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Description Uff!

Después de MUCHO trabajo, por fin terminé.

Imaginé TODA una historia detrás de esto, pero dudo mucho que alguna vez la escriba, requeriría de mucha investigación y bleh... XD

En fin. La versión no tan corta:

Se conocen cuando son jóvenes, y cómo la vida los trata tan mal, se vuelven estafadores y asesinos. C:

Hiccup: Se harta de que su padre lo vea cómo una vergüenza y le demuestra cuán malo puede ser.
Merida: Abusa de su poder, sacando su ira y frustraciones con sus empleados.
Rapunzel: Escapa de su casa cuando descubre que Gothel no es su madre y que la ha estado engañando para sacar dinero con ella.
Jack: Después de perder a su madre y a su hermana pierde todo deseo por vivir y se vuelve ladrón.

Los cuatro se conocen un día en una fiesta en la casa DunBroch. Hiccup planeaba vaciar la bóveda para dejar de depender de su padre cuándo Merida lo descubre y le dice que va a ayudarlo si le promete que se la llevara con él. Merida esta a punto de crear una distracción, cuándo Rapunzel le tira vino en el vestido y comienzan a platicar en su habitación mientras las sirvientas les ofrecen otro vestido. Mientras tanto, Jack irrumpe en la habitación de la bóveda y asegura que no entregara a Hiccup si este le ofrece una recompensa a cambio. Jack vigila mientras Hiccup trabaja en la clave de la bóveda y cuándo Merida por fin vuelve les presenta a Rapunzel y los cuatro se vuelven compañeros de estafas.

Fin.

No se preocupen, al final se vuelven buenos.



Uff! After a LOT of work, it's finally done.

I imagined a whole story behind this, but I really doubt I would ever write it, it would require of so much research and bleh... XD

Whatevs. The not so short version:

They met each other when they're young, and since life's so hard on them, the become swindlers and murderers. C:

Hiccup: He gets sick of his father thinking he's a disapointment and he shows him how bad he can be.
Merida: She abuses of her power, taking out her wrath and frustration with her employees.
Rapunzel: Rans away from home after she finds out that Gothel's not her mother and that she's been lying to her to make money out of her.
Jack: After losing her mother and sister, he looses all the will to live and becomes a thief.

They four met at a DunBroch party. Hiccup's planning on empty the family vault, to stop depending on his father when Merida caught him and tell him that she wuld help him if he promises he would tae her away with him. Merida's about to make a diversion, when Rapunzel spits wine all over her dress and they start talking when they're waiting for the maids to bring clean dresses for them. Meanwhile Jack burst into the vault room and assures he won't blow the whistle on Hiccup if he rewards him. Jack watches over the entrance while Hiccup works on the code and when merida's back she introduces Rapunzel and they become fraud buddies.

The End.

Don't worry, they become good at the end

Hiccup & Jack (c) DreamWorks.
Rapunzel & Merida (c) Disney & Pixar.
Art (c) *Leneeh
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Comments: 41

LillieWolf [2014-10-19 08:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Love it!!!!! Very cool!

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Leneeh In reply to LillieWolf [2014-10-21 04:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LillieWolf In reply to Leneeh [2014-10-21 05:55:48 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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RachelOathkeeper [2014-07-15 21:13:43 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe it!



SOMEONE WAS ABLE TO TAME MERIDA"S HAIR!

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Leneeh In reply to RachelOathkeeper [2014-08-25 04:49:16 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't easy. But it wans¿t impossible either.

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AbygailJunior [2014-07-12 23:03:39 +0000 UTC]

I love of Punzie's face!

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Leneeh In reply to AbygailJunior [2014-08-25 04:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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AbygailJunior In reply to Leneeh [2014-08-27 21:43:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Rexyky19 [2014-07-01 06:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Why do hiccup and jack remind me of the doctor

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Leneeh In reply to Rexyky19 [2014-08-25 04:50:31 +0000 UTC]

It could be because of the suits. Ha!

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Fionnya [2014-06-28 21:57:37 +0000 UTC]

FANFIC?          

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Leneeh In reply to Fionnya [2014-08-25 04:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Maybe.. I'm on it.. Ü

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Fionnya In reply to Leneeh [2014-08-26 13:54:33 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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RoseQuartz1 [2014-03-08 00:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Eek, they look so evil. O_O
But it's seriously awesome. XD

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Leneeh In reply to RoseQuartz1 [2014-05-05 07:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, they're supposed to be.. 

Thank you!

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companioncube40 [2014-02-12 01:57:15 +0000 UTC]

What time period is this, Victorian? Were it a bit more modern it would make a great noir au. I love the idea of these four putting their talents to darker use. What they couldn't do together....

