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Description Ignore the crappy smog/smoke explosion filtering...8D

12 and 10 are running trying to escape the machines, 12 notices that 10 seems very faint, distracted, she doesn't watch where they're running and they run straight into a bomb. The explosion seperates them both.

Based on a scene wrote here: 9: Genesis   
Prologue   
 The Scientist scanned over his blueprints one more time.   
 "10 can only mean perfection," he thought. "Even though . . . no such living thing holds a mere piece of it . . ."   
                His thoughts were silent as he used a screwdriver to tighten the rag doll's eyes. Then, delicately, he used a pen to write "10" on the doll's back.  
 
                "Except one . . . perfect . . ."  & 10 and 12 did know each other briefly.

10 (c)

12 (c)
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Comments: 13

lonesome-wolf-child [2010-06-13 12:03:14 +0000 UTC]

10 without her scarfffff. Looks so....different. 8BBB HAHAHAHA And 12 doesn't have her ribbons on her hands/arms and shtuff and shtuff. just the one wrapped around her head. 8B I love how you've drawn the 4th panel; how 10 and 12 are tossed away by the bomb's explosion. It looks really good. I dunno why but I also love the next to the last panel, 10 all...hurt and trying to snap out of it and shtuff. I dunno why but okies. 8B;; Loveleh work Chloe, as always. ~_~

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Kerolunatica [2010-03-29 06:57:21 +0000 UTC]

ouch... that must hurt :/

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DarkBallerinaQueen [2010-03-28 05:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Woo! I really do love your coloring, it's so soft and ideal.
I guess when I was writing the first chapter, I felt 10 and 12 COULD have a sisterly relationship-kind-of-thing. They both have such different POVs in the comic, different fates; I suppose I wanted to have them together for a while. Yay for characterization! XD
Can't wait for the next page!

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KRRouse [2010-03-27 23:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh, this isn't going to end well. Poor 10. She looks so cute even without her scarf and heart patch. And I like that you showed her and 12's relationship early here. It gives a nice first impression of 12 as that big sister figure, so her attitude doesn't make her unlikeable throughout the rest of the story. And I like the smoking bomb effects! You can tell the gals are having trouble seeing each other.
Awesome, AWESOME page!

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Toxicated-kisame52 [2010-03-27 22:07:16 +0000 UTC]

nues!!
poor 10 and 12 D:
wonderful effects though 8D

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ElitaTheBlackCat [2010-03-27 16:44:18 +0000 UTC]

oh noes!!!!

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ReaderoftheBooks [2010-03-27 15:43:06 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOO 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Queenie7 [2010-03-27 04:44:09 +0000 UTC]

CLIFFHANGER!!!!

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LoneWolf98 [2010-03-27 03:03:08 +0000 UTC]

nuuuuu 10! 12!! TT^TT

wonderfully done, as usual! excellent job!

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Tifa-the-Strange [2010-03-27 02:49:58 +0000 UTC]

;-;
Poor 12 and 10.

*grabs them and takes them off*
I'LL PROTECT YOU!!!! o-o

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Kaod-Mistress [2010-03-27 02:31:58 +0000 UTC]

lol I thought that was 7 at first glance. 10 looked so different in the beginning...

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hace1epues [2010-03-27 02:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Powwwwwwwwww!

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meg15warrior [2010-03-27 02:16:17 +0000 UTC]

poor 10. its so hard for her to see all this darkness , and blood. this is getting god. i cant wait to see what happens next. great job.

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