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Leptocyon — Monsters of Hoenn - part 11.1

Published: 2012-06-27 17:56:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2033; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 48
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Description What is this? Did I surprise you with such a quick upload?
Well, better used to this because I plan to do this like that for some time. (It was supposed to come out even earlier but I had to learn how to work with Manga studio and that kind of slowed me a bit ).
From now on I'll upload each part separated to smaller sequences. I decided to do so when I realized that this part would be waaay too big and waaay over DA size limits. And instead of shrinking it and lowering its quality I decided to divide it (same story is divided to three parts, let's say it that way).
Benefits of this? Well, updates will come quicker, I will be happier in editing every part (it was really exhausting editing 16 pages, adding speech balloons on them and everything in one piece; I always ended up being nervous and hating that part and me because of deciding to start a nuzlocke comic) and everyone is happy.

hehe, this time some interesting things are going to happen. Just wait to see what I've prepared for you for the next time

So, what do you think who will have an honor to be visited by Archie and his team in the part 11.2?

Sorry for the shitty quality of this one. It took me some time to get used to how Manga studio works and that's the reason why some panels are not in the same line.
Blame scanner for the gray stains which are where they shouldn't be. I cleared most of them but some of them I overlooked and I was lazy to come back to them later.

Pointing out grammar mistakes is very much welcomed.

Part 10
You are on part 11.1
Part 11.2

First page
Cover

Enjoy everybody
Leptocyon



P.S. Next part maybe won't come so quick. I had some pretty nice things on my to-do list which I want to work on and I just started with playing Platinum nuzlocke. I'm planning it to turn it into comic...once...maybe. Blame her for that. She didn't want to give me peace. She and her story are stuck in my head and won't come out. Probably anything won't happen from it but like to have it in my head.
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Comments: 72

Leptocyon In reply to ??? [2012-08-21 14:27:23 +0000 UTC]

well, Grovyle learn Leaf Blade at level 29 and at this part of game Nava was at level 20 so no wonders how she can't learn it yet. That also leaves space for showing how learning new attack can be a long process (especially for those strong attacks) and yeah, all that serves to make this more "real life"-like (if we can even compare those two worlds )

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OddPenguin In reply to Leptocyon [2012-08-21 15:17:34 +0000 UTC]

heh, for sure, this generation wasn't the best at move pools, especially pokemon not native for this gen, so lots of the moves are higher levels

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TotoRee12 [2012-07-21 21:26:47 +0000 UTC]

I really like how you're portraying Team Magma and Aqua in your comic! They're much more badass than they are in the game!

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Leptocyon In reply to TotoRee12 [2012-07-21 21:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes but even here TA seems to be trying more to sound/be terrifying than on actually being effective. TM's leader is a bit more clever when it comes to that so this two teams WILL have some colisions in the future

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TotoRee12 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-21 21:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh, I'm really looking forward to that!!~

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EdyD [2012-07-08 00:40:44 +0000 UTC]

Its the Mother!!! i know it!
and OMG! So cute!
Courtney! and that girl that talked to Archie talking about the thing!
yea does two! Ome! so cute! but i have to admit Courtney wins! lol
and well i forgot the name of team magma's leader... i think it is Maxie... im not sure, but that guy
i have to say, good work, he looks MUCH older than many people, lol
and lol Team aqua looks like a teen hangout, lol
and cool! Archie looks ripped!

And the team...
I see, having a bad time Nava... dont worry youll get there... eventually...
and lol fail gust, XD
and aww, wally didnt talk this time
what will happen next

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Leptocyon In reply to EdyD [2012-07-08 01:05:50 +0000 UTC]

oh, do you?

Yup, I think I love my Courtney

hahahaha, I knew that you'll point that out XD
But yeah, I like how Maxie turned out to be aging, actually XD

hahahahaha, teen hangout hahahah, that is soooo gonna be used somewhere. So gonna be used.

Exactly. I was surprised myself that I didn't prepare text for him. He actually wouldn't even be shown if I hadn't toss him on that panel with Brendan (in original he wasn't there) LOL

mmm, some nice and adorable things I just looove part 11.2

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EdyD In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 03:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh and for some reason i miss the Courtney thing, and well i have to say I really like how she looks specially her hair! i have to admit im a sucker for short hair

oh and i wanted to ask before i forget, is there a reason for the name you choose? or are they random?

