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And here is the next page! I told my mum that I would have it finished at 12pm, and now it's 12:25pm. But that was because it was very hard to find a good font for the song and the effect in the last panel was awfully hard to draw...dunno why. Normally I'm good in making this surprise-jag-things. :/ And to the melody-font again: I HAVE a font with tones! But I couldn't find it. So be happy with this one. It was awfully hard to let it look like a melody and I'm still not really happy with it, but better than nothing.

And now to the story part. :3 Why Charice falls asleep suddenly? Because I decided so. But see the bright side: She's finally being noticed! :'D Poor little girl just speaks too quiet so be heard. SISTERHOOF CHARICE! I AM QUIET TOO!
Btw. maybe you wonder about the melody itself. It's one of this ancient languages that aren't spoken anymore (and that I inevnted myself XD). I haven't come up with a translation yet (just invented words that seemed to sound good XD).

Please leave a comment and tell me what you liked about the page It always makes my day!
    - Please NO critique on this! I've my awesome sister for that!

But tell me about grammar- and spell mistakes when there are some
Hope you like it

    Charice, Sunny, Maddy, Drako & art © me (*Lilafly 2012)

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Comments: 57

Lilafly In reply to ??? [2013-09-24 13:10:47 +0000 UTC]

But in contrary to Fluttershy Charice isn't addicted to little critters (and please don't compare my characters with ponies, it makes it look like I based them on them which I didn't :'C )

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crochetkitty29 In reply to Lilafly [2013-09-25 09:35:48 +0000 UTC]

know you didn't but she just reminds me of her and Charice is so cute ( one of my fave characters in your story ) hope you can update more

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Lilafly In reply to crochetkitty29 [2013-09-25 14:17:48 +0000 UTC]

ok
I try my best at the moment, but all the comming exams are killing me! D:

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SweetStreamStables [2013-03-08 15:20:24 +0000 UTC]

oh nuu!

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Peggycupcake23 [2012-12-06 19:41:21 +0000 UTC]

poor sweet little Charice she does need to speak more, more louder nexts time but this is interstering page, I wounder who's sining the melody ? and this is a stunning piece of work and I can't WAIT for the nexts page !!!!!!!

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Lilafly In reply to Peggycupcake23 [2012-12-07 19:08:53 +0000 UTC]

she really should, but I don't think this will happen 'cause she's very shy (like me XD)
you'll find out soon :3
thanks! I will continue working on it now and I hope that I will get it done tomorrow ^^

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Peggycupcake23 In reply to Lilafly [2012-12-07 19:41:41 +0000 UTC]

very shy like Fluttershy XD
oh my gosh oh my god oh my god YES !!!!

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Lilafly In reply to Peggycupcake23 [2012-12-07 19:43:18 +0000 UTC]

no, Charice and I aren't like Fluttershy XD We're different in some point XD
XD

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Peggycupcake23 In reply to Lilafly [2012-12-07 19:52:22 +0000 UTC]

I just changed my mind are u right

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Willobea [2012-11-28 13:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhh Charice nuuuuuuuuu!! This is so what I was like at school, I'd start saying something and then just trail off like "Ummsdhjhfuof I didn't say anything....."
Eeee I love your comic because I'm always dying to see the next page!! (no pressure, honestly the best part is the suspense of waiting! ) You're so good at keeping us all on our toes wondering where the story is going!! And you make sure the art is great every time too, just pure love! This always makes my day!!

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Lilafly In reply to Willobea [2012-11-28 19:27:51 +0000 UTC]

haha, my comic and other work seems to have this effect I heard nearly the same story at least 10 times already and 6 of the 10 times it was the comic
thank you! I totally know what you mean with the pressure. I'm reading Off-White at the moment (dunno if you know it, but it's AMAZING!) and I'm also always dying to see the next page!
thank you! I'm not always sure if the endings of the pages are good or not from the storyline but when it's possible I always try to include a cliffhanger. And I have to admit that I got a bit stage fright now that so many people started to like my comic It's so hard to keep this quality! At the moment I'm thinking about drawing the background a bit more simple but still nice so I will be able to work faster. :3 But the question is if quantity is better than quality
THANK YOU SO MUCH! And it makes my day to hear that!

