born-palace [2009-04-07 21:22:31 +0000 UTC]
For critique I would say to watch out for blow-outs. The thing above her has no detail. It looks like a light, but because it is so over exposed, I can't tell what it is. Maybe turn it off.
Great focus on the model, the shallow depth of field really brings the eye to her face. I would be able to tell you more, but there is no meta data on the file. I would say try different f/stops and shutter speeds.
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