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Leptocyon In reply to EdyD [2012-07-08 09:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Names for who? TA and TM admins and bosses have their official names to avoid misunderstandings but I made up names for other grunts by simple formula. First name that cam to me and for what I think it could work for that person I give it to him/her. Lazy, lol. The same is for other characters that don't appear in game.
For Pokemon I use same method. Although when I catch some cool PKMN which I want to use for longer time I think more about name, I try to find one that could suit better or be easy to remember (Tsunami, for example). Other unlucky ones get stupid unoriginal and boring names (Nimmy is an example. She is an example for super-lazy coming up with names)

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EdyD In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 14:08:19 +0000 UTC]

lol, ok, cool
Nimmy did sounded kinda weird, to be honest,

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Leptocyon In reply to EdyD [2012-07-08 14:20:29 +0000 UTC]

Of course when it's stupid XD It was literally the first thing that came to my mind and since she was meant to be HM slave I didn't bother with coming up with something better. Tentalaziness.

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EdyD In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-09 02:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Lol, so many tentajokes! XD its tentafunny!
so how about Nava?

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Leptocyon In reply to EdyD [2012-07-09 15:19:27 +0000 UTC]



ah, Nava is different story ^^
You see, some people from my school and I had some fun and we were twisting our names in a way that we switched last and first syllable in the name. One girl is called Vana and when we switched that I pronounced Nava and it sounded so good that it stayed in my head for some time. When time came to name treecko that was the name I chose for her

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EdyD In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-09 18:18:34 +0000 UTC]

lol, ok, that pretty cool

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EdyD In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 02:58:27 +0000 UTC]

i wanna use that icon!

Maybe I do
lol

XD, it just good to know that people do age XD
but again! good job!

Yay! i help with something funny that may happen in the future! lol
lets see how it will turn out! lol,

Well atleast he appeared

cant wait!

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Leptocyon In reply to EdyD [2012-07-08 09:37:18 +0000 UTC]

that icon is awesome!! I so abuse it everywhere I can

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EdyD In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 13:49:46 +0000 UTC]

lol, i have notice!

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Leptocyon In reply to EdyD [2012-07-08 14:25:10 +0000 UTC]

hahahahaha




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eatorbeaten [2012-07-06 19:20:32 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THESE~~~

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Leptocyon In reply to eatorbeaten [2012-07-06 19:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm really glad that you do. I appreciate that watch

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eatorbeaten In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 19:29:33 +0000 UTC]

np, keep up the amazing work.

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Leptocyon In reply to eatorbeaten [2012-07-06 19:31:33 +0000 UTC]

I'll do my best

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WDino92 [2012-07-05 09:50:52 +0000 UTC]

very good nuzlocke pokemon comic.
poor thea
i lost some pokis, too. most because a critical hit

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-05 13:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it

Yup, those critical hits. Always present. -.- I don't know a nuzlocker who didn't had bad experiences with those things

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 12:35:39 +0000 UTC]

i play in time heartgold and ares my poor zubat dies by bugsy and his scyther one hit quickattack. ramita a rattata die by a critical hit of a 2 lv under nidoran dobbelkick. my own nidoran dies 1 lv before it evolved -_-
but im realy worse that darwin (the name was soo passed) my eevee dies by rollout 5. i could only see how it dies and i cant do anything because no other could overlive that attack

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-06 12:38:25 +0000 UTC]

uuu, rollouts. I hate those. -.- But I like to use them
You named Eevee Darwin? Now that's the probably most suitable name for those creatures I've ever heard

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 12:41:46 +0000 UTC]

thx but he is dead

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-06 13:04:42 +0000 UTC]

I understood that :I
Eevee are always special. I've never lost one by myself, I took more care of them when I get one than on other PKMN in team XD

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 13:32:33 +0000 UTC]

more like your starter ?

