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Demoness-Melody [2012-08-23 18:54:14 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoy watching Edward trek through Nothing and watching him learn, as well as Emi's long cameo. It helps people understand how he works a bit so that if you make it to round 2, it'll be a bit easier to understand his motives and write them.
Edward having keys now is interesting because they can come into play in so many different ways.
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Leohan In reply to Demoness-Melody [2012-08-23 19:18:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah if I win the keys will pop up again. Edward doesn't do anything without a plan.
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LadyRiverlark [2012-08-23 17:15:37 +0000 UTC]
You've heard most of the things I've had to say, but I shall leave them here as well for posterity's sake!
This first section explores Nothing well, setting up for future time spent there. It also showcases Edward's priorities and information gathering well. He's so unashamed of who and what he is. Confidence is attractive.
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Leohan In reply to LadyRiverlark [2012-08-23 17:33:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah you sure did tell me ^^
Yeah I struggled to decide if this first section should have gone in the Round, but finally decided that it helped further Edward's character, make a sort of connection with the Audition and generally lighten the mood with some jokes before the Kleio part.
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LadyRiverlark In reply to Leohan [2012-08-23 19:00:46 +0000 UTC]
This section does have a different mood than most of the round, but I appreciate it for that. It provides structure connecting this round to the audition, to other people's characters, and to the overarching story of the Exchange, going on into future rounds potentially.
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