Comments: 7
Eranova [2009-02-28 06:43:17 +0000 UTC]
I loved the story that you told here. Greatly emotional and dramatic on Belle's part, and you really had her character accurately portrayed. Also very clever on Dr. Grey's part with the drug, both incapacitating her so she won't get in his way, yet at the same time kept in a (mostly) harmless state of illusion for him to observe.
Well, I'm not really sure what else to say. I'm just gonna repeat again that I loved the story told here, and how in the end, even if Belle lost, it really wasn't that bad of a loss with what she's gained from the good doctor. Good luck to you, sir, and should you and Dr. Avery Grey pull the win in this one, know that Belle and I shall willingly bow out with pride.
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Leohan In reply to Eranova [2009-02-28 10:15:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! glad you liked it. As I told you a lot of time before I would, I enjoyed writing your char a lot, and if I win canonically, I would be really glad to have a SE with Avery carrying out his word in a not so distant future, if you don't mind me doing that.
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Leohan In reply to Tamasha [2009-02-27 18:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you think it ended up well, I was afraid I would do it to cliche...
Thanks a bunch again for your corrections, were it not for you I would maybe be trying something really impossible.
And yeah, you deserve the credit, just sorry that MLK is just too much cool for you to handle...
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Tamasha In reply to Leohan [2009-02-27 18:49:20 +0000 UTC]
Nah, happy to help. I have all that spare time, might as well put it to use. OTL
My suggestion for the thoughts vs direct speech controversy would be to leave everything else as it is, and use italics for thoughts. How does that sound?
And pssht, well, darn. :< I'll get there eventually, just you wait!
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