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-06 13:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Depends which one. I don't like starters from all generation the same. For example, don't put me in a situation when I have to choose between eevee evolution and torterra. But if I go with gen 1 or 3 starters I probably wouldn't think too long (I played with all of them so many times that now I dump them out of the team myself. heh. They became boring to me to play with when there are so many PKMN to train )

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 13:42:56 +0000 UTC]

yeah right in the 5 gen. i bought pkm black and switch oshwato with ralts

only for just for fun

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-06 13:48:10 +0000 UTC]

yeah, they become boring to start with after so many times playing that way. And they occupy one place in my party so if they are overused by me and if I get a chance to catch seventh PKMN which I want to train I gladly box them.

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 14:14:29 +0000 UTC]

yes i thought the same and now is ralts a gallade and lv 96
my team in white was only unova pokis in black i have a mixteam ;D

and now we know that there are in b2w2
the correct possibility
black was funny with no unova pokis.
so i have a ground-idea how b2w2 will be in this year. maybe i start a nuzlocke challenge blind then

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-06 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]

lv 96 0.o I never sharpen a single PKMN to such a high level

No way! I always first need to go with regular run so I can catch all those rare PKMN and then I go with nuzlocke run ^^

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-06 21:57:46 +0000 UTC]

he is funny

by the way i have one question.

come these pokemon from a right game
(you catch them train them and build a story with them) or is this comic pure fiction?^^

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-07 14:01:15 +0000 UTC]

This comic is based on a nuzlocke run I played last summer. All pokemon that Althea catch were actually caught in game and every PKMN that die died in a game too (I'll try to synchronize places and events under which PKMN was caught/died in a game but to make it more interesting it won't happen in exactly same way)

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-07 15:22:32 +0000 UTC]

WOW
this make the story for me better.
is good to know that you dont kill pokis that you dislike in you comic.
I'm really looking forward to the continued and thx for all answers
was nice to tell about pokemon
in your next comic do you hear from me again ;D

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-07 17:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, this comic will continue so I really hope to hear your comment again

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-07 19:31:04 +0000 UTC]

sure i will almost daily check if you continue^^


continue when you have the desire and it makes or fun

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-07 20:30:57 +0000 UTC]

You don't need to daily check to see when I post something new. You can click on that "+Watch" button and every time I submit something you'll get a notification.

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-07 21:39:34 +0000 UTC]

k i m knew devianart but i make me only in this mounth an account

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-07 22:53:44 +0000 UTC]

If you need any help or have any questions don't hesitate to ask me ^^
I'll help if I know how

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 10:56:02 +0000 UTC]

thx

my english is not the best and sometimes i think others cannt understand what i write.
than it is good that i can ask someone C:

also our talk gave me the loss to continue in my nuzlocke and i m happy to catch newton my Chinchou

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-08 11:07:03 +0000 UTC]

hehe, it is sometimes hard to understand but I guess I manage

Chichou!! Oh, I love them and lanturn I'm using one by myself in an OC tournament I'm applying to

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 11:33:30 +0000 UTC]

i love it too^^

i was very happy to catch newton and hope that he overlive morty

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-08 11:37:35 +0000 UTC]

haha, everyone is afraid of Morty. And Whitney D

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 11:57:01 +0000 UTC]

whitney was more easyer like in the original games.

i was afraid of her and was not at bugsy. poor ares (zubat) one critical quickattack and it was over for him.
she was very easy.

but i have a strategy to win without greate losses against morty^^

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-08 14:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Which is....?

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WDino92 In reply to Leptocyon [2012-07-08 15:24:47 +0000 UTC]

i use otto my ditto who is in the pension and train there.
(i train dittos eveytime in the pension) as a normal pokis gohst attacks dont have any effect and i can boost him with x-items.
when ditto is in trouble nils come on plan.
as a normal pokemon he has no problems against ghost attacks, too.
his attack extrasensory is also good against the gastly evolution. (you know they are poison pokis,too)

the last parts then is used
mecki my quilava and give him a maronberry. i hope he is faster than genger and could attack it with flamewheel. if hypnosis let him sleep the berry wake him up and mecki can use a 2. flamewheel. the bad def of genger could enough to kill it and its over.
i see tomorrow if it is a good plan. today i train a bit more that they are ca the same lv like genger.
wish me luck

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Leptocyon In reply to WDino92 [2012-07-08 16:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Yup, sounds good. Although when I play nuzlocke I like to have PKMN who I'll use in a gym battle at least two levels higher than leader's strongest PKMN. Just in case. And that even isn't enough sometimes :I

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