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Letiel — Frolic
Published: 2012-11-05 17:36:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Trimmed version of my thank you deviation and possibly my new ID.Letiel and Raysaira
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Comments: 2
This deviation really inspired me by the shading and the colour! Seeing this makes me feel happy and that two best friends whether big or small can become true friendship!
Let's start by me telling you about the awesome shading you have put in! I guess you have drew this in pen or in some sort of ink material and it actually puts a great affect the picture.
Second of all the characters you have created are a dragon and a husky, (some sort of puppy/dog) I think they kinda go way together by the looks of the picture!
Your effect on the eye was perfect! 100%
Keep up the great work!
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Positives:
- Letiel's over all anatomy of the head is excellent. Even fictional creatures like dragons need some proper anatomy and I can defiantly see it here.
-The eye coloring for both characters really caught my eye and I thought it was a nice touch.
-The coloring of the feathers on her head. Wow, That is just really cool, whatever you did!
What you could work on:
- The anatomy of the cat seems a bit off. You don't have to be perfect when it comes to anatomy. I know you are more a dragon artist, so maybe you should look up somethings when it comes to furry animals.
- I know it's more of a sketch so I won't say to much, but the overall coloring has several white patches in it. Again, it's a sketch so you can have some freedom with it.
-Texture. I know this is something I defiantly need to work on as well. When it comes to hard surfaces like her horn and soft surfaces like the feathers and fur, there should be some differences between them.
And that's really all I could think of off the bat. Overall, it's a cute picture.
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