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Published: 2009-04-22 00:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1508; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 0
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*I will have small, 5x7 prints of this for Youmacon. If you'd like something larger, please comment*

(Edit~ Fixed the angle of the hair, added some floor boards to help define the room.)

So, this is for one of my upcoming finals. We have to choose a product to write a procedural instruction manual for. Mine is going to be on inking and shading with Faber Castell Pitt artist pens. This is the finished, shaded drawing. Once I turn in my final, I think I'll post it here. It will be a full inking and shading tutorial. This will be a couple of weeks, though.

This is marker, so I can't change what's already done, but feel free to offer any critique that might be helpful, thanks.



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Comments: 49

Nevma [2010-08-16 13:00:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the style. Nice work.

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ZutaraMushroom [2010-08-08 10:11:57 +0000 UTC]

love it , bottle needs more detail, it's glass right? try stippling for shading

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lilfirebender In reply to ZutaraMushroom [2010-08-10 12:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. Ya, I thought about getting an actual bottle to reference but never got so far.

This was done a year and a half ago. I usually do more detailed shading with copic markers now.

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MP-R [2010-02-10 00:43:51 +0000 UTC]

wow. the style is awesome. it's got the proportions of a realistic picture, but it's like wicked cool cartoonishism...but not really...love it!!

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lilfirebender In reply to MP-R [2010-05-10 20:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <3

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theblackraven00 [2009-12-19 11:03:14 +0000 UTC]

nice love the hips

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lilfirebender In reply to theblackraven00 [2009-12-22 18:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I gave her a short skirt just so I could show off that part of the pose.

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shadesofcerulean [2009-12-06 02:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely amazing!! : D

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lilfirebender In reply to shadesofcerulean [2009-12-07 16:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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madameraposa [2009-09-11 02:43:30 +0000 UTC]

mam you are simply amasing i love this picture it looks like a picture of one of my friends from school. the socks kick butt btw

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lilfirebender In reply to madameraposa [2009-09-13 22:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I striped socks.

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Razi-Tobias [2009-05-26 23:59:40 +0000 UTC]

I love how you put this together.

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lilfirebender In reply to Razi-Tobias [2009-05-29 12:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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LadyAtlantis [2009-04-29 16:52:46 +0000 UTC]

woah, this one looks really interesting!
You chose a really nice pose and i love your shading job! Well done, lil

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lilfirebender In reply to LadyAtlantis [2009-05-01 11:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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N-I-V-E-K [2009-04-24 12:11:32 +0000 UTC]

I think this is one of your finest pieces yet! Her expression and positioning is killer, and I really like the style of her clothes! My only critique would be that of her lighting. You have the light coming at her from the right side of the page, and the shadows hit her other side(and the bar faces the same direction), but her shadow in the floor looks as if it is another light source coming from directly above. If you extended her body's shadow towards the left side of the page, it'd fix that lickety split! You did a simply marvelous job on this piece!

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lilfirebender In reply to N-I-V-E-K [2009-04-24 22:54:41 +0000 UTC]

THanks. I'm working on the shadows.

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N-I-V-E-K In reply to lilfirebender [2009-04-25 01:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Great, and you're welcome!

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wee-donut [2009-04-22 20:27:23 +0000 UTC]

I'd hit that.

My only miff is the shadow direction - when you look at the table and then at the shadow on the floor it looks off, not to mention the little shady-oval only seems to go as far as the diameter of her feet. Since she's leaning, even if the light was directly above her there'd be some more shadow down there.

UM UM UM i guess I probably posted this too late anyway. Her left foot looks a bit teeny but other than that, I think my first statement pretty much says my opinion of the picture.

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lilfirebender In reply to wee-donut [2009-04-24 22:53:48 +0000 UTC]

XD

Ya...I'm still working on the shadows. A little better maybe...but ya...still working on it. I don't know why the shadows on the floor confuse me so much more than the shadows hitting the people....

Ha ha, her tiny foot is my fault. It was wider...but then that leg was slightly to long...so I shortened the bottom of the foot and forgot to lengthen the top. XD I'm not sure I can fix it without making the top of her foot look like there's something black on it.

