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Leohan In reply to legolass1119 [2012-08-31 04:06:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And I'll be working on that I guess. I think I didn't put so much thought into what my opponents would have to deal with here.
They will both remain crazy strong because that was the concept, but I will try to see if I can give you some angle to tackle them.
Thanks again
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LadyRiverlark [2012-08-30 23:36:45 +0000 UTC]
Okay, this might be a weird question, but where did he get his last name from? His mother is listed as Stephanie Robins (aka S14) and his father is Richard Daveson (aka Victory). So why is he James Joyner?
Also, he really doesn't have a lot of physical weaknesses, does he? If it came down to a fight, he'd win eventually just from sheer invulnerability. I tried imagining my characters fighting him as a measure of power scale. My primary would pretty much be stuck trying to get him to sink into the ground or pass out somehow, given that his/her damage resistance and super strength are much lower than Titan's. My secondary, on the other hand, could potentially cure him, though killing him would be easier for her. She'd still have to get close enough to touch him though and it would take a while to wear away at his accumulated mass if she was trying to cure him.
That said, I'd suggest emphasizing his mental/psychological weaknesses a bit more so that people aren't stumped at how to defeat him if it comes to the wrong match-up of powers. I like seeing interesting takes on life with superpowers.
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Leohan In reply to LadyRiverlark [2012-08-30 23:49:59 +0000 UTC]
...Did I give Victory a name? I don't remember doing that... Well gonna change it in a while.
...I would have to check your characters, but I guess that ultimately it comes down to "using creativity". James is a terrible fighter after all.
Emphasizing them more, though... I can do that.
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LadybugScribbles [2012-08-30 22:45:43 +0000 UTC]
How did James come by his alias? Is that something his mom thought up for him or was it placed on him by someone else?
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Leohan In reply to LadybugScribbles [2012-08-30 22:48:10 +0000 UTC]
His mom absolutely enforced it on him. It will appear in the audition
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Ro9ge [2012-08-30 21:41:56 +0000 UTC]
Ok, before I get to your character personality and stuff, the inner nerd in me has to complain about a few things. Keep in mind that this is just...nerd stuff, so if you want to ignore it you can feel absolutely free to. I just tend to over-analyze stuff that I'm interested in. And really, this is an OCT with superheroes and super-villains after all, nothing's supposed to make complete sense.
Oh well, CHEMICAL ENGINEERING POWERS ACTIVATE!
First, not throwing things far makes no sense at all. If he can throw a very heavy object the distance as a normal baseball, then he has enough force to throw a normal baseball farther. That's just a basic law of physics, F=MA. Throwing something 1/100 the Mass of an iron grate gives an Acceleration 100 times as high unless the Force of his throwing arm is suddenly weaker depended on what he's holding. Am I just misunderstanding you? Or is this just a suspension of disbelief thing?
Also, just wondering, is he still made up of carbon now that he's so heavy? Like, a carbon based life form after everything that happened? Or...does this really not matter one bit?
Aaaand I don't understand the eardrum thing. Does that mean if I turn into a fly and go in and then back out of his ear I gain his powers and be very massive? Or would I just be absorbed into him and die? Does breaking his eardrum hurt him alot, or is it even possible because of his mass? Or is his ear actually the only way to inject any kind of substance into his body, since other entrances might go in but not be able to get inside his bloodstream? If so, how does he eat? Does he even know about this? Does that mean he has a perfect memory for anything he hears, since it becomes a part of him? Can he like analyze it in his head? Would breaking his eardrum keep him from gaining more weight and help him lead a happy life?
Last but not least, the hairs on your skin have nerves connecting from their tips to below the dermis. So does this mean they don't work like they should? I mean I really like the unfeeling power, I'm just curious.
Can you tell I just came out of an organic polymer class? >_>
Anyway, now to the character. Darn this is a cool idea in how you execute it. Take something done before and show how much it would actually suck if you had to live with it. I wonder how much we'll be seeing that in this tournament. I especially love the origin of his powers, very creative. He sounds like he could be a challenge to write for, like keeping any fight scenes interesting. There's plenty of ways to do that, though, given the way his powers would effect everything around him. Considering you have a rainbow flashing icon, I doubt you'll have trouble with that. I...hope if he makes it through here he doesn't grow much more and keeps a good weight. I'd hate to see him fall to the center of the earth and make it blow up or something. That would be sad
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Leohan In reply to Ro9ge [2012-08-30 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh, and about your final words... Yeah, I'll touch upon that in the Audition and probably in the entries depending on how far I can get. James isn't untrained by accident. He tries to be light, to weight as little as possible within his limitations, but he knows that growing up is a thing that will happen eventually, and he wants to deal with it as soon as possible.
...I will take my shot since you seem to be the best person to answer that, considering my previous answers, should James be immune to fire, or should the fire be more powerful because it burns on James? His atoms are too resistant for outside damage, but at the same time he IS organic matter, just heavier...