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Willobea In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-28 20:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha it is sooooo amazing, I'm not surprised people have said the same things!!
Honestly I know what you mean! I did one page of a comic and had a lot of the story planned out but it took me so long and I got such stage fright from the high demand that I didn't do anymore, it was so terrifying Just be yourself and do whatever you feel like doing, and take your time!! People just need to be patient!!
Nuuu but I will have to go look it up!! What's it about?
You're SO welcome

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Lilafly In reply to Willobea [2012-11-28 21:42:29 +0000 UTC]

haha
FINALLY SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTAND ME! I really need to be more brave in this kind of things
It's about wolves and the nothern mythology You can find it here: [link] It's so amazing, really! *O*

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Willobea In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-29 13:27:44 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW!! I did it in like 2008 and people were still asking for more in 2011 It was so scary! Just keep going and you'll be so happy you achieved it in the end, even if you're not 100% happy with every page!
I wanted to do a comic with my new characters but I don't have time
Ooooo sounds good!! I'll check it out

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Lilafly In reply to Willobea [2012-12-01 08:19:54 +0000 UTC]

yep, I know that feeling XD
That's right At the moment I try to find a method to draw backgrounds a little faster but still let them have quality. That's a hard work D:
having time is a gift, noone whould that know better than me And I heard that I just will have less and less time in the next years until I'm finished with uni D: So I try to work as much as I can now while I still have time for it
do that

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Willobea In reply to Lilafly [2012-12-03 20:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Waaaa that sucks! But comics are so nice for the artist as well because it's always something to look forward to even when you're busy Oh wow!! That comic is AMAZING I'm only on chapter 1 but I love it already!!

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Lilafly In reply to Willobea [2012-12-03 20:57:40 +0000 UTC]

yes, that's right Alone thinking of parts of the planned story and inventing new scenes is very much fun
IKR? It will only get better!

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ToLaRu [2012-11-27 17:10:52 +0000 UTC]

xxiuhadvahjdbsadfwsfh wake up charry. ITZ A TRAAAAP.
*durchdreh*
*sich für so spätes kommentieren entschuldige*
*laber*
das mit der melodie find ich total cool, vor allem, wie charice so langsam die augen dazu zufalle x3
ich glaub, die melodie wäre noch ein bisschen authentischer geworden, wenn du noch ein paar musiknoten reingepackt hättest... aber ansonsten find ich diesen ausklingende, verwischenden effektz echt toll!

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Lilafly In reply to ToLaRu [2012-11-27 17:50:45 +0000 UTC]

jep, it is D:
schon okay XD
danke!
ich hatte es vor, aber das sah nicht so harmonisch aus und die notenschrift hab ich nicht gefunden

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nikki2142 [2012-11-26 21:10:10 +0000 UTC]

oh cool a mystery....I cant wait to see what happens

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LupaSola [2012-11-26 17:34:53 +0000 UTC]

CHARIE-MAUS!!!! NEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WARTE! .... Heißt das, dass Raji angekommen ist? SO SCHNELL!? Ne, wa? Ich wunschträume grade bloß

Hihi, Charie spricht auch zu leise? Juchu, ich bin nicht alleine damit
Also mir gefällt die Art, wie du die gesungene Zeile dargestellt hast. ich mag dieses leicht getragene, nach hinten verblassende. Das hat was von einer hocken langgezogenen und sanft ausklingenden Melodie, ungefähr so, wie die Meerjungfrauen in Fluch der Karibik 4 singen. ... sorry, aber stell ich mir die Singstimme jetzt vor Hauptsache da kommt jetzt keine Mutanten und frisst die vier
Und Charieleins Pose im ersten Fenster gefällt mir auch sehr gut. Diese leicht seitliche, gesenkte Kopfhaltung, und wie sie schützend das Vorderbein vor die Brust hält, das passt so super zu ihrer schüchternen Art
"Ähm, Leute...? Ich will euch ja nicht stören, aber... da, da ist so ein Vieh, das könnte... Mannooo Q__Q"

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Lilafly In reply to LupaSola [2012-11-27 09:04:38 +0000 UTC]

klein Charie schläft nur, keine Panik Marie
also ich versuche schon meinen comic so sehr physikalisch logisch zu halten wie es geht

dann sind wie vier!
danke!
ich habe fluch der karibik 4 seit jahren nicht mehr geguckt also weiß ich nicht mehr wie die da singen

danke!

haha, deine interprätationen sind immer die besten!