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wee-donut In reply to lilfirebender [2009-04-25 02:04:07 +0000 UTC]

we can just call her the woman with the dinky foot. she's rich because she's famous for it!

also you fixed the lighting! Much better.

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Sofisofas [2009-04-22 18:24:12 +0000 UTC]

I can't help but envy the way you keep improving your drawing skills. I mean, seriously, mine seem to go worse and then I look at your work and... I need to practice... :sigh: Nice work

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lilfirebender In reply to Sofisofas [2009-04-24 22:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Yours are getting better too.
It takes lots of time and practice. For every improved picture I post, there are dozens of practice ones that I haven't posted.

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Sofisofas In reply to lilfirebender [2009-04-24 23:26:02 +0000 UTC]

I bet. I have those too, but it doesn't really feel like improving...

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lilfirebender In reply to Sofisofas [2009-04-24 23:32:11 +0000 UTC]


I don't know. For me personally, I try to focus on one small thing at a time that I want to improve. Expressions, certain perspectives, specific pieces of anatomy.

If I work on trying to improve...just everything...or just in general, I don't get anywhere.

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potterpuppetpal [2009-04-22 16:28:21 +0000 UTC]

I love this! It's black and white, but you've made it look so colorful.

I especially like the socks

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lilfirebender In reply to potterpuppetpal [2009-04-24 22:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. XD I think the socks are what helps make it colorful. You want to imagine them in color.

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potterpuppetpal In reply to lilfirebender [2009-04-25 02:03:19 +0000 UTC]

striped socks are the best, now I need to go buy some =.='
lol

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lilfirebender In reply to potterpuppetpal [2009-04-26 16:05:44 +0000 UTC]

XD Yes.

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BrandonSMitchell [2009-04-22 13:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Looks great Lil! you need to hope on IM more lol or i need to finally call you lol

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lilfirebender In reply to BrandonSMitchell [2009-04-26 16:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I know. I need to be around more...eventually. I'm hiding on my non-aim computer to work on comics for a while today, though. xD

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BrandonSMitchell In reply to lilfirebender [2009-04-26 20:11:18 +0000 UTC]

darn it lol.....that stinks lol

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FireLadyLarania [2009-04-22 11:49:43 +0000 UTC]

is fantastic as per usual ^_^

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lilfirebender In reply to FireLadyLarania [2009-04-24 23:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Chelsx [2009-04-22 08:54:32 +0000 UTC]

This looks great..^^ really great job with the marker shading.. C:

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lilfirebender In reply to Chelsx [2009-04-24 23:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Cloverella [2009-04-22 05:44:16 +0000 UTC]

I really love her cool pose. Snaps for you for doing this in marker!~ I find them so hard to usee ;A;

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lilfirebender In reply to Cloverella [2009-04-26 15:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I really like these markers. Faber Castell makes awesome brush pens.

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Aeolus06 [2009-04-22 05:42:40 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work on this love the pose, design and shading very well done

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lilfirebender In reply to Aeolus06 [2009-04-26 15:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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Aeolus06 In reply to lilfirebender [2009-04-28 18:14:31 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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kitcatbar43 [2009-04-22 01:51:13 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE the style of this picture

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lilfirebender In reply to kitcatbar43 [2009-04-26 16:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I've been trying a few different styles for faces lately. I think this is my favorite.

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irishgal487 [2009-04-22 01:06:42 +0000 UTC]

This is markers? It looks very good! The girl looks so cool and her outfit is great!

I hope you feel better soon hun!

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lilfirebender In reply to irishgal487 [2009-04-26 15:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Yesh. I love Faber Castell markers. The brush markers especially. Thanks!

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beta-joovey [2009-04-22 01:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I really, really like this.

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lilfirebender In reply to beta-joovey [2009-04-26 15:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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storybender [2009-04-22 00:58:16 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. There's just something about her face that's really cool. And the stockings!! ^_^ They make me happy.

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lilfirebender In reply to storybender [2009-04-26 15:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Hee hee, those are my favorite kind of stockings.

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