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Leonidas23 — Cohl, The Incompetent Ghost Train Conductor
Published: 2013-06-04 00:00:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1396; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Sorry that I've been so long. You can thank my VG Switches for that, shifting me to different games quickly like Earthbound and Megaman X. Because of that, I haven't been able to do, well, anything on DeviantART...But then I get some requests for . The request is doing some of his partners and bosses from his Paper Mario game, Paper Mario The Necklace of Life. So after a long time of procrastinating, here's one of the partners: Cohl.
Cohl is a incompetent conductor of the mysterious Ghost Train, keeping the train in order so it can perform its role at a safe haven for many ghosts. However, the Ghost Train was taken over. So when Mario arrived and asked about why the Ghost Train's been kidnapping people, Cohl explained that some people hijacked the train. He then joined Mario's team to take back the Ghost Train.
He's basically the Lady Bow/Vivian/Masaboone of Necklace of Life, being able to hide Mario on the field. His battle abilities are as followed:
Dark Claw: slashes an enemy to deal damage
Transparent: makes Mario invisible to avoid any attacks. Requires 2 FP
Incinerate: traps an enemy in a hot coal-filled barrier to instantly kill it. Requires 6 FP (super rank)
Heavy Metal: creates a mini train to ram through all enemies. Requires 12 FP (ultra rank)
By the way, all I had to work with is a sketch. While that's not bad at all, I was never told about the color scheme of Cohl, especially with that hat. So if it's wrong, Bumpty King, then please tell me and I'll fix it.
Tell me in the comments what you think. DON'T STEAL!
(Cohl, as well as Paper Mario Necklace of Life, belong to )
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Comments: 11
Well, there's another story I gotta read. XD
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Whoa! This is awesome! I'll admit I had Imagined a different color for the hat, but now I'm liking your color scheme MUCH better. Great Job. To quote Harry Hoo from the old sitcom Get Smart, "Amazing".
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So I guess I lucked out on the color scheme, huh? Good.
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When you put it that way, I guess you're right. Also, If this helps, I have a move set for Koopskee.
Shell Toss: Rams into one enemy with shell. FP 0
Power Shell: Rams into all ground enemies in shell. FP 2
Gale Shell: Rapidly Spins around Mario in his shell making a wind shield around Mario, Increasing his speed. FP 4
Tornado Shell: Spins in his shell really fast forming a tornado around himself, then dashes into all ground enemies, significantly damaging them and has the small chance to blow some away. FP 7
I hope that helps.
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Alright. It might take a while (thanks to my VG Switch), but I'll get them done.
Leaves you with more time to hopefully post the sketches of the bosses.
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Indeed, I'll get to the boss sketches soon, but not right away, Today I just made a guy on an MMORPG called Digimon Masters, and I'm still trying to get the hang of it.
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Well, it's been a bit of a while since you've posted anything. You did a good job drawing Cohl here.
I also think you've done pretty well with making up Cohl's colors, and they seem rather realistic, especially with the light colors of the hat contrasting against his dark head. Although, I don't know if it's just me, but I think that the ribcages should be a bit of a darker color, to contrast from the light color of his body and hands.
Anyways, you've done pretty well here. I can't wait to see ~Paperbumptyking13 's other partners in your style.
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Thanks.
Well, the ribcage-like body is made of metal, as he said in his story. As are the hands.
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