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Ro9ge In reply to Leohan [2012-08-30 23:16:10 +0000 UTC]
Hm...well he should be as susceptible to smoke inhalation as everybody else. He still needs to breathe.
In terms of heat...being heavier means higher mass. That means that he might be more resistant to heat transfer, yes. I wouldn't necessarily say immune, just resistant in a factor depending on just how massive he is. He'd still get damaged at a high enough temperature, it's just that it would take alot longer for his actual body to reach that temperature. And considering that he can lift the Eiffel tower, I'd say he wouldn't be hurt very much. But I don't think he should just swim in lava or anything, since that's a bit too extreme even for him and the time factor can add up quickly. At least he'd finally feel something, though.
I can't say the exact effect without research, but think of it like this. If something's really hot then we can get burned really fast, right? If it's after about 0.1 seconds, then for someone 100 times heavier, it would be after 10 seconds, etc.
There's also one more thing - if the heat somehow gets amplified by his own 'heavy field' so to speak, then it would effect him as it would anybody else. I guess that's up to you, though. If waves and radiation get amplified, then energy might as well.
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Leohan In reply to Ro9ge [2012-08-30 23:23:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah he is susceptible to smoke inhalation, didn't think of putting that in weaknesses.
Mhh... Hard to choose about that. I will have time to choose later. I guess that the fire would last longer to burn him initially, but once he actually is on fire it would act as normal fire as he is the combustible.
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Leohan In reply to Ro9ge [2012-08-30 22:04:52 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, about the first thing...
Interesting, makes sense in a way I guess, but once you release the object, can it have a speed greater than the one your arm has, or is it limited by the speed of your arm? I know that speed in one factor, sure, but I want to know if the thrown object can surpass the speed the throwing mechanism had. I will trust you that anything thrown by James will leave Earth's atmosphere and go to space, I just want to know how fast.
Second: He is made of carbon. And every other thing that make a human body, including water and oxygen, and I answer the thing about eating: Everything that enters his body gets heavier molecules. He is made of everything everyone else is made of, just heavier.
Third: Honestly I put the ear thing to throw the guy a bone. If I didn't the sound waves would have been too weak for him to listen and he would have been deaf as well, but yeah... I guess that a fly could enter his ear, and also if you figure it out you could, in fact, pierce his head from his eardrum. No, no perfect memory. It becomes a part of him as in enters his field of everything is heavy
Last but not least: If no force has the power to move those hairs, how will you feel?
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Ro9ge In reply to Leohan [2012-08-30 22:29:36 +0000 UTC]
First...oh wow huge fail oh my part. This is why I'm not a physics major. Yeah, good point. The object being thrown isn't subject to the same force that the arm's using necessarily, just sharing the same velocity. Just like a fork-lift can't cause a baseball to go into space, you can't throw the ball super far. And then rockets detach their previous parts, they don't get a speed boost, they just keep on going, requiring less force to increase in speed now that the mass is lower. So yeah, unless you actively supply a force on the object somehow, it would just share your arm's speed.
Although punching or even flicking is something different. He'd probably just destroy anything he punched, though. I'll reply again if I realize something more after talking to other geek buddies, but I think you're right in this case.
Second: Thanks! That's just the chemist in me thinking about reactions and what not. I wonder if this also means that radiation doesn't effect him?
Third: Aah. That makes sense, thanks. I...wonder if he could amplify sound waves that way, then? Or...oh gosh what happens when he goes to the bathroom? Can the pipes handle all that increase in mass?
Last: Oh duh I knew that. >_< Not my day. It's like saying touching a fingernail should produce a sensation. They're actually the same material. The white parts at the ends of the hair is just like the white parts at the bottom of the fingernail, so only the movement is detected at the part inside your body. You're right, I never thought of the hairs not ever moving. I guess combs are out of the question, but his own hands could probably move his hairs. If that's true, then he could feel what it's like to ...er... make contact with his own skin, just nothing else.
tl;dr: Nerd fail, ignore me. This is what I get for commenting during the first week of classes. XD
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Leohan In reply to Ro9ge [2012-08-30 22:47:34 +0000 UTC]
1st: No problem. Had to think a lot about this one but good to hear confirmation.
2nd: I guess it depends on what radiation. I spent a long time deciding that UV rays would make him tan since they have to be in superficial contact with the atoms of the outer skin, and then they would become a part of him.
3rd: The bathroom thing wouldn't be a problem, really... Not for the pipes at least. A really heavy space would be created inside of his ear, but nothing else. Once the stuff leaves his body, they have normal weight. James could even get rid of an arm and it would weigh normally. He doesn't know that though, and won't try.
4th: His hair was once getting too long. He plucked each of his hairs one by one.
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Leohan In reply to Ro9ge [2012-08-30 23:27:53 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome. This character has complicated physics, so it is good to discuss them with someone else to check if you are doing things right/get new ideas!
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