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Liara-Chan — Here, have a sketch of Flame.
Published: 2012-02-18 10:08:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 791; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 27
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Making a pact to myself to draw more anthros, and I NEEEDDDD anatomy practice ;n;SOMEONE REDLINE PLEASE
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ok another critique, wee 2 in one day >3
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ok this here is a very good picture! I really like it as told,
but yup there is some few fails in the anatomy, but nothing you can change ;D
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ok one of them is the hand, it look cool but maybe try to do it more like a human, or use a clawed hands tut, there are so here on dA ^^ but do not do it to 'clawed' because your art is sweet and that will destroy the picture if you did.
the head look cool, and thats our own style which I will not change, the 'anatomy' there is cool :3
the legs and tail is maybe to long? I im not sure, I know the tail is a bit to long xD and yes the legs are to, if you think on human legs this way:
you can take one of your legs and place it 'above' the other that will give your fully hight x3 and here will it be a bit to difficult, because he legs are longer.
the feet look awesome! and the only thing I can tell there is maybe to do them more realistic, you an do that by looking on a wolf (irl wolf, or just a pic :3)
and be sure to no do your character to thin, if she not have anorexia. and no I do not say she have it XD but just remember that, because one day can it end with you do her to thin, and that will be sad D: she look fine here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
the arms look also good, but be sure: there are 3 arm joints, in the whole arm, shoulder, elbow, and wrist. here you are for me to see, missing the elbow xD not on the right arm, but on the arm here, look on a human arm, maybe it will help you a bit :3
but I think thats it ^^
hope you can use it :3
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Thank you ^^
Her elbow is not missing, it is still there, its just she is showing the underside of her arm to us c:
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you welcome :3
and yes I know x3 just would point it out xD
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It could be a bit more obvious though, I tried this pose with my arm and I couldn't do it without having a prominent bend in my elbow XD
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Oh, no problem XD You pointing it out made me want to try and do the pose myself, and its impossible to do without a bend in your elbow, so no need to apologize, If anything, I should be thanking you again XD
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haha ok xD
and again you are very welcome ;D love to help people ^^
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Thats a nice thing, I sometimes hate helping people xD
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haha xD
I maybe help people because i never really got the same help xD but I am not sure, but if it is I am sure it is because I dun want other to go through that xD
but oh well xD how are you? :3
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Oh, okay XD
Im not bad, you? c:
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haha
I am fine to, a bit tired but it will end soon xD
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/you/ need anatomy practice? Well... looks like i'm fucked now aren't i. Right in the down under
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I just need some advice ;w;
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Any advice given by me in the realm of art it probably better off ignored
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wow this here is so amasing!
I realy like this here >:3
want me to do a ritique? xD
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