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lenihanfighter — Stay
Published: 2003-09-30 12:03:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 15
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How do I even dare toThink these foul thoughts and
Look at you as if nothing’s wrong?
What can I do if I
Can’t concentrate and
I desire is to be with you all along?
Take me to
A place so far away from here and
Be with me
And sooth all of my fears
But I am miles and miles apart from you
Still I hold on to a thread of hope…
Of eternal love…
How can I ever tell
My true feelings to you
If you don’t listen to what I say?
How can I ever show
What you mean to me
If all you do is looking away?
Take me to
A place so far away from here and
Be with me
And sooth all of my fears
But I am miles and miles apart from you
Still I hope that you will forgive me
My love…
And that we will stay together
Forever…
And still I hold on to a thread of hope
I’m waiting, my love…
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Comments: 4
Wow!
I adore love poems like this. It's not necessarily only a poem of romantic love. I could see this aplying to so many different kinds of relationships. It's something I think many could relate to. And isn't that the beauty of a poem?
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^_^;; I guess. Glad you like it!!!
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Wauw. I must admit I had to read some phrases several times, but it's worth it ^-^
I think it's a lovely poem, great rythm (probably because you wrote it to a song... which is a great idea btw)
I think the song will speak to a lot of hearts, and who knows, they might even record the song one day
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Heh, I could wish that, but I don't think Michael Flatley and those guys will allow it. Legal stuff and copyright and so on.
But glad you like it! And thanks for the fave!!!!!
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