HOME | DD

Lily-of-Life β€” Long Legged Bait

Published: 2010-04-29 15:29:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 3935; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 56
Redirect to original
Description Inspired by the Dylan Thomas poem - 'Ballad of the Long-Legged Bait'. This is the first imagery I thought of when I read this visual poem.
I have a much better illustration of this poem coming soon





The Ballad of the Long-Legged Bait
by Dylan Thomas


The bows glided down, and the coast

Blackened with birds took a last look

At his thrashing hair and whale-blue eye;

The trodden town rang its cobbles for luck.Then good-bye to the fishermanned

Boat with its anchor free and fast

As a bird hooking over the sea,

High and dry by the top of the mast,Whispered the affectionate sand

And the bulwarks of the dazzled quay.

For my sake sail, and never look back,

Said the looking land.Sails drank the wind, and white as milk

He sped into the drinking dark;

The sun shipwrecked west on a pearl

And the moon swam out of its hulk.Funnels and masts went by in a whirl.

Good-bye to the man on the sea-legged deck

To the gold gut that sings on his reel

To the bait that stalked out of the sack,For we saw him throw to the swift flood

A girl alive with his hooks through her lips;

All the fishes were rayed in blood,

Said the dwindling ships.Good-bye to chimneys and funnels,

Old wives that spin in the smoke,

He was blind to the eyes of candles

In the praying windows of wavesBut heard his bait buck in the wake

And tussle in a shoal of loves.

Now cast down your rod, for the whole

Of the sea is hilly with whales,She longs among horses and angels,

The rainbow-fish bend in her joys,

Floated the lost cathedral

Chimes of the rocked buoys.Where the anchor rode like a gull

Miles over the moonstruck boat

A squall of birds bellowed and fell,

A cloud blew the rain from its throat;He saw the storm smoke out to kill

With fuming bows and ram of ice,

Fire on starlight, rake Jesu's stream;

And nothing shone on the water's faceBut the oil and bubble of the moon,

Plunging and piercing in his course

The lured fish under the foam

Witnessed with a kiss.Whales in the wake like capes and Alps

Quaked the sick sea and snouted deep,

Deep the great bushed bait with raining lips

Slipped the fins of those humpbacked tonsAnd fled their love in a weaving dip.

Oh, Jericho was falling in their lungs!

She nipped and dived in the nick of love,

Spun on a spout like a long-legged ballTill every beast blared down in a swerve

Till every turtle crushed from his shell

Till every bone in the rushing grave

Rose and crowed and fell!Good luck to the hand on the rod,

There is thunder under its thumbs;

Gold gut is a lightning thread,

His fiery reel sings off its flames,The whirled boat in the burn of his blood

Is crying from nets to knives,

Oh the shearwater birds and their boatsized brood

Oh the bulls of Biscay and their calvesAre making under the green, laid veil

The long-legged beautiful bait their wives.

Break the black news and paint on a sail

Huge weddings in the waves,Over the wakeward-flashing spray

Over the gardens of the floor

Clash out the mounting dolphin's day,

My mast is a bell-spire,Strike and smoothe, for my decks are drums,

Sing through the water-spoken prow

The octopus walking into her limbs

The polar eagle with his tread of snow.From salt-lipped beak to the kick of the stern

Sing how the seal has kissed her dead!

The long, laid minute's bride drifts on

Old in her cruel bed.Over the graveyard in the water

Mountains and galleries beneath

Nightingale and hyena

Rejoicing for that drifting deathSing and howl through sand and anemone

Valley and sahara in a shell,

Oh all the wanting flesh his enemy

Thrown to the sea in the shell of a girlIs old as water and plain as an eel;

Always good-bye to the long-legged bread

Scattered in the paths of his heels

For the salty birds fluttered and fedAnd the tall grains foamed in their bills;

Always good-bye to the fires of the face,

For the crab-backed dead on the sea-bed rose

And scuttled over her eyes,The blind, clawed stare is cold as sleet.

The tempter under the eyelid

Who shows to the selves asleep

Mast-high moon-white women nakedWalking in wishes and lovely for shame

Is dumb and gone with his flame of brides.

Susannah's drowned in the bearded stream

And no-one stirs at Sheba's sideBut the hungry kings of the tides;

Sin who had a woman's shape

Sleeps till Silence blows on a cloud

And all the lifted waters walk and leap.Lucifer that bird's dropping

Out of the sides of the north

Has melted away and is lost

Is always lost in her vaulted breath,Venus lies star-struck in her wound

And the sensual ruins make

Seasons over the liquid world,

White springs in the dark.Always good-bye, cried the voices through the shell,

Good-bye always, for the flesh is cast

And the fisherman winds his reel

With no more desire than a ghost.Always good luck, praised the finned in the feather

Bird after dark and the laughing fish

As the sails drank up the hail of thunder

And the long-tailed lightning lit his catch.The boat swims into the six-year weather,

A wind throws a shadow and it freezes fast.

See what the gold gut drags from under

Mountains and galleries to the crest!See what clings to hair and skull

As the boat skims on with drinking wings!

The statues of great rain stand still,

And the flakes fall like hills.Sing and strike his heavy haul

Toppling up the boatside in a snow of light!

His decks are drenched with miracles.

