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LeslieElena19 In reply to ??? [2015-06-17 14:23:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^
That's cool XD
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LeslieElena19 [2015-06-16 18:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank You guys for every comment..
I've already decided that she won't be a pasta oc.
She will be just mine OC that isn't related to any game, series etc. because I want to keep her - I too much like her right now X3
Um.. soo.. yea again thanks for every advise. They will help me in the future~
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TipsyAi [2015-06-16 04:02:53 +0000 UTC]
May i give my own input? I know a few others have covered some things already.
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TipsyAi [2015-06-16 18:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Yea sure if ya want to.
Buy I've already decided that she won't be a pasta oc.
She will be just mine OC that isn't related to any game, series etc. because I want to keep her - I too much like her right now X3
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TipsyAi In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-16 19:05:10 +0000 UTC]
Ah well then my tips will be not needed XD got to admit she is adorable, though if you wanna keep her being able to move at the aleep of sound and the ultrasonic abilities she couldn't be human ya know?
In the marvel universe she could be a mutant or an experiment gone wrong XD in fantasy hell it's all up to you cause fantasy is so broad <3
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TipsyAi [2015-06-16 19:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Well I know..
Yea I realized this after couple of hours after I submit her X'D Maybe I'll put her into Marvel fandom.. I don't know XD I probably should..
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TipsyAi In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-16 19:17:18 +0000 UTC]
That would be awesome. I do suggest looking into the mutants and their different types of powers they have. I have a marvel oc who is a tech and telekinesis powers =×
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TipsyAi [2015-06-16 19:26:36 +0000 UTC]
Well I will think about that..
Although she doesn't fit into Marvel for me.. dunno why.. she just .. don't. Maybe that's because I made her to be pasta..
Well for know she is not-game, movie etc OC XD
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TipsyAi [2015-06-16 20:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Yea... but I kinda make some history for her so XDD
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TipsyAi In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-16 20:29:23 +0000 UTC]
well darling its up to you. if you do wanna keep her in the CP fandom i can give you some links for tips to help her out =]
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TipsyAi [2015-06-16 20:31:20 +0000 UTC]
No no no she isn't in any fandom X'D
She is random OC that isn't from any game, series, movie etc XD
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TipsyAi In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-16 20:34:53 +0000 UTC]
so she is fandomless..i would say just do some research to deiced when you want to put her in a fandom. I have an OC like that..fandomless but i can change things to make her fit into almost any fandom.
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TipsyAi [2015-06-16 20:36:46 +0000 UTC]
Yup she is ^^
Nah I like her being fandomless X'D
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NotSoGr8Girl [2015-06-15 23:15:48 +0000 UTC]
I honestly don't think she should be a creepypasta oc... And I'm not the only one cx
But hey, my opinions are just that.
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LeslieElena19 In reply to NotSoGr8Girl [2015-06-16 18:19:01 +0000 UTC]
Yea ..
I've already decided that she won't be a pasta oc.
She will be just mine OC that isn't related to any game, series etc. because I want to keep her - I too much like her right now X3
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UltraMarinaa [2015-06-15 21:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Ok skoro wszyscy komentują to ja też XD
Generalnie mało straszna jak dla mnie ://
Kolorowe pasemka mało jak dla mnie pasują na CP postać (strasznie kojarzą mi się z tymi durnymi the killerkami bo większość ma pasemka)
Motyw ze struną jest faktycznie spoko (licząc fakt że próba uduszenia struną może się kończyć odcięciem głowy co daje dodatkowy mroczny efekt)
Słyszenie ultradźwięków przejdzie ale śpiewanie lub rozmowa w ultradźwiękach jest jak dla mnie mega przesadą (zwłaszcza śpiewanie)
Ale tego podróżowania dźwiękiem już kompletnie nie ogarniam. Jak to ma działać? Dotyka głośnika i nagle mi wyskoczy z laptopa? XDDD
Jej wygląd może i jest uroczy ale kompletnie nie pasuje mi na CP, bardziej przypomina anime OC albo coś. Kocia bluza kompletnie niszczy klimat CP,
jak sama nazwa wskazuje CREEPY pasta co oznacza że postacie powinny być straszne, a jak ją widzę to widzę zwykłą uroczą dziewczyneczkę anime taką jak są tu:
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I nie wiem dlaczego ma fioletowe oczy.. to nie jest sonicowa postać gdzie postacie mogą mieć fioletowe czy różowe oczy, to również jest jak dla mnie za urocze na CP Może lepiej by to wyglądało gdyby to nie był chibik, ale ref jaki tutaj dałaś wcale nie przekonuje mnie do niej jako do postaci CP ://
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LeslieElena19 In reply to UltraMarinaa [2015-06-16 18:17:08 +0000 UTC]
.. więcej się nie dało ?
