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Crystyelia [2015-07-29 09:55:22 +0000 UTC]
Love the story ^u^ I mostly hear the story in a way that Persephone was kidnapped by Hades ect. but you made the story so sweet and everything (btw I'm a Percy Jackson fan).
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lilachiccups In reply to Crystyelia [2015-08-06 23:36:09 +0000 UTC]
Well, in all fairness, that is how it happened in the original Greek Mythology. Hades kidnaps her and makes her stay, yada, yada, yada... So you can't ENTIRELY blame them... Even though I still do
But when I was younger, I had read a... almost comic book about Hades and Persephone and immediately fell in love with their story. I always thought they were supposed to be together and the way the story went, it was almost endearing rather than Persephone being held captive against her will. Don't get me wrong, they didn't leave that part out since it is such an important part of the story, but it was... I can't describe it. Just more friendly rather than "YOU'RE GOING TO STAY IN HELL WITH ME BITCH WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT!"
And, unfortunately, I'm so far behind on Percy Jackson. I'm constantly told I should read it because of my love for Greek Mythology. So, while I may not have read it entirely, I do love Greek Mythology which makes me think that I would love it as well.
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alxx05 [2014-02-20 14:41:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goood! This is the most beautiful written story. I've never thought greek mythology is beautiful, but this lead me to it. I cried how amazing it is. It is beautiful. This is so beautiful. The others are so right. This should be in a book. You could write this for a book. And I would totally buy it. Its such an amazing story.
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alxx05 In reply to lilachiccups [2014-02-27 11:12:14 +0000 UTC]
No problem. You did an awesome job about the story. Keep up the good work!
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trixitrail [2014-01-25 02:08:16 +0000 UTC]
i dont know why but i just keep on crying, it is so beautiful and sad and and and beautiful .*tearsss*
this is really good you should write a book off of this . i would totally buy it . i wish i could write like you do . this is so good , keep on writing
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trixitrail In reply to lilachiccups [2014-02-11 19:03:43 +0000 UTC]
tears of joy , look further into the book idea :]
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lilachiccups In reply to trixitrail [2014-02-16 08:54:52 +0000 UTC]
If you haven't already, there are also more chapters to this. I just posted part 5. :]
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KendrixTermina [2014-01-03 16:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Hm. Maybe you went a little overboard into the disney villain direction with Hera.
While her revenge antics occassionally went seriously overboard, I don't think the *goddess of marriage* would have it in her to (In some versions of the whole Paris judgement, she was actually the prettiest, but that was less obvious because she tried to act as chaste/dignified as possible when undressing before him, while Aphrodite, by nature, had no problem supplementing her looks by acting seductive and charming. So, for all their occassionally hamfisted machismo, the ancient greeks did seem to think that sexyness is also related to personality XD)
Also, I don't think Zeus and Hades were on such bad terms in the original myths - In some, he totally agreed to the whole Persephone-kidnapping thing, and he did, for example, grill Aesculapius via lightning when Hades complained about him snatching away potential new subjects with ressurection magic.
Moments of resentment given the situation are probably unavoidable, but I don't think that level of hate is necessarily an accurate portrayal. It's ultimately your artistic choice, but being part of such a common misconception...
and the battle with the random hell houd was... dunno. You'd expect the divine ruler of the place to the significantly more powerful than everything in it.
Now that the bad is out of the way, I'd like to stress that most of the chapter was good, from the discriptions of Hades' Palace/resting place to the "love scene" at the end, with all the contrasts and realizations.
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lilachiccups In reply to KendrixTermina [2014-01-06 00:06:25 +0000 UTC]
Just to keep this response short.
On the first one, I'll agree. There was probably more to Hera than I knew, but I indeed have a small part of me that just doesn't like Hera for the reason of what she did to Hercules. BUT! that too, is probably unjustified because I do stand for what she is Goddess of and that he wasn't her child to begin with.
And if you continue to read on in the next chapter, you'll see that Zeus and Hades don't have a real angst against each other. I have a plan for what's going on, but I will not tell you as I don't want to spoil it for others who could be possibly reading this OR even for you if you care to keep reading.
And in Greek Mythology they do have Hell Hounds that Hades made to keep him company. They talk like you and me. I just always thought of them as being against Hades since dogs are naturally a leader and hate to be taken from their duties of protecting their said area. They feel like -since they are of greater mass and so much more powerful than Hades- they have power over Hades, especially since they can Shadow Travel and Hades took that from them. Again, mostly from my ideas.
But I really thank you for taking your time to read this and give me your response :] I'm glad you cared enough to give your own two cents.
