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Published: 2007-07-11 11:34:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description ... maybe the black lines are not yet really good...
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Comments: 4

Air-02 [2007-07-25 19:15:22 +0000 UTC]

no man the black lines are great. i personally didnt like the previous few pieces of yours, however this pieces evolves. the blacks lines at a detial that dtracts and opens new area. keep going =]

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lilzipo In reply to Air-02 [2007-07-26 08:31:28 +0000 UTC]

well i still dont like the black lines

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blindsundays [2007-07-15 04:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I like the direction that this is going towards, but it's not quite there. There is a nice, ethereal quality to this piece ( and to many of your 'composition' collages ), but the black lines in the middle and bottom of the right side seem too dense to work cohesively with the rest. I really enjoy the way that the different papers keep this from being too monochromatic and add a tension between the textures.

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lilzipo In reply to blindsundays [2007-07-15 08:52:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot for your comment, i really appreciate it! it's very usefull

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