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AHEM.

My entry for 's contest

My first shot at no lineart at the suggestion of =baby-karysha Thanks, Batman! BD
I really love how it turned out C:

I would really appreciate some feedback on this : D Thanks! <3

Here's some info about Charm for *CrisisControl ;w;
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Charm the Hedgehog
Full Name: Charm Irene Roybal
Age: 16
Birthplace: Soleanna, New City
Status: In a relationship; Diesel the Hedgehog
Alliance: Hero/Good
Occupation: GUN Agent
Abilities: Lightning and electricity, agility
Likes: Outwitting others, books, helping others, sarcasm, being in charge
Dislikes: Villains, being unable to do anything, not being in charge, liars, selfish people
Strengths: Flight and agility
Weaknesses: No physical strength at all, running/speed, being underground (claustrophobic), her friends/loved ones
Personality: Bossy, tempetmental, extremley protective, hard headed, caring for her close friends, witty
Past: Before Charm was born, a new cooperation was formed to harness the power of Mobians to be used to benefit the world. The MetaMorph Institute was in full swing when Charm was born, rounding up Mobians with special abilities if their parents allowed it. Charm began to show signs of being an Electric powered Mobian at the age of five and her father, wanting her to be useful and not a danger to their family, sent her to the MetaMorph Institute in Soleanna. Charm spend six years at the Institute, being experimented on and trained to perfect her powers. Before the Institute completed their work on her, GUN stepped in and shut down all of the Institutes for act of inhumane violence. Charm returned home to her parents, whose marriage was rocky and devoid of love. Her father, Rolan, developed a quick temper and a harsh tongue, lashing out at Charm and her mother whenever they did something wrong. He did not become violent until Charm was 14 and she returned home to Rolan beating her mother. Charm rushed to aide her mother but found her dead, beaten to death. In the confusion, Rolan made his escape and was never seen again. At her mother's death, Charm became a GUN Agent, serious and determined to make sure nothing that happened to her ever happened to anyone else. She didn't get along with Commander Tower at first and still doesn't, as they often clash when it comes to how she should approach a mission. Charm likes to do things her way and is always looking out for her partners and friends, willing to put herself in the line of fire for them in a moment's notice.
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Crisis (c) *CrisisControl
Charm/Art (c) *CoolAnaAngel
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Comments: 25

RedMoon963 [2012-04-13 03:10:56 +0000 UTC]

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i don't find this original very much at all :/ this kind of picture you can find anywhere if you try to find it. the visual is pretty easy to see, some blend here and there if you look and looks to me a little cut... idk what else to call it ._. also that finger is kinda long XD this didn't impact me because the poses arn't too original either and really is a lot like a bunch of your other pictures too. this is not to say your technique is bad just i don't feel myself it stands out from other peoples art. don't take any of this wrong this is just how I see it :3

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Bloody-Sharia [2012-04-12 21:03:45 +0000 UTC]

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Very nice job! I can see you spent time into this, with the lineless and such. :3 The poses look like they're showing movement (well I know Charm is supposed to be standing still XD) and it seems like the body proportions are even.
A few things I must say that need some improvement on. Where Crisis' hands connect to her wrist, it looks like it's fading into the background and her shoulders look like they cover up most of her upper back when they connect together. Watch out on that for your next picture. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
I've noticed also that Charm's undershirt wasn't included. I don't know if that was forgotten or not and I wanted to point that out. o3o
I hoped this helped you out a bit. ^^

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Rachel-The-Wolf [2012-09-14 12:31:00 +0000 UTC]

soooooooooooooooooooo amazing

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JovialNightz [2012-08-18 19:51:17 +0000 UTC]

I was on someone's page and saw the critique's

i think this whole pic is snazzy
Idk I dont really see a flaw
the poses are sweet
and the coloring style seems pretty original
and overall this picture just looks really really cool

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Lightning-Dream In reply to JovialNightz [2012-08-19 03:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you (:

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Crimson-Soul16 [2012-04-13 10:30:28 +0000 UTC]

wow your style is just... wow...
awesome work, i dont know what else to say
i hope you win, you really deserve it

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Lightning-Dream In reply to Crimson-Soul16 [2012-04-13 16:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you so much C": <3

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Crimson-Soul16 In reply to Lightning-Dream [2012-04-13 20:21:56 +0000 UTC]

welcomes buddy ~~

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Vinnyvampire101 [2012-04-13 00:25:39 +0000 UTC]

This is very amazing ^^

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EternalSonicFreak [2012-04-12 12:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Wowowow that looks pretty pretty pretty pretty nice!!!
I love the 3D effect you did here! :3 Good job!

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Lightning-Dream In reply to EternalSonicFreak [2012-04-12 15:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! ;w;

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EternalSonicFreak In reply to Lightning-Dream [2012-04-12 16:36:17 +0000 UTC]

ya welcome^^

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Tailwalker [2012-04-12 10:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Woah! This looks REALLY good! I love how you did this linelessly! My lineless attempts suck DX Great job, Danni

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Lightning-Dream In reply to Tailwalker [2012-04-12 15:41:26 +0000 UTC]

C: Thanks so much! <3

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Tailwalker In reply to Lightning-Dream [2012-04-12 20:55:29 +0000 UTC]

No prob

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tamber-mizuki [2012-04-12 08:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Woow lilsis *0* this is totaly AMAZING ;AA; you are also improved with coloring *AA* I love your style of that Looks in 3D Very very beautiful pic Charm is always so great >W< and you have drawn Crisis very well 8D Very good <33333 I really hope you'll win the contest!! >U< <333

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Lightning-Dream In reply to tamber-mizuki [2012-04-12 15:41:57 +0000 UTC]

;w; Awww, thank you so much big sis >w< It means a lot to me CX

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tamber-mizuki In reply to Lightning-Dream [2012-04-13 06:27:12 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome siss >U< X3

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SA2OAP [2012-04-12 05:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow! this is really just amazing!! I LOVE the shading, and all the colors, its just.. gorgeous!! And i love how you made Crisis grining <3. Need more pictures of her doing that <3. I LOVE the poses and Charm is very very cute. From what i see in this picture, looks like Crisis gets on Charm's nerves . Also from reading the background story, it seems like she'll kick crisis' butt XD with those electric powers! Just wow i cant stop looking at all the colors, Green & Blue go really well together! This is great!!


Thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest!! ^^

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Lightning-Dream In reply to SA2OAP [2012-04-12 05:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! <3 I'm so happy you love it! ;w;
XD Yes, they'd certianly have some interesting battles XD
Thank you again and for allowing me the oppertunity to create this :'D I'll try to write the story for the two of them tomorrow <3

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SA2OAP In reply to Lightning-Dream [2012-04-13 02:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome <3!! Cant wait to see!!

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SonicSatamX93 [2012-04-12 05:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice art you drew here.

Very cool looking.

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ShuyinTheEnigmatic [2012-04-12 05:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Pretty friggin' awesome!

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Y-1336 [2012-04-12 03:51:21 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I'm speechless!

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Lightning-Dream In reply to Y-1336 [2012-04-12 03:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! ;w;

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