Air-02 [2007-07-25 19:15:22 +0000 UTC]
no man the black lines are great. i personally didnt like the previous few pieces of yours, however this pieces evolves. the blacks lines at a detial that dtracts and opens new area. keep going =]
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blindsundays [2007-07-15 04:56:27 +0000 UTC]
I like the direction that this is going towards, but it's not quite there. There is a nice, ethereal quality to this piece ( and to many of your 'composition' collages ), but the black lines in the middle and bottom of the right side seem too dense to work cohesively with the rest. I really enjoy the way that the different papers keep this from being too monochromatic and add a tension between the textures.
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