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LupaSola In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-27 17:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Trotzdem erschreckt sich das Fangirl tierisch
Okaaaay XDD

YAY Huch, wer ist Nummer vier? XD

Föfö, Teil 4 kam erst letztes Jahr ins Kino ^^ Hier, das ist die Szene -> [link] (War die beste im ganzen Film! Die ersten drei fand ich besser ^^)

Bitte ^^
Haha, und Danke XDD

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Lilafly In reply to LupaSola [2012-11-27 17:54:03 +0000 UTC]



*Crystal-Falls

ja, ich hab den im kino gesehen aber ich kann mich trotzdem net dran erinnern :'D
okay, das mit der stimme kann echt hinkommen das vieh das jetzt kommt ist auch so ne art sirene

^^

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LupaSola In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-27 18:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Aso! Dann mag ich *Crystal-Falls

Haha, auch nicht schlecht
Juchuu, ich bin guuuuut! <-*hust* unzurechnungsfähig *husthust*

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Lilafly In reply to LupaSola [2012-11-28 19:28:55 +0000 UTC]

ich mag sie auch SIE HAT EIN BILD VON RAJANI GEMALT! *O*

XD

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LupaSola In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-29 15:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Uiuiui *suchen geht*

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SassySquid [2012-11-25 21:49:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this cliff hanger, love! Beautiful job!! <33

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Lilafly In reply to SassySquid [2012-11-27 09:04:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Sweetdogs [2012-11-25 18:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh my! What happened to Cha?! I can't wait to find out! I just adore how this comic get! It's better every pages, damn! It looks so amazing, like seriously! I can't wait to see how the other will react when they'll see she've fell asleep... What will it change her? Don't know, now I'm just so exited to read next panel! And 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Lilafly In reply to Sweetdogs [2012-11-25 21:28:14 +0000 UTC]

well, you'll find out in the next pages. :3
I won't say anything
thank you so much!

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Sweetdogs In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-26 18:36:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm so exited! I can't to see the rest! I'm so fond of this story! You're so amazing oh my god!

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Lilafly In reply to Sweetdogs [2012-11-26 20:21:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! I try to start with the next page in the next days (tomorrow and Wednesday I have to write exams so I need the time for learning)

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Sweetdogs In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-27 16:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Pleasure! I can't wait to see it! And I uderstand, I'm so busy with work, it's very hard right now, too much exams...

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Lilafly In reply to Sweetdogs [2012-11-27 16:27:19 +0000 UTC]

well ya need to wait (please don't rush me )
same here :/

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Sweetdogs In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-28 16:26:30 +0000 UTC]

I an't wait! And don't worry I won't rush you, I don't like when people rush you : )

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Lilafly In reply to Sweetdogs [2012-11-28 19:28:30 +0000 UTC]

rushing isn't good for my mental health and the quality of the pages

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Sweetdogs In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-29 20:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I completlly agree! But I'm very excited to see what's coming next!

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CassiwuvBlood [2012-11-25 15:30:49 +0000 UTC]

OwO CHARICE? OH SHIT I'LL CATCH YOU WITH MY AWESOMENESS X3

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Lilafly In reply to CassiwuvBlood [2012-11-25 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]

haha, right! :'D catch ehr with your awesomeness Cassi!

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CassiwuvBlood In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-25 22:43:10 +0000 UTC]

x3 I will

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Artistic-Pineapple [2012-11-25 13:05:13 +0000 UTC]

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THELADYHORSE [2012-11-25 12:52:51 +0000 UTC]

.....??
What just happened?

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Crystal-Cinders [2012-11-25 12:22:06 +0000 UTC]

CHARICE NUUU
I really love Charice's design - and sisterhoof Charice! I am quiet as well!
Every single page of your comic is so wonderfully left off, making me so eager for the next page.

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Lilafly In reply to Crystal-Cinders [2012-11-25 21:27:07 +0000 UTC]

poor little girl!
yay, so we are 3 then

Thank you so much! The cliffhangers are made on purpose >:3

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Crystal-Cinders In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-25 22:00:52 +0000 UTC]

The sisterhoof of three, yay!

If I had to pay for this, I would be so broke now - I can't miss a page otherwise I'd go bonkers, ha!

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Lilafly In reply to Crystal-Cinders [2012-11-27 09:05:48 +0000 UTC]

yay! (with ~LupaSola we are 4 now! )

you're lucky that I don't let you pay
thank you!

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Kamaite [2012-11-25 11:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Arme charice
ich mag das zweite Bild mit den anderen 3 im Hintergrund ^-^ sunny sieht da so richtig... angepisst aus :3

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Lilafly In reply to Kamaite [2012-11-25 11:38:39 +0000 UTC]

jep
schön dass das auffällt, denn in der nicht verschwommenen version sehen alle 3 scheiße aus XD

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Kamaite In reply to Lilafly [2012-11-25 11:39:19 +0000 UTC]

muss ja niemand wissen

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