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xscapejnrjackson [2004-03-19 03:56:23 +0000 UTC]

wHEEE! ^_^ Thank you! It looks great! Aw, it looks so cute! I really like how you did the tail!
And awesome, colouring, too! ^_^

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TalGirl [2004-03-19 02:45:34 +0000 UTC]

-My comments: Very cute, your style of coloring is nice to look at. You've really got some talent, and at such a young age too! Only one year older than me and you're already doing great. The eye's a bit queer, and you could do better on proportions and lineart, I'm sure. But all in all, I like your style. The teal area near the tail-fin looks good. Well, keep up the good work!

-A few tips: I really like how you drew the lower half of the body. The tail-fin, though, kind of attracts my attention. Perhaps you should spread the two halves apart farther, it may look better. The legs are nicely colored, yes, but it may not be the best way for them to be bent. I suggest the upper part of his/ her legs to be more pointing down; and at the elbowpoint where it changes to the lower area should be extended more diagonally, oh say... an 80 degree angle at the elbow or something around there? I think you have a few problems with drawing horse heads- of course, it could be just part of your style. I used to draw Peophins' heads like that all the time. I'd say I haven't really adapted a totally realistic form yet, but I'm getting there. I'm starting to ramble about myself. Sorry. I think you may want to study horse anatomy- very useful in my opinion. Look at pictures of horses if you want. Their heads are not quite as square-edged, and the cheek should extend to the back of the neck, I think. I do hope my tips are helpful, sometimes I tend to fall asleep when I write comments. ( And therefore they get kinda sloppy and confusing. ) These were just some friendly suggestions on ways to improve your art and make it the best it can be! Good luck to you!

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bluedragonfire [2004-03-18 11:58:15 +0000 UTC]

cute

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