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Zakeno [2009-08-18 16:24:49 +0000 UTC]

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AWWWWW! This is so emotional, makes you sad looking at it! :C I want to hug the little guy, comfort him. Poor little tyke! D8>

Now that I've gotten all that 'AWWWW POOOORR PUPPPPY' -shot business out of my system... it's time for CRITIQUE! 8D

First lemme say I really like this picture, the sketchy lineart is very cool looking, and the expression is perfect. But of course, as with everything else in the world, there's room to improve! 8D

Firstly, the head seems a little off. I think if it was facing us in that way, it would be a little closer in towards the chest. I also this it wouldn't have hurt to add a little mouth lines in there, to show that the character was frowning very heavily, like sobbing.

The chest seems a little too high up, and should be lowered a little. The front leg could use a little more shoulder.

Finally, the back back leg (the one farthest from us) seems a little off, I think maybe some shading would fix it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

Hopefully that helped! <3

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4evermonicris [2009-08-20 04:12:34 +0000 UTC]

nice! I like the pose <3

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ShroudofShadows [2009-08-18 15:48:53 +0000 UTC]

Hrm critique you say? Well, I definantaly like the head compostion and the nose is really cute to me it's all pink and adorable . I also like the paws. The only things I'd say is that the body frame is a little thin and the leg muscles are a little bulky for a canine but that's only if you are going for a more realistic style . For a cartoonish style it looks very unique . I'd love to do an art trade with you myself if I wasn't so backed up on them lol. But anyway great job as always !

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HappehEmo [2009-08-18 12:22:19 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE it!
Oh my gosh, he looks so adorable in your style!
You make me wanna huuuugg him (and you) to death!
The coloring is brilliant <3

Thanks so much! You made my day

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