Oh miracle of fishes! The long dead bite!Out of the urn a size of a man

Out of the room the weight of his trouble

Out of the house that holds a town

In the continent of a fossilOne by one in dust and shawl,

Dry as echoes and insect-faced,

His fathers cling to the hand of the girl

And the dead hand leads the past,Leads them as children and as air

On to the blindly tossing tops;

The centuries throw back their hair

And the old men sing from newborn lips:
Related content
Comments: 48

JohnlockedDancer [2018-10-21 20:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Whoah! I don’t wanna swim in those waters
Fantastic job!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

bdoroszko [2011-05-13 12:35:59 +0000 UTC]

wow like it a lot

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to bdoroszko [2011-05-14 09:58:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Killer-Sweet [2010-11-27 19:05:07 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!


πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to Killer-Sweet [2010-11-28 13:27:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

yulia-hochulia [2010-07-19 13:57:10 +0000 UTC]

my favourite fishes))

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to yulia-hochulia [2010-07-19 14:23:32 +0000 UTC]

hehe

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Krokuta [2010-05-19 06:29:31 +0000 UTC]

too cool!!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to Krokuta [2010-05-19 16:34:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

RollingCherry [2010-05-18 12:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice expressions,
and shapes.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to RollingCherry [2010-05-18 18:14:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

SunnyWave [2010-05-04 14:42:34 +0000 UTC]

it's amazing!!!! ^O^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to SunnyWave [2010-05-04 18:25:59 +0000 UTC]

thankyou very much

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

baby-snakes [2010-05-04 07:12:38 +0000 UTC]

wow, beautiful poem and great drawing. I'm so glad I got to read the poem, it really goes with it.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to baby-snakes [2010-05-04 14:22:02 +0000 UTC]

did you read the whole poem? coz I think that deserves a medal naw I love the poem too, thanks for the nice comment it's really appreciated

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

baby-snakes In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-05-04 18:30:33 +0000 UTC]

of course I read the whole poem! it was a fantastic poem! I love love love wonderful poetry and always appreciate when people share their inspirations like that.... it's good to have it around to remind people what writing really can be like. and it helps very much to understand the picture. I thoroughly enjoyed it ^^ (thanks for my medal too!)

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to baby-snakes [2010-05-04 19:28:08 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks, it's nice to know some people still appreciate literature

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

sinister101art [2010-05-04 00:21:40 +0000 UTC]

This is magnificent! The detail on the fish is impressive but the concept and composition even more so. I am very interested in the way you have drawn the skin - it literally sags off the screen.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to sinister101art [2010-05-04 14:25:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much It's quite frustrating coz I did this piece in about an hour, and for the past week I've been working on a detailed drawing for the poem as a final piece. I don't think I like it as much lol

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

sinister101art In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-05-05 05:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Well the drawing is fantastic.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to sinister101art [2010-05-05 11:06:52 +0000 UTC]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

aspiring-x [2010-05-03 01:12:08 +0000 UTC]

i think this just made me scared of fishing...
really though, awesome work. not only is it imaginative and original, it is executed with great skill. very impressed here.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to aspiring-x [2010-05-03 09:52:52 +0000 UTC]

wow thank you very much!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

aspiring-x In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-05-03 11:36:48 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

HechiceraRip [2010-05-02 17:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work! =^^=

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to HechiceraRip [2010-05-02 18:08:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

HechiceraRip In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-05-03 09:52:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome =^^=

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Nookslider [2010-05-02 01:15:22 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to Nookslider [2010-05-02 09:58:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Nookslider In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-05-02 17:17:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

edzik [2010-05-01 14:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic work!!! I love inking, I love shadows just... all is perfect Wish I do somethin as good-lookin!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to edzik [2010-05-01 15:19:03 +0000 UTC]

wow thankyou very much!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

ChrisOzFulton [2010-04-30 20:15:16 +0000 UTC]

nice!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to ChrisOzFulton [2010-04-30 20:18:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

ChrisOzFulton In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-04-30 20:19:50 +0000 UTC]

no prob. wow that's really amazing!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to ChrisOzFulton [2010-04-30 20:22:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you! and thanks for the faves and the watch

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

ChrisOzFulton In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-04-30 20:25:05 +0000 UTC]

my privalge! and thnx for faving my Xeno!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to ChrisOzFulton [2010-04-30 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome, it's amazing!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

ChrisOzFulton In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-04-30 20:31:38 +0000 UTC]

took a long time lol

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to ChrisOzFulton [2010-04-30 20:35:54 +0000 UTC]

I can tell, the subtle lines and shading are superb

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

ChrisOzFulton In reply to Lily-of-Life [2010-04-30 20:38:14 +0000 UTC]

i did it all with a 6h and a .5 mech pencil. it was a beating but i'm real happy with it, glad you like it.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to ChrisOzFulton [2010-04-30 20:41:12 +0000 UTC]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

snowtool [2010-04-30 05:29:34 +0000 UTC]

That picture is fuckin creepy! ...But AWESOME. I love it. As for the visual poem...I could hardly make it half way through. I was getting very scrambled images. hahaha
I'm not good at understanding "hard-core" poetry. >.O

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to snowtool [2010-04-30 16:50:09 +0000 UTC]

lol neither am I, lets face it is a looooong poem.
but thank you!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

SoulLostAtSea [2010-04-29 20:31:38 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, amazing, amazing!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to SoulLostAtSea [2010-04-29 21:33:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

DragonChuu [2010-04-29 18:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Very good. Love how you use the light and shadow here.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Lily-of-Life In reply to DragonChuu [2010-04-29 19:00:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0