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Published: 2015-04-04 07:08:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 7982; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 15
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Description So I have been planning a sequel for my fanfiction "Gone Batty" and I was curious on how to design Melody in "Sunwing" because some time will pass. I decided to give her longer hair and I realized that it made her seem more mature, to my delight. 

As for Goth, I wanted more practice to draw him. 
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yasdnilgoth [2015-08-08 21:22:27 +0000 UTC]

So, what's the sequel going to be about? I'm reading your recent fanfic which I love and I'm enjoying! I only read spoilers of Silverwing wiki and im not sure if your going to base the sequel with the novels. Will it be more dramatic, full of danger, comedy and adventure? Boy I sound corny, sorry  I would like to know what it will be about! Keep it up!

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to yasdnilgoth [2015-08-08 22:30:04 +0000 UTC]

It is going to indeed follow the events of the books, but I am definitely going to make it more dramatic, full of danger, comedy and adventure. I have a few things I want to add into the story. Well, I just hope it will turn out good.

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yasdnilgoth In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-08-08 23:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Okey dokey!  

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mate-of-Kisame [2015-08-01 20:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's nice to see that Goth has finally got his hair under control! X"D

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to mate-of-Kisame [2015-08-01 21:08:53 +0000 UTC]

XD I know right? As royalty, he needs to keep up appearances.

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mate-of-Kisame In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-08-01 23:18:48 +0000 UTC]

True. Melody looks very nice and happy. I just love Goth's expression! It's like he has no clue on what to do with her!

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heart8822 [2015-06-02 01:24:41 +0000 UTC]

If this gets made into a sequel, would they be in love or so despite Goth hates Melody's guts?

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to heart8822 [2015-06-02 01:28:16 +0000 UTC]

There maybe something that there wasn't there before. We'll see how it goes. I'm making it up as I go along.

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heart8822 In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-06-02 01:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Ok how's chapter 25 for Gone Batty coming? Sorry to bug you on that.

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to heart8822 [2015-06-02 03:07:02 +0000 UTC]

I haven't started writing it yet. It will come out when it will come out.

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heart8822 In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-06-02 11:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Ok thanks

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heart8822 [2015-05-31 05:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Melody looks nice with a ponytail.

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to heart8822 [2015-05-31 17:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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heart8822 In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-05-31 17:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Whirlpool24 [2015-05-16 01:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Cool. I love your story and both Melody and Goth look awesome. 

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RevTrickshot [2015-04-13 22:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Melody looks good with a pony-tail.

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wolffreak51 [2015-04-09 00:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Please do a sequel when you can. I read what you've got so far and am dying for the next chapter ^^. I love your oc you use.

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to wolffreak51 [2015-04-09 02:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Of course I will.
Thank you for reading my fanfic, I'm really happy you like it!
And thanks! I'm really proud of how Melody turned out. I was worried whether or not she would be likable or not but it looks like she has a warm reception.   

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wolffreak51 In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-09 02:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome ^^, I justblove on how goth has the WTH look on his face XD

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to wolffreak51 [2015-04-09 02:44:22 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHA! Yeah! And Melody's all "weeee!" 

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wolffreak51 In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-09 02:59:56 +0000 UTC]

XD it looked like she was just enjoying herself

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DangerHillTerror [2015-04-05 03:50:34 +0000 UTC]

I do have one quick question on the topic of a sequel. If you're thinking of writing the sequel in the place and time of Sunwing do you
think you'll do one for Firewing as well? If so perhaps Melody could keep Shade company since Marina was absent in that book.

Though I'm not so sure she'd be all that fond of going to bat hell.

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to DangerHillTerror [2015-04-05 04:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Dunno, haven't thought that far ahead. You are waaaaay ahead of me, partner. XD

I suppose I'll figure it out once I'm in the middle of writing the "Sunwing" one.

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DangerHillTerror In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-05 04:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Well good luck on the Sunwing one!

Firewing would be cool. There is SO MUCH more that could have been explored in the
whole underworld deal there. I think you'd probably do a good job of it though.
But yeah that'll have to wait for the future but in the meantime you can brainstorm about titles for it.

"Gone Batty" the first. "Gone Battier" maybe Sunwing. "Gone Dead" for Firewing.
(idk, just thoughts)

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to DangerHillTerror [2015-04-07 01:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Bwahahahahaha!!! xDDD That "Gone Dead" title though...

heeheeheeee...

Ahem- I was having a few thoughts on titles. At first I was just going to stick with an unoriginal "Gone Batty II" for Sunwing. But you gave me a few ideas. I was thinking maybe "Gone South" for Sunwing, and IF I decide to go further into Firewing... I'd probably call it "Gone Under" or simply "Gone." 

What do you think? 

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DangerHillTerror In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-07 02:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Well at least "Gone Dead" is honest...

"Gone to Save the Sun" maybe. Its a bit long but it could work. Plain "Gone to Heck" would work for Firewing depending on who sacrifices themselves in the end.
I think they're good ideas. ^^

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SageOfLife [2015-04-04 14:57:41 +0000 UTC]

I sense a pairing in this sequel! Please let it happen

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to SageOfLife [2015-04-04 17:24:52 +0000 UTC]

 

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jsommers94 [2015-04-04 14:52:23 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness sweetie I so much love this      

 please keep up the amazing work!!!!    

I love how you did with your character and goth!  

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to jsommers94 [2015-04-04 16:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Bwahahaha!!!! I love those emoticons, they're so funny!!! XD especially the last one.

thank you, I will definitely draw more stuff in the future.   

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jsommers94 In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-04 17:00:47 +0000 UTC]

hheheheh I love those emoticons too,it always makes me smile and laugh X3

your welcome sweetie! cant wait for it and also cant wait for the sequel as well!

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Nightly-Shade [2015-04-04 07:17:56 +0000 UTC]

You did amazing job on Goth and melody! She looks very adorable with her hair up ^^

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to Nightly-Shade [2015-04-04 07:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I think she looks good like that too. ^_^

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Nightly-Shade In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-04 07:34:01 +0000 UTC]

 np sweetie

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DangerHillTerror [2015-04-04 07:14:49 +0000 UTC]

I think you got the look of Goth down pretty well. 
A bats have ponytail hairstyles now?  

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to DangerHillTerror [2015-04-04 07:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Melody is actually a human who turns into a bat, so I think she can make ponytails or braids if she wants to. XD

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DangerHillTerror In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-04 07:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I've read your fanfic, Its pretty good! 
Still though Its always been a mysterious to me how they all have hairstyles in the show that don't get messy
at all. Almost as if they spend 30 minutes off-screen combing it and all. XD

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to DangerHillTerror [2015-04-04 07:36:32 +0000 UTC]

But you know... Cartoon logic.

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DangerHillTerror In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-04 07:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Well yes of course. The books described a lot of minor things in deep detail such as hair getting all messed
up. However the show just throws that out the door and decides to add in "a black bear who happens to be white"
in place of the logic. XD

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to DangerHillTerror [2015-04-04 07:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Except for Goth of course. XD his hair is crazy after getting fried until the end.

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DangerHillTerror In reply to Lilgrimmapple [2015-04-04 07:38:11 +0000 UTC]

He was the only one to suffer in that way. Shade & Marina get thrown around a LOT in the show. Yet Goth just gets
zapped once and that's all...
I just find that weird and illogical. XD

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FREEDFK9631 [2015-04-04 07:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Good Job! I think Melody and Goth look fantastic!

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Lilgrimmapple In reply to FREEDFK9631 [2015-04-04 07:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks so much!

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