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Published: 2014-09-14 17:51:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 869; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 2
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It's getting so cold herePeople I'd like a critique...not " aw it's so awesome" even if I appreciate these
no I want you to tll me what to improve in my coloring
The trees? The color palette??
OF COURSE, this is just practice, but I want to become better at coloring like, as fast as I can. o=o
Thanks
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oh jeez
umm lets see
the color blending is just amazing , the texture of the whole thing is great i really like how you blended the trees and its leaves thought when it snows the sky would be a dark greyish with blue but everything is just fantastic you have improve so greatly i can't tell you how amazing you've come this far to become a great artist and i've never critique before but i really do love how the whole thing came together. 8D heeeeee
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You know, I have neutral opinions, but I'd like to step in to give my two sense.
For most people saying the colors should be more relaxant to winter, I can agree to some level. But this is called "First Snow." It all depends on what kind of environment you are trying to create, but a first day of snow would look similarly like this to me. Though darkening the bark of the tree would be a lovely way to show the trees becoming dorment. The sky could use a tint of grey and maybe have an effect of leaves falling from trees since the colder seasons are moving in. Also the leaves could be more orange or brownish.
Though that's just by nature.
Maybe you're trying to show a different environment from our world.
Also, you live a bit far off from me, so where you live is much different perhaps.
I dont know.
I've never critiqued anyone before. ^^"
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I love the color palette, it gives it a warm look
but because it's snowing, maybe it should have 'cold' colors like blue.
I also like the glowy look on kagura, it really looks like she's looking at the sun, but again, it's snowing XD
but the shading looks beautiful always looking forward to your art mam
Take your time on improving, no need to rush
because it's still very inspirational to me no matter what
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The sky
It should be more greyish
Because when it snows DAT DAMN SKY is grey.
LoOk At ThE SkY WhEn It SnOwS
Also, the trees are too brown. A normal tree is grey, browish grey, or white. Never that brown.
The shading on Kagura annoys me a tiny bit, Idk where the light is coming from...
So basically it's too colorful to be a snowy background
Biotch it's winter already and we haven't had any autumn yet CaLm DoWn
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The textures all around look great, and I really like this piece, but one small thing I suggest is giving more of n impression of actual winter, such as a cloudy sky, colder colors, ect, as well as some more shading on the left side of Kagura's body. Other than that, it looks great!
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The color palette is really nice, though I think you could have made the tree's colors colder so you could add some blue/purple to the sky, unless it's supposed to be early morning, where you could have added some pink so the sky didn't seem like the same colors as the trees. You did a nice job with coloring Kagura though, all in all the picture looks quite nice, just the color of the sky bugs me.
Also, make sure to take your time with testing color theory and becoming good at coloring, I know you want to get better fast, but just don't rush. vuv
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