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Squishymellow [2018-08-04 15:11:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I really like this story. I wish there were more like it! You think you might ever do a sequel?
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likembig In reply to Squishymellow [2018-08-04 16:24:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your kind words!
I have written a lot of male WG stories involving magical WG. What in this particular story do you wish there were more of?
I'm not sure where a sequel would go, since the protagonist already got a happy ending.
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Squishymellow In reply to likembig [2018-08-04 17:06:47 +0000 UTC]
Well, one thing I really liked was the fact that he was a shapeshifter. I’m not entirely sure why, but I’ve always been fascinated with the idea of being able to change into other animals, and so I really liked that there was a wg story with a shapeshifter.
and as for the possible sequel, well, I kinda thought that maybe it could follow one of his kids, or describe in more detail how he came to meet his wife or something like that.
I dunno, I mean, I really do like this story, but, I do wish there was more certainty in the ending...
like, if that’s the kinda ending you’re satisfied with, then that’s fine, it’s just I kinda prefer, I dunno, more definite endings?
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likembig In reply to Squishymellow [2018-08-04 19:58:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, "happily married with children" is a pretty definite ending for a 'fairy tale'-like character such as him. As is the evil witch definitely being dead. But yeah, I never said either of those things specifically in the story. Instead I gave situations where one conclusion was the most likely over any others, and I guess I hoped all my readers would follow. So point taken.
He's a shapeshifter...so one or more of his kids...might be shapeshifters too! Brilliant! There may be something there. Never occurred to me. Thank you!
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Squishymellow In reply to likembig [2018-08-04 20:47:23 +0000 UTC]
I see what you mean, but I guess what I mean is that in the end he just kinda has a wife and an indeterminate amount of kids, and it’s never explained how they met, what all their names are, etc, so, I mean, that’s kinda what I meant by definite ending I guess...
also im glad you liked my idea!
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likembig In reply to Squishymellow [2018-08-04 20:57:50 +0000 UTC]
I can see that. I did jump ahead a bit. But the details I skipped over weren't important to the particular story I was telling. But they will be important in the sequel!
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Squishymellow In reply to likembig [2018-08-11 00:46:52 +0000 UTC]
Aw yeah, so you’re making a sequel?! Sweet! Can’t wait to read it!
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likembig In reply to Squishymellow [2018-08-11 01:16:05 +0000 UTC]
Um, yeah, you gave they the idea!
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