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Published: 2008-08-06 01:45:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 2392; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 467
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Description One of my older dragons Celestial [link] in a new and improved design.
Background took me forever.
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Comments: 36

RayCrystal [2010-08-15 14:21:48 +0000 UTC]

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My first critique, yay!
Anyway, this is a quite interesting drawing. I would like to start from the background, simply, I love it! It's great that you put the star effect for the dragon's wings aswell, and makes this piece look so much better.

The dragon body looks like you could make it a little better, since especially the tail has some mistakes. The pose is great, but the tip of the tail is thicker than the part little before it.. It's little disturbing.
Also, the edges are sometimes blurry and sometimes sharp, that is ok but the sharp edges also seem to be.. eh you know, they look a bit unfinished. They could use a little smudge or something.
The dragon's "hair" thing is a really cool addition!
I just love to stare at this because of the colors e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/> It just looks so magical and interesting and has a maximum impact.

So basically, it's an amazing artwork, with some small flaws, and even though this work is kinda old now, you did a great job!

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sewreel [2009-04-14 23:15:25 +0000 UTC]

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I greatly enjoy this peice, not only because I am a great fan of the artists' visionary talents and enjoy space peices, but also because it is beautiful to the senses and is quite the eye catcher.

The effects in this peice are not only numerous, but well-placed for the maximum effectiveness. The effect of the dragon appearing to disappear into the emptiness of space give great insight to its power. Including stars on its wings and body also add to this feeling. And quite the contrast of its colors!; The bright gold eyes peering out of darkness and cool colors gives a great effect.

The background is simply amazing, giving nice movement throught out the peice that gives contrasting movement to the dragon. The only thing I find wrong here is the acute absence within the dark areas away from the starfield. Throught out space there is stars, not usually lacking in one area.

My last grievance is the neatness of the dragon's body... It appears uneven, and unfortunately I see that quite often in this artist's work. X3; It might just be my OCD kicking in, but if it is the effect you are going for, ignore me.

Overall, amazing peice and one I will continue to enjoy X3

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MindFreakBuriedALive [2012-03-30 21:21:28 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL!!!

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wyvern333 [2012-03-06 15:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Really really awesome

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SpacialVortex [2011-07-22 16:14:35 +0000 UTC]

beautiful character here

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Silver-StarFire [2011-07-11 20:09:41 +0000 UTC]

there are so many shingy6 things there!

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loveforRuka [2010-04-08 17:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Looks like your idea was well liked, there's a dragon on dragoncave.net that looks very similar, but DA won't let me post the link.

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LineArtDragon-Moved In reply to loveforRuka [2010-04-08 19:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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loveforRuka In reply to LineArtDragon-Moved [2010-04-08 19:54:44 +0000 UTC]

If you read my comment, I said YOUR idea was well liked. Not that you stole it from someone else. I was paying you a compliment... heaven forbid.
[link]

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LineArtDragon-Moved In reply to loveforRuka [2010-04-08 20:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh gesh, I'm sorry. >.< It's been a really bad day for me and I misread your comment. I am really sorry.

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loveforRuka In reply to LineArtDragon-Moved [2010-04-08 20:21:54 +0000 UTC]

It's alright I really hope your day gets better! I think it would be great if they took your idea, what a compliment! Your idea was wonderful and beautiful

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Sergeant-McFluffers [2010-04-04 03:15:51 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome and pretty! Lovely colors!

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noctummoonvampire [2009-11-28 03:08:42 +0000 UTC]

This is just plain awesome! great job!

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NightmaresLover [2009-11-26 23:18:37 +0000 UTC]

beautiful job C: its so shiny it makes my eyes happy.

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energizerbunnie [2008-12-22 02:50:06 +0000 UTC]

thats incredible you are ery talented, and i guess i know you frm 2007 b/c i just got my DA account back and i saw you were watching me so I just wanted to say i'm back

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FiliaFlammae [2008-10-17 03:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Double-u. Oh. Double-u.

WOW.

I love it! The background is stunning, especially the way it gets filtered through the wings. Great job!

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LineArtDragon-Moved In reply to FiliaFlammae [2008-10-25 02:11:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it, and yeah I love the wings myself took ages to do but was oh so worth it

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Que-ink [2008-08-17 04:13:53 +0000 UTC]

Very nice ^ ^

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BladeEdgeRave [2008-08-07 23:05:19 +0000 UTC]

This is really really good beb. I love the background and the dragon. It looks really really good but the tail and wings look a tad bit on the strange side. Other than that, I like it alot.

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jack07 [2008-08-07 03:54:18 +0000 UTC]

wow


just wow

thats amazing

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Miliki [2008-08-07 01:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Now that... I am speechless... Wow...

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dragonblossoms [2008-08-06 22:16:35 +0000 UTC]


Wow, very elegant and beautiful!

The colours and designs of all the stars are magnificent. C:

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Xannerz [2008-08-06 20:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! <3

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AngelicEmpyress [2008-08-06 16:21:01 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!! its Celestial!!! Youve done WONDERS with her! Beautiful...beautiful!

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broken19 [2008-08-06 15:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Great pic! Was this done on the computer or what?

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Sleyf [2008-08-06 14:54:27 +0000 UTC]

That's brilliant! I love how you did the sparkling stardust effect

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orcafreak [2008-08-06 13:52:06 +0000 UTC]

Amazing pic. It looks so beautiful and detailed. I really like the effects of the background.

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DDR-Maniac [2008-08-06 13:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is really awesome. The effects in the background are amazing.

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mastermastel [2008-08-06 01:58:55 +0000 UTC]

I take a sudden, eye widening liking to this piece of wonderous art. its a Masterpiece! Huge difference btw. *eye still widened from looking at it*

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LineArtDragon-Moved In reply to mastermastel [2008-08-06 02:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it, this picture was a grand total of 37 layers... my brain hurts >.<

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mastermastel In reply to LineArtDragon-Moved [2008-08-06 02:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Wheres the tylenol!?! *looks around* Hehe. i never use layers. :3

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msklystron [2008-08-06 01:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done! This dragon has found it's treasure -- Earth. I too like the way his hind quarters disappear in the distance.

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LineArtDragon-Moved In reply to msklystron [2008-08-06 02:20:28 +0000 UTC]

It looked even better in my mind but I have an issue with shaky hands and couldn't get the detail quite how I wanted to.

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msklystron In reply to LineArtDragon-Moved [2008-08-06 02:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Aye we all suffer from the affliction of the shakey hands.

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TheLonelyQueen [2008-08-06 01:48:27 +0000 UTC]

OMFG!! This is beautiful D8 the tail starts out thick and thin and then thin and ends with going thin... making it looks slightly strange.. but other than that.. this is awesome!

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LineArtDragon-Moved In reply to TheLonelyQueen [2008-08-06 02:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it does look weird, sadly I have an issue with really shaky hands and on bad days stuff like that gets really out of whack. Glad you like it

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Phoenician-Roses [2008-08-06 01:47:24 +0000 UTC]

very cool, i love how the dragon is obvious, but some parts of him fade into the background.

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