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Leneeh In reply to companioncube40 [2014-05-05 07:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Victorian it is!

Oh! Yes, I know, they could do HORRYFIYNG things.. hideous and greatness, yep yep yep!

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Evaron [2013-09-05 01:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice nice ladies, though you're creeping me out with those expressions.  

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Leneeh In reply to Evaron [2014-05-05 07:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Well that's the whole point, I think they like to creep people outwith those looks on teir eyes! 

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Startoucher [2013-08-31 00:55:38 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling they would be very successful together.

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Leneeh In reply to Startoucher [2013-08-31 08:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah!

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KokoroJunnaya [2013-07-22 18:35:39 +0000 UTC]

lol I can just imagine Hiccup's evil laugh! He would be hilarious as an evil person

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Leneeh In reply to KokoroJunnaya [2013-07-24 08:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah he will! XD


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FlordeDurazno12 [2013-07-18 04:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Tétrico! Me recuerda a una película que ví...  Igual adoras Jackunzel y Mericcup??

Me gusta la historia

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Leneeh In reply to FlordeDurazno12 [2013-07-24 07:58:56 +0000 UTC]

¿En serio? ¿Qué película? ¡Todas las películas de Victorianos que he visto son de Tim Burton! XD


OMG! Cuando están juntos, I mean, como Big Four, Mericcup & Jackunzel. En sus propias peliculas Hiccstrid, Mr. & Mrs. Fithzherbert, A Merida no la veo con nadie! XD y Frostbite! <3


Pero si, Jackunzel & Mericcup.


¡Gracias! Tal vez alguna vez escriba un drabble o algo asi! XD

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FlordeDurazno12 In reply to Leneeh [2013-07-24 19:15:36 +0000 UTC]

No es de victorianos, pero es de asesinos, creo que se llama lazos siniestros. Lo siento, pero no me gusta Jackunzel. Mericcup mas o menos. Me gusta Hiccunzel y Jarida. Hice una lista de mis parejas preferidas, Mericcup está en segundo lugar. Hiccup x Astrid como en el sexto. Cada quien sus gustos.

De nada, yo a veces me imagino que Rapunzel es excluida del grupo y se va de la casa donde viven a correr aventuras con Toothless. Y luego los demás la buscan. Me encanta usar mi imaginación. XD

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Torosiken-II [2013-05-27 10:16:02 +0000 UTC]

MEH. I LOVE VICTORIANS ERA

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Leneeh In reply to Torosiken-II [2013-07-24 07:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Bby, you know howmuch I love Victorians!

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Torosiken-II In reply to Leneeh [2013-07-26 11:16:20 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT MORE(?)

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Rapunzel13 [2013-05-20 23:24:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the expression on jacks face!

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Leneeh In reply to Rapunzel13 [2013-07-24 07:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he's so Jack!

Thank you!

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Rapunzel13 In reply to Leneeh [2013-07-26 23:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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blackrosemetal [2013-05-20 03:27:15 +0000 UTC]

muy buen dibujo y la historia igual xD
aun que me hubiera gustado que fuera mas larga :3

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Leneeh In reply to blackrosemetal [2013-05-20 04:13:42 +0000 UTC]

¡Gracias!
Pues la verdad es que me están entrando ganas de escribir bien detallado eso que relaté. Tal vez lo haga.
MUCHAS GRACIAS!

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blackrosemetal In reply to Leneeh [2013-05-20 04:42:59 +0000 UTC]

de nada
si lo haces sera un gusto poder leerlo

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LilMonsterGurl [2013-05-20 03:16:01 +0000 UTC]

No affiance, but I dont know whether thats cute or creepy

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Leneeh In reply to LilMonsterGurl [2013-05-20 04:14:49 +0000 UTC]

I'll go with creepy, yes.

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LilMonsterGurl In reply to Leneeh [2013-05-20 05:05:29 +0000 UTC]

No comment...

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bloom27472 [2013-05-20 02:26:58 +0000 UTC]

This looks totally awesome sissy!!!!!
I think it would make a great story
And of course they become good in the end, they're the Big Four! Goodness is in their veins!! XDD lol

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Leneeh In reply to bloom27472 [2013-05-20 04:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Thank you Erika!
Yeah, I think so too. Reemption in the end and all of that.. I mean they would not be as evil as they look, but.. yes..
I might write it.
Thankies!

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bloom27472 In reply to Leneeh [2013-05-20 18:21:40 +0000 UTC]

You should

hehehe
you're welcomes!!

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