I tak już postanowiłam, że Note nie będzie pastą tylko zwykłym ockiem niezwiązanym z żadną grą, serialem itp bo za bardzo ją polubiłam X'D
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UltraMarinaa In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-16 18:22:31 +0000 UTC]
To zmień opis i tytuł obrazka bo jak na razie to cały czas masz wymienione postacie CP i w tytule CP OC
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MurkyMeows [2015-06-15 17:53:38 +0000 UTC]
She is a really interesting character and I like her design, but I think she would fit better in a different fandom. Music note doesn't seem the scaring or killing type
Though I would really like to see if you could convince me otherwise ;}
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LeslieElena19 In reply to MurkyMeows [2015-06-15 18:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^
Well I know~ She choose that nickname for reasons not so she would fit in with it around killers XD
Hehe I'm kinda bad at it ^u^;
But maybe when I'll wrote her backstroy (which I never do for my ocs.. XD) then maybe~ Who knows XD
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AnxietySloth [2015-06-15 17:53:13 +0000 UTC]
If I can offer a few things, she seems a little cutesy. Meaning her outfit(I'm actually working on a more cartoon/cute style). I've got a few specifics I could point out if you want me too.
And her weapon of choice is really interesting, I don't think I've ever seen it. Maybe she can also use it as a whip? I was tuning my guitar once, and I made it to tight... Ended up snapping me in the arm and gave me a good cut XDD
Otherwise, cool character! I'd like to see how you go about with her~
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LeslieElena19 In reply to AnxietySloth [2015-06-15 18:09:11 +0000 UTC]
Well sure I'd like to hear some suggestions ^u^
Haha I know XD Well good suggestion but I'll stay with guitar string for now XD
Thank You >u<
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AnxietySloth In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-15 18:52:14 +0000 UTC]
No, I mean the guitar string can be used like a whip. Depending on the material they're basically one XDD
But for the outfit, just to start, I'd get rid of the skirt and the cat ears on the hoodie. Otherwise, you can do what I did and have an outfit designing contest ^^ It worked out really well for me~
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LeslieElena19 In reply to AnxietySloth [2015-06-15 19:10:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry ^u^; Well yea that's good idea.. but she mainly suffocate victims so..
Well.. for contest nah I love to design clothes on my own X3
For cat ears.. I imagine her as cat lover and stuff so I want to keep something that would show that she is cat lover~
And for skirt.. well.. I love them X3
Besides I never saw character that has hoodie and skirt so I want to keep that as well~
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AnxietySloth In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-15 19:20:47 +0000 UTC]
In the creepypasta fandom? The hoodie is extremely overused actually. and most characters can't really be scary with a skirt and cat ears.
Take it from someone who has been in this fandom for years, this fandom is extremely brutal and critical. XDD
Just suggestions though.
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LeslieElena19 In reply to AnxietySloth [2015-06-15 19:31:29 +0000 UTC]
So what ? I didn't make her so she would be scary. I made her because it's fun for me to create new ocs~ Besides appearances can confuse~ XD
Well yea I know. I've been in this fandom for a while~
But.. what fandom isn't that way now ?
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MC-Gemstone [2015-06-15 17:27:52 +0000 UTC]
well she seem fine I guess she would make a okay background character
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TheHeartOfToast [2015-06-15 17:15:43 +0000 UTC]
Hello! Super cute character, although if you wouldn't mind, I'd like to point out a few things that you could add/fix?
Well, she seems to be human, but you say she can hear ultrasounds, which wouldn't make much sense for a human to be able to do. That as well as moving at the speed of sound is highly impossible for a human to be able to do.
Maybe instead she could have honed in her hearing to be able to hear ultrasounds, but she needs to concentrate to do so. And for the speed thing, maybe she is very fast for a human, but that's because maybe she was in track at school?
Other than that she is a very nice character with an interesting weapon. I'd like to see her story when you write it. ^-^
Friendly reminder that these are just suggestions.
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TheHeartOfToast [2015-06-15 17:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Hi ^^
Thank You >u<
I didn't noticed that actually... thanks for pointing it out ^^
And I might use those suggestions.
Heh thanks XD
um.. well.. That may take a while. I have 14 OC (sonic, fnaf and cp) but only one has backstory soo .. wlel I suck at making backstories ^u^;
Yup I know. And thank you for those ^u^
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TheHeartOfToast In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-15 17:29:35 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all!
Well if you ever get around to writing it, I'd love to read it. Also, if you need help with anything feel free to ask.
I wish you a good day and good luck with your OC's!!
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LeslieElena19 In reply to TheHeartOfToast [2015-06-15 17:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Yup you will wait a long time then XP
Of course thanks ^^
Thank You~ You too ^u^
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TheHeartOfToast In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-15 17:58:36 +0000 UTC]
The wait for Sherlock is a long one, haha. Also, thanks so much for the watch!!
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TheHeartOfToast In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-15 18:07:16 +0000 UTC]
It's a great show but there's about a two year wait in between seasons and each season is only three episodes ;w;
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TheHeartOfToast In reply to LeslieElena19 [2015-06-15 18:29:29 +0000 UTC]
That's fair, yeah it's a lot to watch it, but it's really good if you do watch it.
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