. Softly glimmering before the new day.

Shy little fawn let us go to play.


Painted in SAI
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Comments: 23

KaraNari [2012-11-11 22:31:29 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! I shall write a short critique for you! <3 I think you did a great job on this picture, but I feel that the lower half of the body and the ears is lacking in detail! The hair and face is soooo amazing, but the legs look so plain! If you were going for that look, then you achieved that, but I just feel that it doesn't balance as well since he head and chest is really well done! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Other than that, I like the colors, and she has big beautiful eyes and a cute smile! She looks adorable and proper! Great job, as usual! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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LemonPetals In reply to KaraNari [2012-11-11 23:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow thank you for such a detailed critique!
I agree with you completely! Totally missed it but since you have brought
it to my attention I can now study more and learn! Thank you! Sometimes going simple can be difficult and there is still so much to learn. I really really appreciate your input! This will really help me in the future! I'm learning so much from these critiques, they are so great

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KaraNari In reply to LemonPetals [2012-11-12 18:01:28 +0000 UTC]

tehe glad I could help!

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MagicalMadoka [2012-11-11 20:19:36 +0000 UTC]

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Ok,i want to say that this is my 1st time writing a critique! Its ok if might disagree with it~ Here it goes: I really luv the shading and coloring u did! Especially with her hair since u did well with the color brightness of it. The expression on her face goes well wit her posture/position. All in all everything is good, but work more on the legs becuz i can't really tell if her legs are criss-crossing or its just like that~ That's just the only problem, but everything is good~! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Hope this critique really helped you~! - MagicalMadoka :3

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LemonPetals In reply to MagicalMadoka [2012-11-11 20:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay thank you!
I was trying to go for a slight curtsy where one leg is slightly back
Thank you I shall work on that ^^ Much appreciated for the critique
every one helps!!!

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MagicalMadoka In reply to LemonPetals [2012-11-11 21:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome~!

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LemonPetals In reply to MagicalMadoka [2012-11-11 23:41:40 +0000 UTC]

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fauve-v [2013-05-18 13:57:31 +0000 UTC]

So cute ^_^

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MR-NIK [2012-11-30 08:59:21 +0000 UTC]

very clean linework and pro! It's so very soft and her eyes have reflections of planets in them!

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LemonPetals In reply to MR-NIK [2012-12-02 00:18:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!
You compliment was beautiful.
I just love how you use words ;u;

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ladyluck1again [2012-11-24 17:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Its adorable!

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LemonPetals In reply to ladyluck1again [2012-11-25 15:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Lady Luck!

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leinef [2012-11-14 12:07:15 +0000 UTC]

awww how pretty <3 The hair looks awesome!

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LemonPetals In reply to leinef [2012-11-17 03:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness wow! That means a lot to me coming from such an amazing artist like you! I'm so inspired right now thank you ;7;/ ♥

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Zumea [2012-11-12 19:21:18 +0000 UTC]

nice

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LemonPetals In reply to Zumea [2012-11-17 03:52:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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Zumea In reply to LemonPetals [2012-11-18 22:20:04 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Gloworm96 [2012-11-11 23:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow she's so cute!
I love how you drew her hair, it looks so detailed!
Her dress is so pretty <3

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LemonPetals In reply to Gloworm96 [2012-11-11 23:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Gloria!
You always say such kind things thank you!

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Gloworm96 In reply to LemonPetals [2012-11-12 01:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww you're welcome!

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StripeysArt [2012-11-11 22:19:28 +0000 UTC]

the colouring is soooo soft... i love it ^^!!!!!

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LemonPetals In reply to StripeysArt [2012-11-11 23:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! SO happy you like her

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StripeysArt In reply to LemonPetals [2012-11-12 21:57:42 +0000 UTC]

shes very cute :3

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