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Leoparda — The yawn - de geeuw
Published: 2006-02-07 22:46:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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Description English:

Yawn
A lonely gasp for air
Classes crawl by,
nothing stays the same.
Yawn, i feel alone.

Dutch:

Geeuw
Een eenzame hap naar lucht
Lessen kruipen voorbij,
niets blijft hetzelfde.
Geeuw, ik voel me alleen.
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Comments: 7

lesbokel [2006-02-08 16:41:25 +0000 UTC]

cool

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patrickbateman [2006-02-08 14:55:48 +0000 UTC]

so neat and simple also good well done

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Leoparda In reply to patrickbateman [2006-02-08 15:33:51 +0000 UTC]

ty

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Herro-Roo [2006-02-08 03:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, I always love open format poetry, well done of course ^^

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Leoparda In reply to Herro-Roo [2006-02-08 12:33:48 +0000 UTC]

ty

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Nimbus-Cloud [2006-02-07 23:35:13 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty good.
A great poem doesn't need a rhyme scmeme, as you clearly showed us here.

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Leoparda In reply to Nimbus-Cloud [2006-02-07 23:36:43 +0000 UTC]

i know, thats why its open

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