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mAdxAne [2013-12-13 12:05:40 +0000 UTC]
PFFF ! I do not know what words to put in here , i only feel the urge to bow in front of you . I don't read much nor broswe dA ,but ... damn man ! Are you sure that you weren't there to write all of this ? This is pure epic and while i was reading , the sun had another expression as i cherished every word and i was only sorry to know that my english lacks and the story is about to end . I hope you are a hades or persephone to someone you linger to or loves you and you should use your power of writing to have your own story . May the eons be with you and your writings never fade and please don't get any mainstream attention , obscure writers are the best thing that ever existed . As you could expect , no one cared about the truth further than appearance . So happened with Lucifer and Hades , who's fate was seal and never to be chosen . May the shadows embrace your light and your days screech in pleasure , as i found reading this . I love you !
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HarleyTye [2013-08-14 04:09:24 +0000 UTC]
I love your use of descriptive writing and your accurate connections to greek mythology. This is amazing and I hope you continue creating masterpieces like this in the future! Has anybody else felt weird upon remembering how Hades and Persephone are related? Keep up the great work!
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lilachiccups In reply to HarleyTye [2013-08-22 00:33:59 +0000 UTC]
Awww!!! I'm so glad that you like this and that you think I'm accurate about Greek Mythology!!! If I'm going to be honest, I'm about as novice as a toddler trying to drink without a sippy cup lol! But I'm glad I come across like I know what I'm talking about :} As for the relations between the Olympus family... I try NOT to think about that! LoL!
Thank you for the love and support!
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HarleyTye In reply to lilachiccups [2013-08-25 00:12:07 +0000 UTC]
Just trying to help! It can be hard to find the motivation to write when people are always on your case about the next chapter. I think it's probably the number one thing that most deviant authors complain about. Please take your time, you could never upset your fans (unless you killed off a favorite character, but that happens all the time with some authors).
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HarleyTye In reply to lilachiccups [2013-08-25 00:50:36 +0000 UTC]
If you do that I might just have to move out of the country, lol.
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HarleyTye In reply to lilachiccups [2013-08-25 03:00:28 +0000 UTC]
I meant because of all the angry fangirls who'd instantly blame me for the death of thier favorite character. Please don't pull a Belarus on me (it's a hetalia reference).
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SabrinaGallowix [2013-07-03 03:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Is hera jealous when hades told her he love perseohone or......is it just...me o_O
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Alice-Hudson [2013-06-18 13:27:24 +0000 UTC]
Hey, don't worry about boring ME with greek mythology! As you, and many other people have proved, the myths are actually quite cool and have inspired many stories and other master pieces into being, so... Babble on!
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Cherry-Bear [2013-03-07 19:30:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm really enjoying this story, I've always thought this myth was beautiful and tragic.. Heh, I can't wait to read it all. You right beautifully, I really feel for Hades. x3
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FUZZYWUZZYSWAG101 [2013-02-24 06:24:53 +0000 UTC]
That was so .......I can't even describe it. It was amazing and beautiful.
:iconcheckrubplz:
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Gragaza [2012-11-17 04:19:18 +0000 UTC]
Its hard to get me to rly read any story and like it, congrats on doing so
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Gragaza [2012-11-17 04:18:40 +0000 UTC]
bootiful
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BlackHeartedVixen [2012-11-07 01:46:26 +0000 UTC]
"Who knew the kiss of death was truly heaven in disguise?"
My new favorite quote! SOOOOO GOOOD
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mcrvictorian7928 [2012-11-03 03:36:06 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD MY FEEELS!!!! Seriously, this is such a beautiful story and it definately gives the art piece justice. Amazing job!
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TheUltimateHetaku [2012-10-22 17:33:27 +0000 UTC]
AHHH!!!! YOU HAVE GREECE FROM HETALIA!!! OMG!! soo...do you know Hetalia? *exited*
and...um... WOW. i LOVE this!! the picture gave me an imagination but you really went ahead and did it! YOU GO GURL! I LOVE YOU! watching right now! :3
ah, and the kiss part....
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TheUltimateHetaku In reply to lilachiccups [2012-10-23 12:17:28 +0000 UTC]
hahaa~ i haven't watched Hetalia for a long time either... but i've still been fingirling like crazy... Greece is so hawt!!
its awesome that Hetalia is getting so famous :3
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TsukaLavire In reply to lilachiccups [2012-10-14 01:25:51 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, and he's my favorite too, Zeus is a little too "active" for my taste, if you know what I mean xD
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